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- When Dreams Runs Out -

Warming thoughts cannot heal In between those moments of words When thought are not enough My feet are shaking as I fall on my knees But my prayer was heard I has no dreams left Listening closely to the melody of life Into my failing grace, again I would follow life music You've made my heart beat once again and the sorrow in my soul existed in vain A new step on the journey has begun The storm gave birth to a rainbow 23.01.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 2/10/2015 9:42:00 AM

and the rainbow is the new you...tough and without bullshit or indecicision...nice write!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/10/2015 11:38:00 AM

- Thank you for your interpretation Peter ............ very good word : "bullshit" // A-L

Len Gasun

Date: 1/28/2015 5:51:00 AM

This is absolutely another very inspiring and fantastic poem from you my very dear friend, Anne Lise. I love it so much especially the last line. A fave. TYTYSSM. Thank you so much as well for your very inspiring and lovely comments and visit. Sorry, I was away for a week 'coz of Eng. Camps at the province of Thailand, very far from BKK. I've missed you so much too and the rests here. Sending my huge warmest hugs! <3 always and forever, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/28/2015 7:39:00 AM

- Thanks my dear friend Leonora, for the nice visit, fav. and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/27/2015 7:00:00 AM

This is simply fabulous! My favorite lines are "my prayer was heard.....the storm gave birth to a rainbow"

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2015 7:26:00 AM

- Thanks Monterey, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

D. Steel

Date: 1/26/2015 8:42:00 PM

Wonderful poem Anne Lise! I enjoyed reading it immensely :) Thank you also for your kind words on my work. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry. - D. Steel

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2015 3:30:00 AM

- D.Steel, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/26/2015 3:26:00 PM

Dear Anne, Your poem has touched my heart. A beautifully worded poem. It has charmed me. Love and good wishes. -Mohammad

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2015 3:29:00 AM

- Thanks Mohammad, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 1/26/2015 12:41:00 AM

How absolutly lovely Anne Lise, this was a beautiful read and flows so well, brilliant............Take care my dear and have a great day...........Vera.........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2015 3:43:00 AM

- Dear Vera, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/25/2015 7:08:00 PM

I second Cheri's comment (May I have the next dance?)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2015 3:41:00 AM

- Thanks Tim, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/25/2015 6:34:00 PM

This almost sounds like a waltz put in a movements verse,totally loved it Anne Lise, it's just lovely dear lady, the last lines pull it all together so well, it flows so smoothly great job, cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2015 3:43:00 AM

- Cherl, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/25/2015 12:12:00 PM

inspiring thoughts on a beautiful sunday, anne... this is truly a joy to read.. wonderful!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/26/2015 3:41:00 AM

- Thanks Nette, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper

Date: 1/25/2015 6:10:00 AM

Beautiful words Anne Lise. The imagery of a rainbow is truly divine. I will put it in my favourites. Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2015 6:34:00 AM

- Thanks Shane, for the nice visit, fav. and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/25/2015 4:33:00 AM

A message of hope: After the storm comes the sun! Beautifully expressed, dear Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2015 5:44:00 AM

- Demetrios, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/24/2015 11:27:00 PM

Anne-Lise, inspiration is blessed with desire, and the desire is felt in this poem. Beautiful write a 7 ++

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2015 5:44:00 AM

- Thanks Eve, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/24/2015 7:20:00 PM

uplifting content, Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2015 5:43:00 AM

- Debbie, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rose Raikos

Date: 1/24/2015 5:18:00 PM

I can hear myself in these words, we all stumble and fall. But that picking up from the fall is a true blessing, the rainbow feeling. great Poem. Thanks from, Rose of Words.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2015 5:42:00 AM

- Thanks Rose, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/24/2015 4:49:00 PM

Last line was icing on a beautiful cake, sweew Anne... Hugs.. Arlene

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2015 5:42:00 AM

- Thanks Arlene, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2015 2:33:00 PM

The storm gave birth to a rainbow and isn't that wonderful when we can experience the rainbow..Thanks for the visit to my page..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 3:26:00 PM

- Thanks Sara, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/24/2015 8:13:00 AM

So glad that your dreams became reality, Anne Lise! Follow the rainbow and leave the darkness behind. All the best. /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 9:00:00 AM

- Paul, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/24/2015 7:58:00 AM

Beautiful write Anne... and a lovely ending....have a great weekend...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 9:00:00 AM

- Thanks Joseph, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/24/2015 7:05:00 AM

love how this painted to the powerful ending anne lise golden pen dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 7:42:00 AM

- Liam, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/23/2015 9:39:00 PM

Love that last line, compliments a delightful poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 6:18:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Scott :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/23/2015 4:58:00 PM

Very nice pen Anne-Lise! Very beautiful piece my dearest friend. There's always a light at the end of any tunnel and God always answers our prayers and prayer was answered. I love this poem a lot. its like a journey from darkness to light and the positivity in the last 2 couplets, especially in the last one, is the best, so full of promises in that the storm gave birth to a beautiful rainbow.A 7 +++ from me! Have a lovely evening Anne! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxxox D. ^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 6:18:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Dorian :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/23/2015 4:10:00 PM

A prayer answered a page now turns as the next chapter begins...peace be with you my poetic friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 6:17:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Frederic :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/23/2015 3:22:00 PM

Awakening to Gods very existence is described well in these few lines... nice write Anne-Lise, love.. nad!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 6:16:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Nadiya :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/23/2015 2:38:00 PM

I love the positivity in the final couplet and the wonderful imagery in the final line - awesome:-) A 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 6:16:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Jan - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/23/2015 2:08:00 PM

"But my prayers was heard I had no dreams left" means you have truly surrendered. What God wants, let Him do. Nice not only but more than nice means extreme beauty of your heart it's. Done well my lovely friend. 7 i feel simply. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2015 6:15:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words,Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)