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Little black beetle with glasses sunshine through your lashes. Life in paradise - isn't it nice. Why do you have wings ? can you sing ? Little black beetle black as black can be I saw you high up in the plum tree. Life in paradise - isn't it nice. Maybe you can fly or would want to try? Little black beetle don't say goodbye soon grandma will make plum pie. Life in paradise - isn't it nice. Do you drink tea ? do you know a bee ? Little black beetle you'll love its flavor and run and tell your neighbor. Life in paradise - isn't it nice. Have you read a book ? Got a fish on a hook ? ~ 27.03.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Children Sing to Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper 1st place in the contest

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/17/2023 10:19:00 AM

A delightful nursery rhyme, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your first place win!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 4/14/2023 8:23:00 AM

it's way too cute. Belated congrats..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/10/2023 11:34:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congratulations! Every line is filled with the make believe world of a child's heart! And the lyrical cadence is so wonderful! Thank yo for this joyful song for children of all ages! Hope you had a wonderful Easter! Hugs!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/9/2023 12:32:00 PM

An enchanting rhyme, Anne-Lise. It's in my faves. :) hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/9/2023 3:24:00 AM

Lovely writing. A wonderful rhyme. Love it. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/8/2023 12:05:00 PM

Big congratulations on your win with this charming song Anne-Lise! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2023 2:46:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Linda :) - hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 4/7/2023 9:14:00 PM

I love this a lot. This is such a delightful and beautiful nursery rhyme poem/song for children my dear poet friend Annelise. I'm pretty sure children will enjoy this immensely. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you and your loved ones this Holy Week and always.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2023 2:46:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Leonora :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 4/7/2023 8:21:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Smile on your lovely nursery rhyme and first place win the contest! Love and hugs~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2023 2:45:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/7/2023 5:23:00 PM

I like this nursery rhyme. NICE KIDS SONG. Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Sunshine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2023 2:45:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Alfonso :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2023 4:58:00 PM

Sunshine, congratulations on your win on your poem, “The Beetle In The Tree". Many blessings to you. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2023 2:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for the contest and my win, Eve :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/7/2023 12:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your placing in the contest for this lovely nursery rhyme Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2023 2:44:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Wendy :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/7/2023 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun write. Hugs... Have a blessed day................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2023 2:44:00 AM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/28/2023 5:01:00 AM

Just like how a child would ask questions, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2023 5:55:00 AM

- Children have so many questions...thanks for reading, Jo :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 3/27/2023 10:23:00 PM

Oh, Love it ! So very cute. I am sure Eve will give you a top placement ! Cheers, Smile ....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2023 5:56:00 AM

- Valsa, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/27/2023 1:04:00 PM

This is adorable, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2023 3:31:00 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comment, Ilene :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/27/2023 11:36:00 AM

Written for children and grandchildren, you should write a children's book looks like you have a hidden talent...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:39:00 AM

- Everything can look great when it's finished, Frederic ...but, I'm struggling with these poems - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/27/2023 10:52:00 AM

Children might like singing this tune. Amazingly lovely. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/27/2023 11:40:00 AM

- I hope so Las, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 3/27/2023 9:37:00 AM

Lovely nursery rhyme Anne, GL in the Contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2023 5:56:00 AM

- Joseph, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/27/2023 9:25:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, It was a delight to read your nursery rhyme this morning. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Well done. Best wishes in the contest:-)Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2023 5:56:00 AM

- Alexis, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs