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27.04.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Write Fourteen Beautiful Lines

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France
1st place in the contest

~ The shadows are colorless - give them soft edges ~ quote by poet A butterfly gathers its wings in melancholy it needs to dry before it can fly again Finding the root of the emotional balance and inner strength - Clues are woven in soft dreams From the lower chakras to the highest chakra, to spread out the winged crown A secret whispered in the breeze - flower-pressed butterfly kisses The pain, woe and lonesome, playing the violin on its suffering strings Felt as a fall from the height of the blue sky Forgotten is the passions lullaby and the vibrant color that once was a painted masterpiece

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Date: 5/6/2025 8:36:00 AM
You really draw in the reader with this beautiful write. Congratulations Anne-Lise! :)
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Date: 5/4/2025 9:12:00 PM
Love your poem, especially your quote. Congratulations, dear Anne, on your first place win. Hugs !
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Date: 5/4/2025 11:26:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your write and quote again. Hugs... Have a blessed day with your win................
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Date: 5/4/2025 3:48:00 AM
Anne-Lise, a beautiful emotive poem with wonderful images. Congratulations on your first place win. -hugs
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Date: 5/3/2025 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations Anne, such beautiful poetry...you too have a nice weekend...Frederic
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Date: 5/3/2025 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your top win In Constance La France poetry contest with a superb poem with very deep thoughts penned so nicely. Particularly liked " Clues are woven in soft dreams From the lower chakras to the highest chakra, to spread out the winged crown." Wish you a splendid week end writing your gems.
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Date: 5/3/2025 10:21:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you Anne-Lise on your 1st place win. Tom
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Date: 5/3/2025 9:58:00 AM
I could've sworn I commented on this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/3/2025 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations! You wrote a masterpiece that would not fade... cause it gives so much weight. Hugs, M.
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Date: 5/2/2025 10:28:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I truly love how you describe the nature of finding an emotional balance. There is indeed sorrow and loss in life, and we do need to know how to deal with these inevitable things. You seem so wise!!! Smiles!!
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Date: 4/29/2025 6:32:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise this is a beautiful picture you have painted with your lovely words. A brilliant piece. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/28/2025 11:08:00 AM
Nice poem with vivid imagery.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2025 5:26:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jay :) - hugs
Date: 4/28/2025 10:23:00 AM
A deeply creative piece full of images. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2025 5:26:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Phyllis :) - hugs
Date: 4/28/2025 5:25:00 AM
your poem offer brilliant emotion of reading, images are delicious and full of true sentiments, enjoyed
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Date: 4/29/2025 5:26:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Yann :) - hugs
Date: 4/28/2025 4:04:00 AM
This is beyond beautiful dear anne lise, how stunning is the picture youv used also and the way youv written your quote is so powerful and i also love "flower-pressed butterfly kisses The pain, woe and lonesome, playing the violin on its suffering strings" stunning! And deep and so creative! Your wordplay here along with the depth of what youv conveyed really is impressive! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2025 5:25:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Ink :) - hugs
Date: 4/28/2025 2:42:00 AM
You described the life of a butterfly very well. I'm sure this will rate high. Hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2025 5:25:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 4/27/2025 7:20:00 PM
Deep feelings expressed Anne, your spirit walks with nature, dear poet
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2025 5:25:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Frederic :) - hugs
Date: 4/27/2025 2:10:00 PM
Love to see them in the garden in spring and summer. Warmer days are coming.. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise, and enjoy your week ahead.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2025 5:25:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs
Date: 4/27/2025 1:22:00 PM
I love this write, quote and butterfly picture. "Good Luck" I Also did this one. Hugs... Have a wonderful Sunday.........
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2025 5:24:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

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