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Bees fly in drunken joy where cotton candy turns into thoughts gives us golden moments and guards the soul's jewelry box Listen to the earth's breathing in a conch in the tears of compassion Life swings, from angelic to evil Falling ____ down into a huge blue hole, without the slightest glimmer of light No reconciliation, everything is erased from the soul One minute before death 17/05/2021 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Blue Hole Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco Honorable Mention

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/7/2021 1:36:00 PM

This is pretty amazing Anne-Lise. So much to think about in quiet moments when we are aware of nothing around us sinking into profound wisdom. Congratulations on your win!

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/21/2021 6:45:00 AM

WoW! Anne-Lise, You wrote a well written and profound poem. Your second stanza described your photo well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day- Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/21/2021 12:43:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/19/2021 7:53:00 AM

The number 1 !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2021 11:53:00 AM

... or an N / A :))) - Thank you very much, U.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/19/2021 1:51:00 AM

It's a beautiful poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2021 2:14:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Alex :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/18/2021 11:46:00 PM

Yes the poetry gets deeper as the hole opens up, I like the point you make at the end, Ann-Lise, clever poem this is. Love it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/19/2021 1:29:00 AM

- Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/18/2021 10:35:00 AM

Profound. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:25:00 PM

-Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/18/2021 5:58:00 AM

profound thoughts, Anne-Lise! "earth's breathing in a conch /in the tears of compassion" - love the images. Your interpretation of the theme is unique. Love ~ Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:41:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Mala ... glad you liked it ... I really appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/18/2021 4:19:00 AM

The profound and with metaphysical overtones poem, marvelously written, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:39:00 PM

- Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/18/2021 2:41:00 AM

Deep and unique, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:25:00 PM

-Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/17/2021 6:06:00 PM

wow so deep and so insightful, an original by far, Thanks for sharing, and gl in the contest, :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:38:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your comments and wishes, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/17/2021 4:22:00 PM

I like your perspective on the theme Anne, Vey nicely penned..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:37:00 PM

- Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/17/2021 3:19:00 PM

A great unique interpretation on the theme! Lovely dear Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:36:00 PM

- I really appreciate your comment JCB, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/17/2021 2:25:00 PM

A creative story/write and picture. Good luck in the contest. You never know what they are looking for. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:35:00 PM

- It's true: "You never know what they are looking for" ... winning is not the most important thing for me ... fun to participate :) - Thank you very much, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/17/2021 1:58:00 PM

I have missed reading your awesome poems, Ann-Lise...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:28:00 PM

- And I've missed you ... hope all is well with you, Akkina :) - Thanks for visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/17/2021 1:56:00 PM

Uniquely different interpretation of the them--well done, Anne-Lise. All the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:32:00 PM

- Not always an advantage and not following the herd, Vijay :) - But I choose to do it ... because this is me :))) - Thank you very much for your comments and wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/17/2021 1:28:00 PM

This is dark but unique in terms of sharpness and versatility of expression. I wish you good luck in the contest Anne-Lise // hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 12:27:00 PM

- Many thanks for visits, comments and good wishes Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/17/2021 1:13:00 PM

Very powerful Anne-Lise. Good luck in the contest :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 4:27:00 AM

-Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2021 12:59:00 PM

quite a deep dark write my friend and we never know when our life will end, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 4:27:00 AM

- Life can be over in the next moment ... nobody knows -Thank you very much for your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/17/2021 12:47:00 PM

Quite a dark verse Anne and a grisly end. Best of luck in the contest, hope you are well. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/18/2021 4:26:00 AM

- From blue to darkness ... and death ... it could not get darker, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/17/2021 11:24:00 AM

I would tremble to die without reconciliation. Deep poem. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2021 12:22:00 PM

- Death can come suddenly and unexpectedly, Victor -Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dm Babbit

Date: 5/17/2021 11:17:00 AM

This is so unique, what an idea.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2021 12:20:00 PM

- Thank you very much, DM :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)