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12.03.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Write Five Beautiful Lines

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France 
1st place in the contest

~ Swans tell stories of eternal love - the hymn of the earth ~ quote by poet A flock of swans sings duets with the wind where the shadows fall at an angle Their beauty is an eternal spectacle sealed by divine sanctuary Evening sky burns - almost incomprehensible sight

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Date: 3/15/2025 3:12:00 PM
Rapturously beautiful lines, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 3/15/2025 1:07:00 PM
Impressive descriptions, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your accomplishment.
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Date: 3/15/2025 11:31:00 AM
I'm happy to see this one a winner!
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Date: 3/15/2025 9:58:00 AM
Lovely quote and five lines Anne-Lise, swans show the world what love is, and they do it with elegance and grace. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Beryl
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Date: 3/15/2025 9:48:00 AM
Wonderful description, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 3/15/2025 9:39:00 AM
Lovely poem, congratulations. Hugs, M.
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Date: 3/15/2025 3:25:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you Anne-Lise, I'm in good company. Tom
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Date: 3/15/2025 2:26:00 AM
amazing - eternal spectacle. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/13/2025 3:29:00 PM
Anne-Lise, the way you capture nature with words so perfectly, brings even more beauty to this world. You do make me smile. I could get addicted to this!!
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Date: 3/13/2025 7:07:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, your swans are breathtaking. You captured eternal love and nature's beauty with stunning imagery. I love swans! Thank you for this beautiful gift. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/13/2025 12:15:00 AM
Can almost hear the famous music. I love swans. Often used them in my poems. Hugs.
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Date: 3/12/2025 4:41:00 PM
great tribute, swans are not wild animals, they seek sometimes for my presence, i know places near my house to see them , you are right, they are very beautiful
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/13/2025 2:06:00 AM
- Swans are wild animals, Yann - Yes, they are beautiful :) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 3/12/2025 3:52:00 PM
A beautiful picture and beautifully written lines, a perfect combination Anne-Lise. Good luck with contest, my friend.
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Date: 3/12/2025 3:22:00 PM
Beautiful birds too Anne Lise, the way the glide through the water. We have them on the Avon in town. Tom
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Date: 3/12/2025 3:06:00 PM
beautiful, simply beautiful lines and image Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/12/2025 11:39:00 AM
You find the most beautiful pictures to accompany your writes, Anne-Lise. Your lines are truly lovely.
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Date: 3/12/2025 10:35:00 AM
I enjoyed reading "The Swan Song" a beautiful write/picture. "Good Luck" We both did one. Hugs... Have a fun day as you write away..........
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