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la fÃ©e de la colline by Sunday Rose

I release the memories Closes the door for the last time I will always remember what we shared A skinless sorrow fills my heart A life with white horses and sunshine is over Everything is done for the very last time a reminder of emptiness Words that were never said are spun with sadness In silence and reconciliation, builds a bridge over the abyss A stone is thrown into quiet water and the rings cease never ... 30.11.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved The last... Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 2nd place in the contest

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Bobby May

Date: 12/13/2018 7:14:00 PM

That's beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/14/2018 3:15:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/6/2018 6:36:00 PM

I enjoyed the poignant imagery of your beautifully sad poem, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/14/2018 3:15:00 AM

- I am grateful for your comment and congratulations :) - Many thanks, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/3/2018 7:59:00 PM

Each line of our poem touched me, moved me. CONGRATS to win. Love.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2018 12:58:00 AM

- Thank you for your congratulations and visit, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/3/2018 6:00:00 AM

Never ceasing memories. Love the visual.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2018 6:28:00 AM

- Many thanks Kim, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 12/2/2018 4:04:00 PM

Anee-Lise, the line " A skinless sorrow fills my heart" jolted me. . so descriptive of an immense sorrow in just 6 words. Congratulations on your win. Peace and hugs~ Warren

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:46:00 PM

- I am grateful for your comment and congratulations, Warren :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 12/2/2018 12:08:00 PM

I love this very good!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:45:00 PM

- Many thanks Bobby, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 12/2/2018 11:27:00 AM

Anne-Lise, so beautifully penned, it is a wonderful write and congratulations on your great win in the contest, well done ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:44:00 PM

- Thank you for your congratulations, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/2/2018 6:57:00 AM

You are so right Anne-Lise, There ae so many wonderfully moving poems and yours i among them, Congratulations as well xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:45:00 PM

- Thank you for your congratulations and visit, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/1/2018 11:11:00 PM

A wonderful well written deeply moving poem, Sunshine, congratulations on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:43:00 PM

- I am grateful for your comment and congratulations, Eve :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/1/2018 8:47:00 PM

Oh, Anne-Lise, the imagery is just exquisite! … 'the stone thrown into quiet water//and the the rings cease//never' … That just tore my heart open. Well-done! Congrats on your win in the contest! Season's best! ~ Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:32:00 AM

- I am grateful for your comment and congratulations, Gershon :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/1/2018 3:30:00 PM

That's an awesome image at the end, Sunshine, for those ripples do go on and on, just like the consequences of our actions. A tenderly written poem that touches readers hearts, dear. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2018 11:32:00 AM

- I am grateful for your comment and congratulations, Carolyn :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/1/2018 11:17:00 AM

Back with congrats on you top win, Anne-Lise..well done my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2018 12:53:00 PM

- Thank you for your congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2018 11:01:00 AM

So many goodbyes in this contest, you did yours very well... Deep last stanza. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2018 12:52:00 PM

- There are always many goodbyes in life, S.O. :) ... many thanks for my 2nd place in your contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/30/2018 12:53:00 PM

Beautiful romantic verse Sunshine, loved the imagery in it. Good luck in the contest. Tom .

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2018 12:49:00 PM

- Tom, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2018 12:13:00 PM

anne, what an engrossing read.. i love the last 3 lines, peace comes with kind closure.. okay you win... mine is not as grand as this... happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2018 12:48:00 PM

- Many thanks Nette, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/30/2018 9:35:00 AM

Beautifully done my friend. Your words today touched me and I could feel them resonate in my heart. Best wishes for the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2018 12:47:00 PM

- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/30/2018 6:21:00 AM

"In silence and reconciliation, builds a bridge over the abyss..." Profoundly true. May you be filled with good memories. God bless you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2018 12:46:00 PM

- Many thanks Beata, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/30/2018 6:05:00 AM

What used to be once is no more..and emptiness now rules. A memorial in your words, Anne-Lise..sad as it is. You have that bridge to walk on and reflect. Well crafted..the very best to you for a TOP win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2018 12:46:00 PM

- Vijay, many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/30/2018 5:37:00 AM

I feel you, the subtle pain expressed, the deep pain felt, lovely poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2018 12:36:00 PM

- Many thanks Arthur, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/30/2018 5:13:00 AM

Outstanding romantic poem so beautifully crafted! Certainly deserves recognition dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck my friend. Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2018 12:35:00 PM

- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)