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- When the Snow Melts -

When nature throws away the winter's shackles
Discovered in the garden or the woods
Even the audible perception
The stiffest coldest long winter
After discovering it
The sun's glorious beams
The first small flowers
Pure happiness
Celebrate 
New nests
Proof












29/03/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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A MELTING SNOWBALL - Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
3rd place in the contest

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2018

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Vladislav Raven Date: 12/24/2018 10:18:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, such a wonderful write from your pen. This is such a soft, beautiful write. When the snow melts, the proof shows its beautiful little head. After the snow melts, beauty does lift its head. A fave. Have a wonderful Christmas Anne-Lise. hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/26/2018 8:29:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and fave on my little spring poem, my firend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley Date: 4/28/2018 8:36:00 AM LOVE THE EXQUISITE BEAUTY OF YOUR-- PROOF.. From first first to last word, your poetic talents shine bright.. A fav.... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/28/2018 12:46:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit, fav. and comment, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry Date: 4/19/2018 11:02:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/19/2018 11:09:00 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 4/17/2018 7:52:00 PM Beautiful verse , Sunshine, congratulations on your win .. Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/18/2018 2:26:00 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight Date: 4/17/2018 7:42:00 PM Lovely spring imagery, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/18/2018 2:26:00 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Reason A. Poteet Date: 4/17/2018 1:16:00 PM Very nice Sunshine. Great piece to accompany a lovely pic of springtime. Salutations on your award. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/17/2018 1:22:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 4/17/2018 11:23:00 AM Dropping back to say congrats on your win Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/17/2018 12:20:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier Date: 4/17/2018 10:45:00 AM Congrats on your bronze medal finish with this delightful gem, Sunshine. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/17/2018 12:19:00 PM - Many thanks Line, for my win and your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/17/2018 9:22:00 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest with this lovely poem- Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/17/2018 12:19:00 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Juliet Ligon Date: 4/13/2018 5:47:00 PM I love how you made the form to mirror with the melting of snow. Nicely done! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/14/2018 11:51:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley Date: 4/10/2018 10:04:00 AM Very well crafted and exhibiting the natural desire for Spring's arrival. I have never written in this form but you did it so wondrously well my friend!!! A fav... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/10/2018 11:43:00 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits, a fav. and lovely comment Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry Date: 4/7/2018 1:18:00 AM I like this form! A beautiful descriptive write. Good luck in contest. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/7/2018 4:01:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 4/2/2018 4:21:00 PM Makes me wish spring was here to smell those flowers. Lovely poem. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/3/2018 1:08:00 AM - Here is spring one day and winter the next day, dear Phyllis :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi Date: 4/1/2018 2:14:00 PM A beautiful Etheree although backwards. One of my favorite forms that you created so beautifully. i'm a fan! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 2:52:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, appreciate it highly Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

FJ Thomas Date: 4/1/2018 10:47:00 AM Your beautiful words are always so brightening dear soster :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 11:42:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wayne Riley Date: 4/1/2018 7:25:00 AM beautifully written. a great poet. x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 8:05:00 AM - Many thanks Wayne, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman Date: 4/1/2018 7:15:00 AM Spring is coming Anne-Lise. The buttercups are blooming. Lovely poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 8:05:00 AM - James, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George Date: 3/31/2018 5:48:00 PM Beautiful verse capturing spring in all its glory. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/1/2018 8:04:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and friendly comment, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/31/2018 12:34:00 PM Lovely piece, Anne-Lise! Janice Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/31/2018 12:38:00 PM Many thanks for your visit and comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/31/2018 8:05:00 AM The arrival of spring can be felt and seen, Anne-Lise! May you enjoy spring with all its beauty! ~ May I also wish you a very Happy Easter! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/31/2018 12:38:00 PM - Delicious with some brighter days ... winter has been long, Paul - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/30/2018 2:02:00 PM you melt my heart with this remarkable work, anne... is it spring there finally?... happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2018 2:06:00 PM - No, Nette ... have to wait a month - In April / May, spring will come :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan Date: 3/30/2018 11:08:00 AM Wonderful Anne... Beautiful title! Enjoyed it... Thanks for sharing... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2018 11:14:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bette Bavington Date: 3/29/2018 3:43:00 PM Hello. Sunshine Smile. This is a fantastic visual of a coming spring. I hope you have a great Easter. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2018 8:12:00 AM - Many thanks Bette, for your visit and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/29/2018 1:31:00 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, this poem is beautifully written. have a nice day my friend. Happy Easter. Hugs.Darlene Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/29/2018 8:26:00 PM Same to you my friend.Darlene Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/29/2018 3:17:00 PM - All my love and thanks to you, Darlene :) - Happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 3/29/2018 12:40:00 PM Such lovely imagery and interesting style Anne-Lise, best wishes in the contest... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/29/2018 3:15:00 PM - Thank you for never letting me down, Charlie :) - Thanks a million :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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