- The Spirit of Souls and Emotion of Hearts -


Two worlds come together 
As sweet music flows gently
leads into a different zone
One circle of a heartbeat skips
A single moment our life changed forever

Paradise simply exists golden delicious 
Hidden from this world one bounty feast
Life every ounce trusting one promise living
Although at times some tears may drip 
Colors kissing love inside a mist 

Passion spreads warm fine spun gold
With you fate decides destinies call 
No distance can prevail
In your beauty of understanding 
You're viewing the second half of my soul

A dream of the truest form develops pure
Under the bright moonlight beam 
wings grow tender feelings fly high emotions 
As fate determines what is meant to be will be 

Within sweet sounds of joy 
Happiness blooms inside diamond shining light
Laughter rings out the bells echo deeply 
It's called true love in you 
Where trumpets rejoice finding heaven





Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  03.10.2015 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/24/2016 11:46:00 AM
"No distance can prevail in your beauty of understanding!"....understanding as a beauty of life....wonderful phrase!!!! Will definitely be holding to that! Beautiful piece of work!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2016 9:04:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Walter :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/23/2015 1:09:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, Thank you thank you for sharing this poem. I am honored to be among those who could feel the sublime beauty running through it.. The idea of this "spirit," "soul,"and "mind," and heart" in the the two worlds of "human" and "collective human" and beyond remains coming and going, hitchhiking in poetic imagination...isn't it? Congrats, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed it
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Date: 11/23/2015 1:21:00 PM
- I do not know the word "hitchhiking" - But, I thank you for a beautiful comment and enjoyable visit Assefa :) - hugs from Norway // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/15/2015 4:28:00 PM
enjoyed, anne.very imaginative work.
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Date: 10/16/2015 1:56:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Thomas :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/12/2015 4:17:00 AM
Anne -Lise Congratulations on PODT!!!
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Date: 10/12/2015 12:32:00 PM
- Michael, thanks for congratulations on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/9/2015 5:44:00 AM
I'm so happy and honored to read another superb write from you with our very dear friend, Liam my dear friend Anne Lise. I Super like it and so enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for liking my latest poem. That poem just popped up my head last night so I thought of posting it coz next wk, I can't post poem yet. I'll be out of country (2wks). I might be missing to read from you again. TYSM again for your lovely greetings on my birthday! Many many hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/10/2015 11:56:00 AM
- I wish you a good and safe journey, dear Leonoea - Thanks for visits and lovely comments, dear friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/6/2015 12:13:00 PM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 10/6/2015 12:40:00 PM
- Thank you my new friend Neil ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/5/2015 9:10:00 AM
Ah-there is nothing quite like the flair of trumpets! Have a wonderful day, week and month. You deserve it!!
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Date: 10/5/2015 11:24:00 AM
- Thanks for the beautiful wishes, Duke ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations on making Poem Of The Day to Anne and Liam, as the 'spirit energy emotionally twines your hearts! I like the last two lines of the second stanza: "wings grow tender feelings fly high emotions as fate determines what is meant to be".
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Date: 10/5/2015 1:00:00 AM
- Rainbow, thanks for congratulations on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 6:07:00 PM
Wow, just wow. I love this. Great collaboration Anne Lise and L. Mcdaid :-)
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Date: 10/5/2015 1:00:00 AM
- Njeri, thanks for congratulations on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 4:59:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, Congratulations on POTD here!! I just commented on your wonderful poem here only the other day. I'm not surprised it made POTD. This romantic poem and its message of love and joy is certainly outstanding in every respect!! Cheer and Best, Gary
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Date: 10/5/2015 1:00:00 AM
- Gary, thanks for congratulations on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 2:08:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam! Congratulations to you both on POTD!A very beautiful captivating love poem collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So beautifully written.Just dazzling!A very magical piece.Just awesome!Well done!I truly enjoy it!I'm so very happy for you both:)You both deserve it!A 7 to each! Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
