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- XertZ -

                             My devilish mausoleum painted
                                with bloodcurdling remains
                               Cobweb gives spine-tingling
                                     in mummified body
                                              Tonyx
                             The knowledge of necromancy
                                         - unknown X ?

                                 Macabre beasts, tyrannize
                                      a world of exorcism
                                       Anti depressants ! 
                             The galaxy grows cold and poor
                                  GoRe, gorE ... GoOOOre
                                      - destroy the planet
                                  Haunted xanadu didilduX

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2025

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Duke Beaufort Date: 1/21/2025 1:39:00 PM Anne-Lise, I had to do a little research to find out what Vogon poetry is. I guess I am somewhat uneducated and naive in some areas. You've done a great job here and you could get a job doing this if you wanted...but if I know you at all, I'd say this is a one off. Good for you though to try this out. I give you a lot of credit and send many smiles your way! Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/17/2025 7:11:00 AM Eery and ogreish...don't want to walk through that mess! Yikes! Good one Anne-Lise. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/17/2025 7:31:00 AM :))) - hugs

Ink Empress Date: 1/16/2025 5:44:00 AM Dear anne lise! Such a thought provoking and deep take on this type of poetry: the world seems scary with so many health challenges and more, anti depressants too arent helpful enough to endure the goriness of some things in life! Pleasure reading you always! Im sure this will be a winner! Best wishes for the contest. Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 1/16/2025 1:59:00 AM a scary world, for me, nicely done and inspiring, thanks anne lise Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/16/2025 1:49:00 AM Brilliantly crazy poem I'm not sure I would be able to write one. Best for a win. Hugs. Login to Reply

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh Date: 1/15/2025 10:46:00 PM A nightmarish landscape,enjoyed reading. Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 1/15/2025 8:39:00 PM Your poem is spooky and fun, Anne-Lise! I loved the ending. Best of wishes for the contest. hugs :) Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 1/15/2025 5:43:00 PM Blood curdling...love it! Great imagery. Unsettling to say the least. Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 1/15/2025 10:52:00 AM A great Vogon poem. Sure winner in nthe contest. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/15/2025 9:34:00 AM Never heard of this type of poetry quite blood curdling. I don't think i could do it but yours seems to have whatever it takes to send chills down the spine, similar to a Halloween scary tale . Very well crafted and created though Anne Lise. Hugs and blessings Login to Reply

John Read Date: 1/15/2025 8:35:00 AM Hi Anne I enjoyed reading your Vogon contest poem, hopefully a sure fire winner. xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2025 8:40:00 AM - Thank you, John :) - A strange poem form... I don't know if it's done the way it's supposed to be done :))) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/14/2025 8:32:00 PM Your poem describes the beauty of strange. Good luck with the contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2025 1:49:00 AM - A poem full of nonsense, Hilda ... did it for the contest, a bit of fun to write it... but not a form I'd use in the future :))) - hugs

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/14/2025 1:52:00 PM You rose well to the challenge of the contest theme Anne Lise, must invest in a vogan dictionary so I can understand it lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2025 1:42:00 AM - I would like a Norwegian translation so I could understand it myself, Tom :))) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/14/2025 1:29:00 PM You did well for this kind of poetry! Love the screaming of: GoRe, gorE ... GoOOOre - destroy the planet… a rip roaring nonplause ;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2025 1:44:00 AM - Thank you, Kim :) - My first Vogon Poetry and certainly my last :))) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/14/2025 12:39:00 PM I really don't understand what this kind of poetry expects from us, but I think your chance for a win is as good as the next guy's! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2025 12:42:00 PM :))) ... thank you, Andrea :) ... :))) - hugs