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The vanity of youth in a newfound chapter Vulnerable and delicate - Full, swollen tears of a momentary impression When the colors lose their luster The time between there and then crackles but does not burst Before you judge, try to understand 24/01/2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/18/2022 9:23:00 AM
This is brilliant " When the colors lose their luster The time between there and then"
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Date: 2/4/2022 3:06:00 PM
I enjoyed “Understand” and the message of the piece…Delice
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Date: 2/2/2022 8:50:00 AM
How can we judge others when He one day will be our ultimate judge and He will know that we wrongly judged others. words of wisdom Sunshine Smile hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 1/27/2022 6:40:00 AM
To properly assess a topic, we must instead step back and give it strong consideration without judging others. The final lines of your poem, Anne-Lise, encapsulate the piece's core.
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Date: 1/27/2022 4:50:00 AM
Important words Anne-Lise, coerced in a beautiful way to convey your thoughts! I surely agree with your lovely poem! Happy Thursday xxoo
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Date: 1/25/2022 1:46:00 AM
We should not really judge. Lovely argumentative poem. Hugs.
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Date: 1/24/2022 8:05:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... full of wisdom. Thanks likewise for constantly cheering me up with your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 1/24/2022 4:03:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, i agree. Hugs.
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Date: 1/24/2022 12:49:00 PM
A "Wonderful" write. Today, people are fast to judge and very slow to understand. Have a blessed day/week writing away...............
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Date: 1/24/2022 11:51:00 AM
The two ending lines spell the essence of your poem, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/24/2022 11:45:00 AM
Sometimes we just have to step back and give it serious thought and fully grasp the situation before judging others. Tom
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Date: 1/24/2022 11:33:00 AM
A caring piece Anne-Lise, lovely worded piece with good imagery too. Hope all is well with you. Blessings and hugs,Gordon
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Date: 1/24/2022 11:28:00 AM
You always post beautiful photos. Great medaphor, my friend. You are so talented. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/24/2022 11:31:00 AM
- I was trying to find a picture that looked like my private picture that I posted on FB ... thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)