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Nothing lasts forever He became weak from many falls lived in fantasy and built walls around himself The solutions he wanted were so desperate he appeared as the tyrant of the past Never accepted a defeat a problem that defies every solution When the pants of success are turned inside out, fear of "losing face" With nine fingers, count to ten and breathe deeply with your stomach - he's a loser that's for sure 26.04.2023 Anne-Lise Andresen Copyright © All Rights Reserved They Say He's A Loser Poetry Contest by: Joe Maverick 4th place in the contest

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Date: 5/15/2023 1:05:00 AM
A short and sweet poem with a full discussion of a fascinating character. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/3/2023 3:03:00 AM
Great write Ann-Lise. . "Nothing lasts forever." Too true. Time's clock has no favourites. Such losers are confined to history for what they are and were...hopefully. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/28/2023 1:56:00 AM
An intelligent picture that describes a person who knows no compassion. Hugs.
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Date: 4/26/2023 2:50:00 PM
Brilliant Ann-Lise. I am sure Joe will love this one. You hit just hard enough. Super Good luck, Hugs Wen
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Date: 4/26/2023 2:41:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, You have composed a well-written entry for the contest theme. Good picture as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/27/2023 7:54:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs
Date: 4/26/2023 1:59:00 PM
How the mighty have fallen Anne, good entry for the contest, good luck. Tom
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Date: 4/27/2023 7:53:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs
Date: 4/26/2023 11:44:00 AM
Your words are sage enough Anne-Lise. A lot to think about! I hope you have success in the contest.
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Date: 4/27/2023 7:53:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs
Date: 4/26/2023 10:39:00 AM
Wisdom in words, Anne-Lise! Much to ponder! Thank you! Best wishes for the contest. I think this is a hard theme and you wrote about it with such ease! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs and blessings!
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Date: 4/27/2023 7:53:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Sam :) - hugs

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