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- This World Appeals To Me On Many Levels -

Dear mother nature you're supposed to make the world a good place to be in Today the sky had hues of orange Life begins every day when the sun arises Mixed with the fire's toast drinking of daylight Nature's wonderful respect for darkness A moon shared the sky And you will never feel disappointed To be born again off you with the sun setting Dipping down golden over mountains Like a soul lost awaiting to be found A slim narrow smile pearly shines Awaiting with anticipation Night closing in as twilight holds a dream The master's at work the divinity of a deity Whispers of a breeze through fir trees Rusting branches sway dancing freely Surely created a deep impression inside me Life begins every day when the sun takes center stage A sharp cutting breath hits home Diamond cutting thoughts invade Sailing away into another world The moon and the stars come out in full force Sharing a daydream as the night closes in Your eyes carry the sun peaking through the clouds Destiny living and breathing the same air Until bliss becomes your daily drink Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid A Collaborated Poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/22/2015 10:31:00 PM
Liam....My dear, I must say this collaboration is replete with beautiful imagery that brings beauty and serenity to the soul. Congrats, my dear. Hugs
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Date: 10/22/2015 5:21:00 AM
Liam, I like the last line capping all the wonderful lines you weave.... congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day!!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 10/20/2015 12:11:00 PM
Hello Liam and Anne-Lise!! I guess I missed this write earlier. Congratulations for sure on POTD and this most wonderful collaboration!! The words and the images are quite divine and quite excellent my good friends!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 10/20/2015 6:17:00 AM
A very good spiritual poem hitting straight through to the heart, your heart sees into another dimension of beauty x Keep it coming x Wendy
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Date: 10/20/2015 5:05:00 AM
What a very great collaboration. Your write was conveyed beautifully and very eloquent. Excellent write friend..............A.M.
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Date: 10/19/2015 5:45:00 PM
Grats on Poem of the Day both of you :)
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Date: 10/19/2015 2:34:00 PM
Always adore poetry that adds personality to the moon, stars, planets...helps us see how small we are and puts the perspective in scale and majesty of nature. This write does all of that and more...it adds in the passion and the feeling as well! Nice!
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Date: 10/19/2015 1:28:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!Congratulations to you both on POTD!A very beautiful collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Well done!Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you both:)You both deserve it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
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Date: 10/19/2015 1:17:00 PM
Wow this is good! Great writing from the both of you. That fourth stanza "like a soul lost awaiting to be found" really grabbed me. Congratulations on having your wonderful collaboration selected as POTD!
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Date: 10/19/2015 12:59:00 PM
Very nicely written I see myself in this. Congrats on POD!
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Date: 10/19/2015 12:05:00 PM
congrats on poem of the day:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/19/2015 10:17:00 AM
Wondeful poem, Anne-Lise and Liam, Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
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Date: 10/19/2015 8:05:00 AM
Hello, Anne and Liam. Congratulations once again for a successful collab and on getting POTD! hugs!
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Date: 10/19/2015 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations to Anne Lise and Liam
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Date: 10/19/2015 7:25:00 AM
You two have written another amazing Colaboration. Congrats to you both!
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Date: 10/19/2015 6:37:00 AM
Hi, Liam. I like the image of Mother Nature's eyes peeking through the clouds. Well written and worthy of POTD...Liam and Anne-Lise!
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Date: 10/19/2015 5:50:00 AM
- HAPPY- HAPPY- HAPPY - HAPPY- :)))) - CONGRATULATIONS - CONGRATULATIONS - CONGRATULATIONS - CONGRATULATIONS !!!!
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:53:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful,passionate, captivating, n' sweet poem inspired by love, Mother nature,and all,that you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very enchanting!I love it!Just great!So very beautifully written.A most beautiful,captivating, n' sweet love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I truly enjoy it! Very magical.Just awesome!Superb imagery!Excellent collaboration! Wonderful piece!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 +++ to each!A Fav!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:30:00 PM
- I agree with, Jan !! :))) - A pleasure to write to you dear friend, always :) - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2015 4:53:00 PM
absolutely breathtaking into faves this is so so beautiful congrats Anne Lise and Liam on a golden poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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