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14.01.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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My devilish mausoleum painted with bloodcurdling remains Cobweb gives spine-tingling in mummified body Tonyx The knowledge of necromancy - unknown X ? Macabre beasts, tyrannize a world of exorcism Anti depressants ! The galaxy grows cold and poor GoRe, gorE ... GoOOOre - destroy the planet Haunted xanadu didilduX

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/21/2025 1:39:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I had to do a little research to find out what Vogon poetry is. I guess I am somewhat uneducated and naive in some areas. You've done a great job here and you could get a job doing this if you wanted...but if I know you at all, I'd say this is a one off. Good for you though to try this out. I give you a lot of credit and send many smiles your way!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/17/2025 7:11:00 AM

Eery and ogreish...don't want to walk through that mess! Yikes! Good one Anne-Lise. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2025 7:31:00 AM

:))) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 1/16/2025 5:44:00 AM

Dear anne lise! Such a thought provoking and deep take on this type of poetry: the world seems scary with so many health challenges and more, anti depressants too arent helpful enough to endure the goriness of some things in life! Pleasure reading you always! Im sure this will be a winner! Best wishes for the contest.

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/16/2025 1:59:00 AM

a scary world, for me, nicely done and inspiring, thanks anne lise

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/16/2025 1:49:00 AM

Brilliantly crazy poem I'm not sure I would be able to write one. Best for a win. Hugs.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 1/15/2025 10:46:00 PM

A nightmarish landscape,enjoyed reading.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/15/2025 8:39:00 PM

Your poem is spooky and fun, Anne-Lise! I loved the ending. Best of wishes for the contest. hugs :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/15/2025 5:43:00 PM

Blood curdling...love it! Great imagery. Unsettling to say the least.

Jay Narain

Date: 1/15/2025 10:52:00 AM

A great Vogon poem. Sure winner in nthe contest.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2025 9:34:00 AM

Never heard of this type of poetry quite blood curdling. I don't think i could do it but yours seems to have whatever it takes to send chills down the spine, similar to a Halloween scary tale . Very well crafted and created though Anne Lise. Hugs and blessings

John Read

Date: 1/15/2025 8:35:00 AM

Hi Anne I enjoyed reading your Vogon contest poem, hopefully a sure fire winner. xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2025 8:40:00 AM

- Thank you, John :) - A strange poem form... I don't know if it's done the way it's supposed to be done :))) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/14/2025 8:32:00 PM

Your poem describes the beauty of strange. Good luck with the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2025 1:49:00 AM

- A poem full of nonsense, Hilda ... did it for the contest, a bit of fun to write it... but not a form I'd use in the future :))) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2025 1:52:00 PM

You rose well to the challenge of the contest theme Anne Lise, must invest in a vogan dictionary so I can understand it lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2025 1:42:00 AM

- I would like a Norwegian translation so I could understand it myself, Tom :))) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/14/2025 1:29:00 PM

You did well for this kind of poetry! Love the screaming of: GoRe, gorE ... GoOOOre - destroy the planet… a rip roaring nonplause ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2025 1:44:00 AM

- Thank you, Kim :) - My first Vogon Poetry and certainly my last :))) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2025 12:39:00 PM

I really don't understand what this kind of poetry expects from us, but I think your chance for a win is as good as the next guy's!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2025 12:42:00 PM

:))) ... thank you, Andrea :) ... :))) - hugs