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The jungle of the room terribly smelly lacks fresh air words and - thoughts ... like wings on a rock The pen clinging to my hand The Masterpiece curled and thrown - a wrecks of the vessel ... the face becomes pale steps in the corridor ... 24/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/29/2019 9:02:00 PM

Nicely penned Anne-Lise, such good imagery , Blessings and hugs,Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2019 2:23:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and your great comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/28/2019 2:15:00 PM

Gosh. What you have to go through these days just to pen a masterpiece! LOL. Thanks, Anne-Lise. ~ Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/29/2019 8:58:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/26/2019 3:41:00 AM

Extremely representative of poet's block dearest Anne-Lise, masterfully done! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2019 1:54:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/25/2019 7:29:00 PM

hehe... Your new pic for the season drew me back. I love your poem, and your style... Excellent... and excellence all the way round. Ann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2019 1:53:00 PM

- Always welcome, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/25/2019 2:00:00 PM

How funny I feel that way here in my computer room full of books, crafts, paintings , and filling cabinet full of miscellanies stuff that need to go in the round file..:) I love your poem and the great imagery.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2019 1:53:00 PM

- I just had a big cleanup ... the easiest thing is to close the door, Eve :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster
Date: 11/25/2019 7:30:00 PM

I think your room and mine are very similar... lol...

Chris Green

Date: 11/25/2019 9:04:00 AM

"Like wings on a rock" Love that line my friend and the entire poem. Just brilliant. The image is really cool as well.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/26/2019 1:50:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and your great comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/25/2019 1:16:00 AM

Lovely poem dear friend. I enjoyed and wish you many more... Love you - Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2019 3:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/24/2019 11:35:00 PM

Anne-Lise , We, of Dunder Mifflin Paper, salute you and the aforementioned Masterpiece(s). -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2019 3:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/24/2019 8:25:00 PM

this picture really gave your words wings, or perhaps the other way around, either way they go good together...been there, great penning Anne-Lise... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2019 3:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 11/24/2019 2:52:00 PM

omg... thats a lot of paper... surely it is better to use a computer? lol... deep poem..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2019 3:05:00 AM

- That's exactly what I thought too :))) - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/24/2019 1:17:00 PM

I can understand your feeling and the pic is awesome! Hugs and blessings my dear friend, Jenny.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2019 3:06:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster

Date: 11/24/2019 10:56:00 AM

Wow.... Ann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 11:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for your support, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/24/2019 9:25:00 AM

That picture made me smile Anne, how often has it been like that but we never give up. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 11:56:00 AM

- No, we must never give up ... but, many have been thrown away a start that never came to an end ... maybe the best you've written :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)