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13.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Sunsets Poetry Contest
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         Embellished by the artist's
         softest marten hairbrush
         unfolds creatively on the canvas
         The view that takes your breath away
         when the evening sun is
         curved on the edge of the earth
         - in the magic hour
         Nature's beauty is on full display

         It is something exceptional
         at every sunset
         Notice how the heavens
         and the sea is changing
         From yellow, orange and pink
         - to purple and intense red
         Gracefully and powerful
         Full of wonder I breathed deeply in silence
         observes and appreciates the work of art

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Date: 9/16/2023 1:38:00 AM
Your imagery is great. I love sunsets. I could read this poem over and over again. Hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/16/2023 1:06:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments on my poem, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 9/14/2023 6:59:00 PM
B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.
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Date: 9/14/2023 11:46:00 PM
- Thanks, U.S. :) - hugs
Date: 9/14/2023 10:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem with nice imagery.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 11:53:00 AM
- Many thanks for reading and your comment, Jay :) - hugs
Date: 9/14/2023 7:38:00 AM
A beautiful sunset poem this is.. Such delectable aura it creates and I too believe that there's something magical about sunsets.. It makes me believe in fairytales.. And as this poem, it hued different shades of delight on the canvas of my heart.. Flowing like the most beautiful sceneries this poem is like a painting.. Absolutely loved reading this - sending hugs :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 11:53:00 AM
- I often "read" this fairy tale ... the most beautiful fairy tale I know, Hiya :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments on my poem :) - hugs
Date: 9/14/2023 7:14:00 AM
This is delightful and such stunning imagery - awesome Anne-Lise! :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 11:49:00 AM
- Thank you for reading and leaving your lovely comment, Linda :) - hugs
Date: 9/14/2023 1:20:00 AM
This poem is work of art too, made me sigh, as its just like watching a beautiful sunset, with all those vibrant colors so delicately splashed. Loved it
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 5:30:00 AM
- Every sunset gives me a WOOW... incredibly beautiful... thank you for reading and leaving your lovely comment, Ink :) - hugs
Date: 9/14/2023 12:06:00 AM
Wow! Blows my mind away!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 5:27:00 AM
- I love this view... must have photographed it many hundreds of times... too bad I can't post my private photos - Thanks, Jo :) - hugs
Date: 9/13/2023 11:15:00 PM
The serenity of your words as the sun gently slips away, and changes the colors as it goes. Anne -Lise, a lovely poem. Well done.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 5:24:00 AM
- S.V., thank you for enjoying the sunset with me :) - hugs
Date: 9/13/2023 10:52:00 PM
Love this dear Anne, love your imaginative creative mind. You describe the evening sunset magic so beautifully. Hugs...~ Ani
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 5:23:00 AM
- Come sit with me on my terrace one evening, Ani ... you would experience magic in reality ... thank you very much :) - hugs
Date: 9/13/2023 8:44:00 PM
The day's final, magnificent moments are splendidly captured in both poem and picture, Anne-Lise. A beautiful work! :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 5:21:00 AM
- This is my view ... I would like to share it with you ... many thanks, Evelyn :) - hugs
Date: 9/13/2023 8:29:00 PM
God is a wonderful artist to give us so much of his artwork. Your poem is just as wonderful the photo your pic is gorgeous enjoyed reading.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 5:19:00 AM
- A beautiful sight ... impresses me every time, Eve - Many thanks :) - hugs
Date: 9/13/2023 6:22:00 PM
There is nothing more mesmerizing than a sunset... 'when the evening sun is curved on the edge of the earth'. Brilliant poem my friend.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2023 5:17:00 AM
- It couldn't be more beautiful... sometimes my whole living room is colored by the sunset... I live right next to the sea, Jerry :) - hugs
Date: 9/13/2023 2:11:00 PM
Excellent read! Good art should do that: ("Notice how the heavens and the sea is changing From yellow, orange and pink") live and evolve in the viewers mind and heart. Why I can look at the same master works over and over, always seeming like the first time.
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Date: 9/14/2023 5:14:00 AM
- I enjoy this view from my window, Joe ... the sun setting into the sea ... unique every time ... :) - hugs
Date: 9/13/2023 2:09:00 PM
Beautiful descriptions, Anne-Lise--when the evening sun is curved on the edge of the earth- in the magic hour Nature's beauty is on full display---lovely!
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Date: 9/14/2023 5:11:00 AM
- Thank you for enjoying the sunset with me, Vijay :) - hugs
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