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09.08.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Of faithful flowers who tasted the sun briefly A rich fertile time Beyond happiness and cheer - grain nods in the blowing wind

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Date: 9/30/2024 10:26:00 AM
Anne-Lise, you know just what to focus in on that so many of us can relate to. Yes, you so adroitly point out that the intensity of sunlight during the summer was of short duration. The way you do it by referring to tasting just makes me smile broadly. A sheer pleasure to read.
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Date: 8/19/2024 8:49:00 AM
Awesome one. I enjoyed reading this very creative one, Anne-Lise. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/16/2024 12:09:00 PM
Anne-Lise, you have definitely captured the mellow spirit of August in all of its fertility and warmth. So beautiful. Wonderful to see you posting again! Hugs and blessings to you!
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Date: 8/16/2024 1:52:00 AM
What a nice tanka for August. I very nearly was going to put up am August tanka contest but then came up with my other idea
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Date: 8/13/2024 6:45:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, What a wonderful aspect to the last month of summer. I love summer but I really love Autumn and looking forward to it. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/13/2024 3:26:00 AM
Grain needed for bread. Brilliant. I missed your poems, my dear. Hugs.
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Date: 8/12/2024 11:10:00 AM
Yep, life is a constant struggle for many. We all reach the edge like drooping petals, nodding, looking off into profound depth of darkness having seen many beloved petals before us fall away and vanish.... A multi-dimensional write.
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Date: 8/10/2024 7:22:00 PM
Grain makes a beautiful picture. I think it has been around for milennia. A like the poem
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Date: 8/10/2024 10:07:00 AM
Nice Tanka. Summer is almost gone.
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Date: 8/9/2024 1:29:00 PM
It was good while it lasted, shame to see it go. Hope you're keeping well Anne Lise, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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