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"Battle not with monsters, lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you." - Friedrich Nietzsche

The majestic spirit of the mountain made your life a singing stream On azure blue days, I drank of your freshness - with slow wingbeats, the power of death defeated 27/07/2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Four Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st place in the contest

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Date: 7/31/2020 12:29:00 PM
WoW!Anne-Lise, Your content accompanied with your image said a lot. I found it sad yet well written . Congratulations on your 1st place win. Enjoy the rest of your day and have a great weekend - Alexis
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Date: 7/29/2020 5:15:00 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me and I love your image too _Constance
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love both your poem and picture. Enjoy your win and day with a hug....................
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Date: 7/29/2020 1:35:00 PM
oh I see it now!! right there in front of me. this time I am going through the list to catch the winners I have not seen yet!
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Date: 7/29/2020 11:28:00 AM
A massive little poem, overflowing. Wonderful write, congratulations for your top win! xomo
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Date: 7/28/2020 6:50:00 PM
Lovely, Sunshine. Congrats on your much deserved win.
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:52:00 AM
- Many thanks Line, for visit and the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 5:43:00 PM
Congrats for your win. I don't know your placement but I bet Dear Heart loved this.
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:51:00 AM
- My placement in the contest is written under the poem, Andrea - Thanks for the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 3:19:00 PM
Well done, Sunshine Smile. I imagine your poem refers to water, as it tends to renew in similar form
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:48:00 AM
- (Sigrid is an old Norwegian name :) - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Sigrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 2:33:00 PM
Very beautiful and well written. Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:47:00 AM
- Mark, many thanks for the visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 2:04:00 PM
four lines of wonderful uplifting poetry Anne-Lise many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:46:00 AM
- Many thanks for the visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 1:21:00 PM
I love how your powerful muse uplifts my spirit Anne! This is a lovely one. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:46:00 AM
- Many thanks Aditi, for the visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 10:08:00 AM
The power of death defeated.~Beautiful lines Anne mam:-) Congratulations on your top win. Keep inspiring:-)Take care.
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Date: 7/28/2020 12:25:00 PM
- Deepa, many thanks for visit and the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 9:43:00 AM
Many times I believe a guardian angel has saved my life, Anne-Lise. Wonderful thoughts put into glorious poetry. Thank you, and congratulations. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 7/28/2020 12:24:00 PM
- I believe in guardian angel, John :) - Many thanks for the visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 8:32:00 AM
Congrats Anne-lise
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Date: 7/28/2020 8:36:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 8:24:00 AM
I knew this would be a top winner, Sunshine. Big congrats! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 7/28/2020 8:35:00 AM
- You have eyes for a winning poem, dear Carolyn ... thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 6:41:00 AM
Back with congrats Anne-Lise on your first place win.
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Date: 7/28/2020 6:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for the congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 5:49:00 AM
Majestic lines dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:52:00 AM
- Thank you very much, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 5:10:00 AM
Majestic Poem. Congrats to win First Place Blessing
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:55:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit and the congratulations, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 4:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your lines being honored. They are genuinely worthy, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:57:00 AM
- Jenna, many thanks for visit and the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 3:55:00 AM
Excellent Anne-Lise, congrats. :)
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:56:00 AM
- Many thanks for visit and the congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 3:39:00 AM
Well done Anne-Lise. Loved the pic. It really brings out the meaning of the poem. Congrats on a well deserved win with this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:57:00 AM
- Many thanks Judy, for visit and the congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 3:31:00 AM
Knew this would do well Anne, and it did, congratulations on your top win. Tom
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:53:00 AM
... "and it did" !!! :))) - Many thanks for the congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/28/2020 1:22:00 AM
Wonderful poetry, good luck in contest.
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:51:00 AM
- Thank you very much, my friend Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2020 1:47:00 PM
There's magical powers in your words...Nice imagery
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:50:00 AM
- Thank you very much Arturo, for your comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2020 1:47:00 PM
So glad the power of death was defeated. Wonderful piece with a beautiful illustration. Exceptional entry Anne-Lise...
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Date: 7/28/2020 5:46:00 AM
- A topic many write about for this contest ... difficult for many to put words to death, many thanks for your comments Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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