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Art ID: 88264



I do not always stay on top of the mountain

The room is empty, tears produce no sound

The silence answered with deep thoughts

Grief feels like to drown in the depths of darkness

In my quietest and lonely moments

As the black chords in a sad play













  10.06.2016
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Date: 7/31/2016 10:25:00 AM
I'm touched by the sad vein that runs throughout this short but expressive poem, Anne Lise; your words and the visual compliment each other perfectly. ~ Congratulations on a merited podium finish:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/31/2016 12:25:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/30/2016 7:36:00 PM
Powerfully sad and beautifully written, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your podium win in Eve's the New/Old 2 contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/31/2016 7:32:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/30/2016 5:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise, beautiful painting to go with your poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/31/2016 7:31:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, Eve :) - Thanks for visiting and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/30/2016 3:03:00 PM
The poem does not reflect your alias, Sunshine! ;-) When you say, "black chords," you mean somber and/or menacing chord combinations? Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 7/31/2016 7:30:00 AM
- Somber / Dark / Sad - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/11/2016 1:47:00 AM
Nice read, no wonder it made the most popular list that arrived in my e-mail. Well done.
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Date: 7/11/2016 7:51:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2016 7:52:00 AM
Sad. reflective, beautiful. Suggestion(s): Change "produces" to the singular, "produce." Possibly, add punctuation.... :-)
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Date: 7/8/2016 8:44:00 AM
- Loneliness is sad, Tom - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2016 8:18:00 PM
Very nice
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Date: 7/7/2016 3:20:00 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits and comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/4/2016 5:11:00 PM
Some sad emotions displayed in this beautiful poem A-L.
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Date: 7/7/2016 3:19:00 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/13/2016 5:06:00 AM
A deep and sad poem, beautifully written, Anne-Lise. I love it. A7 and fave's. T.J
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Date: 6/13/2016 7:51:00 AM
- Teppo, thank you for friendly visits a 7 + fav. and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2016 12:00:00 PM
Your line "Grief feels like to drown in the depths of darkness" is perfect to describe grief. Nothing but time helps. Beautiful poem Anne-Lise. I hope you are having a good weekend. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 6/12/2016 12:39:00 PM
- Connie, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - My weekend was filled with sunshine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2016 11:53:00 AM
A sad poem beautifully pictured my lovely lovely friend. A 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/12/2016 12:36:00 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2016 7:36:00 AM
Good words put together well xxxx
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Date: 6/12/2016 9:06:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2016 7:27:00 AM
Anne-Lise, your beautiful sunshine smile can't always dry the rain before it falls, and sometimes in life we hide our melancholy, like the unnoticed sad frown hidden behind the colors of a rainbow. A lovely emotional write.
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Date: 6/12/2016 9:05:00 AM
- James, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2016 5:50:00 AM
Heavy and sad but it conveys lots of feelings
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Date: 6/12/2016 6:40:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sunita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2016 7:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your expressive and emotive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/12/2016 6:39:00 AM
- Sara, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2016 1:09:00 PM
A perfect picture of sadness and loneliness - a beautiful but sad write Anne Lise:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2016 1:12:00 PM
- Loneliness is sad, dear Jan - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2016 7:40:00 AM
A profound write, Anne-lise:) loved the picture too:) I can relate to this sad poem:) A fave:)
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:53:00 AM
- Jo, thank you for friendly visits a fav. and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2016 6:00:00 AM
Before a tree grows deeper in the ground its roots drills in the same way a soul grows wiser in solitude and suffering! A very philosophical writing! Bravo dear, Anne-Lise. A seven!
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:53:00 AM
- Thank you my friend Demetrios, for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2016 5:23:00 AM
In deep thought we move through highs and lows....Good write Anne...Have a great weekend....
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:52:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 10:25:00 PM
So blue Anne-Lise, point well defined...
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:51:00 AM
- Thank you Charlie, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 9:39:00 PM
So dark and so deep....Beautiful write Anne.. 7
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:51:00 AM
- Anand, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 9:25:00 PM
a sad one and I like it a lot, Anne lise
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:50:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 6:13:00 PM
Anne, oh what a wonderful poem and a beautiful image, I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:49:00 AM
- Thank you B.W., for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 6:05:00 PM
Still it is good to give expression to grief. Lovely verse Anne-Lise.
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:49:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 4:43:00 PM
Loneliness and sadness coexist - very nice piece - Jesse
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:47:00 PM
- Yes, more than we realize ... - Thanks for the friendly visit and great comments, Jesse - hugs // Anne-Lise :)