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Blueberries and raspberry bushes Lush green forests great riches and delights The mighty mountains towering white dressed An exclusive experience The ground rumbles The sky becomes dark and the earth glows red Gas collects ... in the stomach The explosion is near However, this was only a small fart 04.01.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/14/2019 10:40:00 AM

Had me chuckling with this one and yes they can be explosive at times. lol love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2019 12:07:00 PM

- Yes, and quite naturally :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/6/2019 2:53:00 PM

I don't know what to say because none of my response-thoughts have landed yet! Love where you took the theme, the creative way you delivered it and how, ultimately, you filled the air with amusement. This took me here, there and everywhere on an off-the-wall excursion I thoroughly enjoyed. CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/6/2019 11:46:00 PM

- Interesting ... thank you very much, CayCay :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/6/2019 12:03:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent write from your pen. I loved the content and the ending was priceless. I almost fell off he chair laughing. It was unexpected. those are usually the best laughs though. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise, reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Sunday evening. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/6/2019 2:00:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment and laughter, my friend Mike :) - Laughter is good medicine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 1/6/2019 10:23:00 AM

Clever.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/6/2019 1:58:00 PM

- Many thanks, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/5/2019 7:50:00 AM

well played dear poet I was not expecting such an ending...very funny

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2019 2:54:00 PM

- Of course you didn't expect it, Frederic :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 1/5/2019 6:11:00 AM

Lol.. Nice to see your funny side..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2019 2:51:00 PM

- Glad you liked it S.O., many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/5/2019 1:11:00 AM

Ok Anne-Lise you got me here! I was not expecting this, but I am so smiling now!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2019 2:50:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment and smile, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/4/2019 9:43:00 PM

The last line takes the cake Sunshine Smile, love your poem! Such a beautiful build up that leads to such a natural reflex! Kudos! Good luck my friend, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2019 2:49:00 PM

- Many thanks, Jennifer :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/4/2019 4:43:00 PM

LOL Funny Ann-Lise. Well done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2019 6:33:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment and smile, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/4/2019 4:13:00 PM

Lol! Anne- Lise, The photo worked with your entry! I wish you the best luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2019 6:32:00 PM

- Many thanks, Alexis :) - Glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/4/2019 3:25:00 PM

Love this one, Anne Lise, especially the last line. I expect to see this one at the top of the winner's list. Many thanks for your kind comment about poor plumber Mr Leaks! - Bob

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/4/2019 4:02:00 PM

- No matter win or not ... fun to write, Bob :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)