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I do not always stay on top of the mountain The room is empty, tears produce no sound The silence answered with deep thoughts Grief feels like to drown in the depths of darkness In my quietest and lonely moments As the black chords in a sad play 10.06.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/31/2016 10:25:00 AM

I'm touched by the sad vein that runs throughout this short but expressive poem, Anne Lise; your words and the visual compliment each other perfectly. ~ Congratulations on a merited podium finish:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/31/2016 12:25:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/30/2016 7:36:00 PM

Powerfully sad and beautifully written, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your podium win in Eve's the New/Old 2 contest! Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/31/2016 7:32:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/30/2016 5:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise, beautiful painting to go with your poem. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/31/2016 7:31:00 AM

- Glad you liked it, Eve :) - Thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/30/2016 3:03:00 PM

The poem does not reflect your alias, Sunshine! ;-) When you say, "black chords," you mean somber and/or menacing chord combinations? Congrats on your placement!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/31/2016 7:30:00 AM

- Somber / Dark / Sad - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/11/2016 1:47:00 AM

Nice read, no wonder it made the most popular list that arrived in my e-mail. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/11/2016 7:51:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/8/2016 7:52:00 AM

Sad. reflective, beautiful. Suggestion(s): Change "produces" to the singular, "produce." Possibly, add punctuation.... :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/8/2016 8:44:00 AM

- Loneliness is sad, Tom - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Gelb

Date: 7/6/2016 8:18:00 PM

Very nice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2016 3:20:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/4/2016 5:11:00 PM

Some sad emotions displayed in this beautiful poem A-L.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2016 3:19:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/12/2016 12:00:00 PM

Your line "Grief feels like to drown in the depths of darkness" is perfect to describe grief. Nothing but time helps. Beautiful poem Anne-Lise. I hope you are having a good weekend. Blessings, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2016 12:39:00 PM

- Connie, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - My weekend was filled with sunshine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/12/2016 11:53:00 AM

A sad poem beautifully pictured my lovely lovely friend. A 7. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2016 12:36:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 6/12/2016 7:36:00 AM

Good words put together well xxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2016 9:06:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 6/12/2016 7:27:00 AM

Anne-Lise, your beautiful sunshine smile can't always dry the rain before it falls, and sometimes in life we hide our melancholy, like the unnoticed sad frown hidden behind the colors of a rainbow. A lovely emotional write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2016 9:05:00 AM

- James, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/12/2016 5:50:00 AM

Heavy and sad but it conveys lots of feelings

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2016 6:40:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sunita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/11/2016 7:31:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your expressive and emotive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2016 6:39:00 AM

- Sara, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2016 1:09:00 PM

A perfect picture of sadness and loneliness - a beautiful but sad write Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 1:12:00 PM

- Loneliness is sad, dear Jan - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/11/2016 7:40:00 AM

A profound write, Anne-lise:) loved the picture too:) I can relate to this sad poem:) A fave:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:53:00 AM

- Jo, thank you for friendly visits a fav. and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/11/2016 6:00:00 AM

Before a tree grows deeper in the ground its roots drills in the same way a soul grows wiser in solitude and suffering! A very philosophical writing! Bravo dear, Anne-Lise. A seven!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:53:00 AM

- Thank you my friend Demetrios, for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2016 5:23:00 AM

In deep thought we move through highs and lows....Good write Anne...Have a great weekend....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:52:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/10/2016 10:25:00 PM

So blue Anne-Lise, point well defined...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:51:00 AM

- Thank you Charlie, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anand Parmale

Date: 6/10/2016 9:39:00 PM

So dark and so deep....Beautiful write Anne.. 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:51:00 AM

- Anand, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2016 9:25:00 PM

a sad one and I like it a lot, Anne lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:50:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/10/2016 6:13:00 PM

Anne, oh what a wonderful poem and a beautiful image, I am loving this 7 ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:49:00 AM

- Thank you B.W., for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 6/10/2016 6:05:00 PM

Still it is good to give expression to grief. Lovely verse Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:49:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jesse Day

Date: 6/10/2016 4:43:00 PM

Loneliness and sadness coexist - very nice piece - Jesse

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2016 4:47:00 PM

- Yes, more than we realize ... - Thanks for the friendly visit and great comments, Jesse - hugs // Anne-Lise :)