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21.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- WHAT WAS I THINKING-
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John lawless

1st place in the contest

~ Oh, something has happened to my mouse - you hysterical control freak ~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 9:01:00 PM

Back with congrats, dear.

Terry Flood

Date: 9/29/2023 5:02:00 PM

So clever, Anne-Lise. And a fine and worthy win. Congrats.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/26/2023 8:50:00 PM

Fun monoku, Anne-lise, smiling:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:53:00 AM

- Thanks, Jo :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2023 10:15:00 AM

Ha!! Ha!! Way to go. I wonder who is in control us or the mouse. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my pages. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:53:00 AM

- Thanks, Sara :) - hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 9/24/2023 3:12:00 PM

This Monoku is certainly win worthy. Cleverly witty. Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:53:00 AM

- Thanks, Lin :) - hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2023 1:36:00 PM

An awesome Monoku that is a humorous and cutely created - good luck in the contest Anne-Lise dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:53:00 AM

- Thanks, Jenny :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 9/22/2023 11:41:00 AM

this is so cute, enjoyed the humor.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:52:00 AM

- Thanks, Eve :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 9/22/2023 11:17:00 AM

This one made me smile.. Great monoku my friend..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:52:00 AM

- Thanks, S.O. :) - hugs

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/21/2023 6:37:00 PM

Nice one Anne-Lise. I once had a technician take control of my computer while doing remote work on it. It was the most frustrating time of my life, watching my arrow move around the screen on its own.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:52:00 AM

- Thanks, Jerry :) - hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 9/21/2023 5:05:00 PM

Oh! this is a good one, Anne-Lise. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2023 1:52:00 AM

- Thanks, Bill :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 9/21/2023 11:58:00 AM

Ha ha, nice one. Pretty soon mouse will be history. AI will take control with your eyes.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2023 12:02:00 PM

- Artificial intelligence has no soul, Jay :) - Thanks :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2023 11:03:00 AM

haha Cute one

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2023 12:02:00 PM

- Thanks, Andrea :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 9/21/2023 9:52:00 AM

Haha thats so cool! I love it!!! Control freak and mouse! So creative you are. I would like to write a monoku too been a while. Goodluck for the contest dear Anne Lise . Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2023 11:59:00 AM

- I will read it when you post it...thanks for reading mine, Ink :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/21/2023 7:34:00 AM

This silly old lady still has an "old world " brain Anne-Lise. Took me a minute to realise you didn't mean a four legged mouse ! Very cute. Yes we all let a little mouse control us !!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2023 7:48:00 AM

- Everything is up to the reader, S.V. :) - Thanks :) - hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2023 7:15:00 AM

your poem made me smile as I've just re charged my mouse battery lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/21/2023 7:20:00 AM

- ... new batteries give better range, Jan :) - Thanks :) - hugs