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This early-blooming plant flowers shortly after the snow melts and retreats when spring becomes summer: http://www.bhg.com/gardening/flowers/perennials/early-blooming-flowers/?socsrc=bhgpin030215winteraconite&page=14

When nature throws away the winter's shackles Discovered in the garden or the woods Even the audible perception The stiffest coldest long winter After discovering it The sun's glorious beams The first small flowers Pure happiness Celebrate New nests Proof 29/03/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) howmanysyllables.com/syllable 11-10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 A MELTING SNOWBALL - Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 12/24/2018 10:18:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, such a wonderful write from your pen. This is such a soft, beautiful write. When the snow melts, the proof shows its beautiful little head. After the snow melts, beauty does lift its head. A fave. Have a wonderful Christmas Anne-Lise. hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 12/26/2018 8:29:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and fave on my little spring poem, my firend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/28/2018 8:36:00 AM
LOVE THE EXQUISITE BEAUTY OF YOUR-- PROOF.. From first first to last word, your poetic talents shine bright.. A fav....
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Date: 4/28/2018 12:46:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit, fav. and comment, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/19/2018 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write.
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Date: 4/19/2018 11:09:00 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2018 7:52:00 PM
Beautiful verse , Sunshine, congratulations on your win .. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/18/2018 2:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2018 7:42:00 PM
Lovely spring imagery, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/18/2018 2:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2018 1:16:00 PM
Very nice Sunshine. Great piece to accompany a lovely pic of springtime. Salutations on your award.
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Date: 4/17/2018 1:22:00 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2018 11:23:00 AM
Dropping back to say congrats on your win Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:20:00 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2018 10:45:00 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal finish with this delightful gem, Sunshine.
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:19:00 PM
- Many thanks Line, for my win and your congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/17/2018 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest with this lovely poem-
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Date: 4/17/2018 12:19:00 PM
- Many thanks for your congratulations, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2018 5:47:00 PM
I love how you made the form to mirror with the melting of snow. Nicely done!
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Date: 4/14/2018 11:51:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/10/2018 10:04:00 AM
Very well crafted and exhibiting the natural desire for Spring's arrival. I have never written in this form but you did it so wondrously well my friend!!! A fav...
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Date: 4/10/2018 11:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits, a fav. and lovely comment Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/7/2018 1:18:00 AM
I like this form! A beautiful descriptive write. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 4/7/2018 4:01:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2018 4:21:00 PM
Makes me wish spring was here to smell those flowers. Lovely poem. love phyl
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Date: 4/3/2018 1:08:00 AM
- Here is spring one day and winter the next day, dear Phyllis :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2018 2:14:00 PM
A beautiful Etheree although backwards. One of my favorite forms that you created so beautifully. i'm a fan!
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:52:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, appreciate it highly Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2018 10:47:00 AM
Your beautiful words are always so brightening dear soster :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 11:42:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2018 7:25:00 AM
beautifully written. a great poet. x
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:05:00 AM
- Many thanks Wayne, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2018 7:15:00 AM
Spring is coming Anne-Lise. The buttercups are blooming. Lovely poem.
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:05:00 AM
- James, many thanks for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2018 5:48:00 PM
Beautiful verse capturing spring in all its glory.
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:04:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and friendly comment, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2018 12:34:00 PM
Lovely piece, Anne-Lise! Janice
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Date: 3/31/2018 12:38:00 PM
Many thanks for your visit and comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2018 8:05:00 AM
The arrival of spring can be felt and seen, Anne-Lise! May you enjoy spring with all its beauty! ~ May I also wish you a very Happy Easter! Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/31/2018 12:38:00 PM
- Delicious with some brighter days ... winter has been long, Paul - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2018 2:02:00 PM
you melt my heart with this remarkable work, anne... is it spring there finally?... happy huggs
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Date: 3/30/2018 2:06:00 PM
- No, Nette ... have to wait a month - In April / May, spring will come :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2018 11:08:00 AM
Wonderful Anne... Beautiful title! Enjoyed it... Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 3/30/2018 11:14:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2018 4:43:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , wonderful write , bursting of the page or should I say spring~ing ::::))))) Hugs and a very happy Easter to you and all :)
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Date: 3/30/2018 8:12:00 AM
- Niall, many thanks for your visit and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2018 3:43:00 PM
Hello. Sunshine Smile. This is a fantastic visual of a coming spring. I hope you have a great Easter.
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Date: 3/30/2018 8:12:00 AM
- Many thanks Bette, for your visit and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2018 1:31:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, this poem is beautifully written. have a nice day my friend. Happy Easter. Hugs.Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/29/2018 8:26:00 PM
Same to you my friend.Darlene Hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2018 3:17:00 PM
- All my love and thanks to you, Darlene :) - Happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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