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- The Snowman -

        A snowy day,
        hurray !
        The sky is blue
        the dream came true.
        Even though I'm only five
        I manages to do a snowman alive.

        A snowy day,
        as sugar sprinkles, hooray!
        Roll and roll the snowball grow,
        gets bigger and heavy, it goes real slow.
        A large, a medium and an even smaller ball
        not a problem at all.

        A snowy day,
        my friendly neighbor helped me, hooray!
        Everyone knows ...
        he must have a carrot nose.
        A snowy day,
        hurray !

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Sara Kendrick Date: 1/3/2024 11:45:00 AM I wonder what secret the little boy is sharing with the snowman. I enjoyed reading your work from the perspective of a little one. No snow here but winter isn't over. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 12/26/2023 6:24:00 AM This was so lovely..Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 12/26/2023 12:47:00 AM This is an adorable rhyme poem my dear poet friend Anne-lise. Big congrats on your first place win! Merry Christmas to you and your family! Wishing you all the BEST that the season has to offer. This occasion and this coming year, may you be gifted with countless blessings! Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 12/25/2023 8:14:00 PM A cute picture and a lovely rhyme. The five year old looks so sweet. Congratulations Anne on your first place win. Have a Happy Christmas... ! Love and hugs... Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/24/2023 10:15:00 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/23/2023 11:33:00 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun/cute snowman write again. Hugs... Have A Very Blessed Christmas.................. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 12/21/2023 4:19:00 AM A lovely celebration of building a snowman on a snowy day, Merry Christmas to you and your Anne, hugs Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 12/19/2023 9:45:00 PM A fun nursery rhyme for children, Anne-Lise, you tell a great tale. Good entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! Hugs, Bill Login to Reply

Paul Bell Date: 12/19/2023 9:30:00 AM We got a day of snow and I did manage to build the guy. Melted two days later, gutted. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/17/2023 12:26:00 PM A fun/cute snowman write/picture. Kids will love it. We both did this one. Hugs... A Very Merry Christmas/Happy New Years to you. Have a blessed day writing away......... Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 12/17/2023 8:06:00 AM Reminds me of times when I was a kid! It was fun indeed. Loved sugar sprinkles as a description. Very sweet!! Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 12/16/2023 3:45:00 PM You make me want to be a child again dear Anne, so beautiful word and art too Merry Christmas Blessings to you and yours xo Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 12/16/2023 7:29:00 AM Oh this is such a delightful poem, dear! Absolutely beautifully done for the contest, with such jolly vibes of innocence and jovial aura... It's truly a lovely one for the children and your rhymes also flow so lyrically.. Enjoyed reading this :) Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/16/2023 5:46:00 AM Fun and joy exude throughout, Anne-Lise. Much enjoyed the celebration you convey in voice of children at play. Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 12/16/2023 1:52:00 AM Lighthearted and lovely! Poetry needs more snowballs. Thank you. Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 12/15/2023 7:07:00 PM Children would love this beautifully written rhyme about fun in the snow. Nicely written, Anne-Lise. :) Login to Reply

Jerry Brotherton Date: 12/15/2023 5:03:00 PM A beautiful story for this season, my friend. Best of luck with the contest Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/15/2023 2:15:00 PM A lovely story for children Anne-Lise, you write these so well. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 12/15/2023 1:54:00 PM Anne-Lise, Your piece is so captivating. Your verses' brilliance evokes endless joy, like a calming nursery rhyme that would attract younger children. Your writing, as shown by its perfect word choice, will fascinate young brains. Good luck with the contest Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 12/15/2023 1:42:00 PM A lovely nursery rhyme my friend.. it flows really well amd young kids will love it.. Login to Reply