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It Seems The Vultures Have Stopped Circling - Wildlife Articles

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/20/2018 8:19:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, an excellent Monoku. Your words say it all in this powerful line. The viultures always seem to be circling these days. Such a powerful image my friend. have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2018 9:03:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/1/2018 7:40:00 AM

Nicely done! Word picture as well as image are great!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/2/2018 12:57:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting my poem - Your comment is welcome, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/1/2018 6:10:00 AM

Ugh! There are so many of those out there, wearing human skin; if only they had chosen to be loyal dogs or better yet, bunnies! This was an excellent one.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/2/2018 12:57:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting my poem, M.L. :) - Your comment is welcome - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/30/2018 1:57:00 AM

For me this is a post War scenario of sadness in regards of the 'reality' of a material world. Kind wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/2/2018 12:56:00 PM

- Kai, many thanks for visiting my poem - Your comment is welcome - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Smith

Date: 9/30/2018 1:01:00 AM

There are still some places where the vultures are outnumbered. Something good also rises out of what was once ruins. You have highlighted well one of natures irksome details that tests our ability to cope. Some just lie down and never get up again. Best regards David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/2/2018 12:56:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting my poem, David :) - Your comment is welcome - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/29/2018 12:05:00 PM

Yes the vultures can move in quickly and destroy a life time of work. Unscrupulous people who will destroy to get ahead. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2018 12:53:00 PM

- So true, Phyllis - Thank you very much for visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2018 6:06:00 AM

A striking monoku, Anne-Lise. This reminds me of certain inheritors who unscrupulously try to lay hands on somebody's lifetime earnings/possessions. ~ Have a lovely weekend...hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2018 3:04:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)