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Date: 10/5/2015 12:58:00 AM
- Dorian, thanks for congratulations on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD! To both you and Liam! WEll done!
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Date: 10/4/2015 1:58:00 PM
- Andrea, thanks for congratulations on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 11:48:00 AM
POTD? Congratulations! It is a marvelous poem spiritual and metaphysical created by a divine collaboration between Liam and Ann Lise, Anne Lise and Liam! A seven to each! Sorry I missed it for I was too busy and not with pleasant things!
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Date: 10/4/2015 12:01:00 PM
- Dear friend Demetrios, thanks for congratulations a 7 X2 and visit on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 10:56:00 AM
Anne Lise, congratulations on your beautiful collab with Liam being featured as Poem of the Day! Such lovely imagery of the treasure of love. Congrats to you both. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/4/2015 11:18:00 AM
- Sandra, thanks for congratulations and visit on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 8:54:00 AM
Wow...another successful collab! congratulations on your POTD, Anne and Liam! What lovely news to usher in the new week. hugs!
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Date: 10/4/2015 9:18:00 AM
- Always an honor and pleasure to get p.o.t.d. :) - Thanks for congratulations, dear Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 8:21:00 AM
I can only tell you that this poem deserve to be poem of the day,great words including beautiful meanings. Congratulations lovely anne. Love and hugs :)
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Date: 10/4/2015 8:33:00 AM
- Dalia, thanks for congratulations on our poem :) - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 7:29:00 AM
Ann-Lise, you and Liam have penned a great collab.Congratulations to you both for getting the poem of the day:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/4/2015 7:32:00 AM
- Thank you for congratulations Alexis, a great honor to get p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 6:15:00 AM
Another stunner! When you collaborate with Liam it is pure magic and joy.
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Date: 10/4/2015 7:24:00 AM
- It is magic and joy, to co write with Liam :))) -Thanks for visits and lovely comments, Monterey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2015 4:52:00 AM
so pleased to see this as poem of the day - my congrats again:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/4/2015 4:57:00 AM
- Me too !!! :)))) - Discovered it 5 minutes ago, today's poem means a lot! - Thank you my friend Jan! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/3/2015 5:20:00 PM
Oh so beautiful Anne Lise and Liam i adore your works my friends:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 10/4/2015 4:16:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy it, Jan :) - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/3/2015 2:50:00 PM
glorious portrait of love and bliss from you and liam, anne... makes my sunday glow!.. huggs
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Date: 10/3/2015 2:53:00 PM
- Hope all days will glow for you, Nette :) -Thanks for visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/3/2015 2:06:00 PM
Wow! cool current flow of wisdom. am helpless, can stop my fingers to put nice 7. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/3/2015 2:10:00 PM
- A pleasure to share with you, dear friend Bl :) - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/3/2015 1:38:00 PM
now I don't know who you Love....but I adore this hand in glove....you two flow perfectly together....I see no way for your words to be better....great job....;)
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Date: 10/3/2015 1:44:00 PM
- I love life .... and all the beauty .... and good friends :))) -Thanks for visits and lovely comments, Eric :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/3/2015 1:19:00 PM
You guys make a fantastic writing team. The poem is a deep reflection of the title that shines ever so bright! A super 7 my friends..
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Date: 10/3/2015 1:34:00 PM
- Thank you for taking the time to read our poems Robert, very much appreciate your comments - Special thanks for "a super 7" :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/3/2015 12:54:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, Ah . . . What a switch over from the Halloween themes!! I guess you two could call this a special Romance Poem for Halloween. The imagery and the mastery of the verses are simply exquisite!! Outstanding work for sure guys!! A "TR" and "FAV" from me!! Cheers and Best, Gary (P.S. This is truly a very beautiful poem.)
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Date: 10/3/2015 1:01:00 PM
:))))) ..... Both trolls and witches need a little romance - Glad you enjoy it, thank you my friend for a seven and fav. greatly appreciate your words - A happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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