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- This World Appeals To Me On Many Levels -

Dear mother nature you're supposed
to make the world a good place to be in
Today the sky had hues of orange

Life begins every day when the sun arises 
Mixed with the fire's toast 
drinking of daylight 

Nature's wonderful respect for darkness
A moon shared the sky 
And you will never feel disappointed

To be born again off you
with the sun setting
Dipping down golden over mountains
Like a soul lost awaiting to be found

A slim narrow smile pearly shines 
Awaiting with anticipation
Night closing in as twilight holds a dream 
The master's at work  
the divinity of a deity 
Whispers of a breeze through fir trees 
Rusting branches sway dancing freely 
Surely created a deep impression inside me

Life begins every day 
when the sun takes center stage 
A sharp cutting breath hits home 
Diamond cutting thoughts invade 
Sailing away into another world

The moon and the stars come out in full force
Sharing a daydream as the night closes in 
Your eyes carry the sun peaking through the clouds
Destiny living and breathing the same air 
Until bliss becomes your daily drink



Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
A Collaborated Poem   18.10.2015

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2015

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Bl Devnath Date: 11/6/2015 9:14:00 AM Both you have painted a beautiful picture of the mother nature. A fine art like it's. Sure 7 again sure. Loved always, my lovely lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/6/2015 12:38:00 PM - Thanks Bl, for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak Date: 10/27/2015 5:56:00 AM Another appealing collaboration from you and Liam. Your pens bring your respect for nature and life to brilliant light. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/6/2015 12:38:00 PM - Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Custard Date: 10/22/2015 4:58:00 AM epic write! Talented poet with words that flow like a waterfall :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2015 6:41:00 AM - James, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/21/2015 2:10:00 PM also i would like to thank everyone for the heartfelt really beautiful comments wishing you all a blessed week deeply appreciated Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:17:00 PM - Yes, many beautiful comments !!!

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/21/2015 2:07:00 PM truly a great pleasure writing this with you anne lise congratulations dear friend passing you a warm smile thank you deeply pal Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:18:00 PM - Always a pleasure, dear friend Liam :)

Kp Nunez Date: 10/21/2015 6:26:00 AM I thought I already commented on this, Anne. I see that it was Liam's. A pleasure to read once again. Really happy that this won the POTD. hugs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 11:12:00 AM - I know you meant that :)) - hugs and smile :))) Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 7:44:00 AM .......... Liam`s and me :)) .... thanks for the second time reading, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/21/2015 2:44:00 AM Excellent. Well penned. A beautiful collaboration of nature. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:59:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet Date: 10/20/2015 10:57:00 AM You find the beauty oftenl hidden from the eyes of most people and you buff it up so that it shines for all to see. Emile. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:50:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley Date: 10/20/2015 7:31:00 AM Lovely poem my friends. Nature and its wonders awe those that have eyes and minds to see. A7 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:50:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments, a 7 and friendly visit, Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/20/2015 12:52:00 AM beautiful thoughts from both of you, anne...delightful collab, wow.. happy days and huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:49:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/19/2015 10:16:00 PM Lovely, Sunshine. The two of you breath hope and beauty into the lines. :) It's nice that you can collaborate together on these pieces. Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:49:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort Date: 10/19/2015 6:02:00 PM There are some beautiful patterns in nature, and it is not surprising that we are synchronized to the sun. I don't know how people way north or way south deal with such long days and nights. I guess it's all beautiful in its own way. Life is a beautiful gift. I will be somewhat sorry when it does end for me--hopefully not too soon. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:51:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Duke - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi Date: 10/19/2015 4:57:00 PM Hi Anne lise A beautiful collaboration of nature. My compliments. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:48:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Ralph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 10/19/2015 4:29:00 PM You two are at it again...lovely Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:48:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie Date: 10/19/2015 2:34:00 PM as my eyes consume your Beautiful words....all needs neatly entertain thoughts undisturbed....a.n.n.e.'s uninterrupted mind is the process of Beauty....and telling you that is my honorable duty....;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:48:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Eric - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/19/2015 8:29:00 AM Your collaboration is a source of delightful and inspiring poetry that fills our hearts and souls with joy! A seven to both of you, Anne Lise and Liam!, Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:47:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments, a 7 and friendly visit, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler Date: 10/19/2015 12:12:00 AM The world we live in may not be perfect, but there is still so much in it to enjoy... This is a really beautiful and inspiring poem. Very nicely penned, Anne-Lise and Liam! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:47:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Kelly - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/18/2015 8:00:00 PM Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!Another very beautiful,passionate, captivating, n' sweet poem inspired by love, Mother nature,and all,that you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very enchanting!I love it!Just great!So very beautifully written.A most beautiful,captivating, n' sweet love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I truly enjoy it!Very magical.Just awesome!Superb imagery!Excellent collaboration! Wonderful piece!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 +++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:46:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments, 7 and friendly visit, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:45:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/18/2015 7:48:00 PM another great collaboration, you two. I love the way you ended it with the time that bliss will become your daily drink. Such a hopeful positive poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:46:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 10/18/2015 4:56:00 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! A most wonderful collaborated write here. Mother Nature with all of Her splendor and grandeur is always a great theme to write about. Enjoyed the message of this excellent poem immensely. ("TR" + "FAV") Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:44:00 AM - Thanks for the lovely comments, tr, + fav. and friendly visit, Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen Date: 10/18/2015 4:21:00 PM This is a very great write friend. I love how you conveyed this beautiful piece. That is always you. Excellent write dear poet............A.M. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2015 1:57:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Afolabi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor Date: 10/18/2015 3:36:00 PM Clever thoughts written by both. Enjoyed reading Anne Lise thank you for sharing. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2015 1:56:00 PM - Michael, tanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Miraj Raha Date: 10/18/2015 1:35:00 PM I am graced with the read,a fantastic collaborated poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2015 1:55:00 PM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit Miraj - hugs // Anne-Lise :)