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s s u t n r r a i w p b e e ne rri d es the taste is sweet and fresh. in my garden where many different fruits grow. a delight for the eyes and mouth. to touch and smell. the tongue separates rivers with cream on top. always let reason hold the reins. erotic flow of sweet wishes love that dazzles sweetly not a disparaging word about strawberries one is too little a large bowl is too much 24.04.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved 2nd place in the contest Brian Strand contest no 1211

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/27/2023 9:17:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, a beautiful rendition in delectable poetic verse. Such a lovely shape poem! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brain's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2023 12:25:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/26/2023 7:35:00 PM

This is so cute Anne Lise. I love it. A fav for me. Congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2023 12:25:00 PM

- JCB, many thanks for visiting, fave and congratulations :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/26/2023 7:06:00 PM

A lovely Shape poem Anne-Lise, words so true strawberries are delicious and for me only a large bowl will do… Hugs, Belle:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2023 12:24:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Belle :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/26/2023 6:01:00 AM

WoW! Anne-Lise, You did a great job. I love strawberries. And your well-written poem reminds me of why a I enjoy them so. Congratulations on your trophy win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2023 6:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations ... have a wonderful day you too, Alexis :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2023 2:37:00 AM

Do your strawberries grow in a greenhouse?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2023 5:26:00 AM

- No, I don't have a greenhouse Victor ... but I would like one :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 4/25/2023 7:13:00 PM

Yummy strawberry, sweet and tart! Enjoyed the poem and its shape. Congratulations Smile, on your well deserved podium win. Hugs and blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2023 5:29:00 AM

- Valsa, many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/25/2023 6:36:00 PM

Back with heartfelt congrats on your podium win that it's with no surprise to me. Blessings dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2023 5:28:00 AM

- Many thanks, my friend for congratulations :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/25/2023 5:15:00 PM

This is delightful and delicious, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2023 5:28:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Ilene :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/25/2023 3:42:00 PM

Congrats Sunshine, most beautiful strawberry, creative and juicy !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2023 5:27:00 AM

- Vie Rose, many thanks for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 4/25/2023 2:55:00 PM

Congratulations !!! so succulent and sensuous Enjoyed it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2023 5:27:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Nancy :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/25/2023 11:52:00 AM

Absolutely delicious, delectable and delightful Anne-Lise! It sounds like much anticipated spring is coming to your garden with warmer days but colder nights. What a happy time for you! Congratulations on your win with this lovely shape poem! Hugs and spring blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 12:04:00 PM

- We have 6+ degrees and freezing wind, Sam ... doesn't look like spring at all :) - Strawberries, carrots and potatoes have been planted ... but several months to harvest :) - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/25/2023 10:02:00 AM

Love this! The beginning - sunripened strawberries gives our taste buds a reason to keep on reading <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 10:24:00 AM

- A poem with taste makes the mouth happy :) - Many thanks for your comment, Kim :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/25/2023 9:03:00 AM

WOW!!! What a creative write/shape. I love it and I love strawberries. Have a great/blessed day..................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 10:22:00 AM

- Glad you liked it, Paula :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/25/2023 8:03:00 AM

Wonderful in design + content. Strawberries in cream boost taste buds to new heights. Best wishes, Brian

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 10:21:00 AM

- Strawberries can be used for many things, Brian :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/25/2023 7:54:00 AM

Mellow juicy strawberry satisfying taste buds. Big Congrats to win TOP Love.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 10:20:00 AM

- Many thanks for reading and congratulations, Anisha :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/25/2023 7:15:00 AM

delicious poem, to see, to read, and be eaten some time, exquisite imagination for the reader, you made a wonderful penning

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 10:19:00 AM

- I enjoy every single berry Yann, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/25/2023 3:51:00 AM

Wow! Sounds and looks enticing, Anne-lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 10:17:00 AM

- Thank you, Jo :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/25/2023 3:21:00 AM

Yummy, dearest Anne-Lise. Deliciously written! Blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 10:17:00 AM

- Strawberries are heavenly ... especially in summer ... fresh and delicious ... many thanks for the lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/24/2023 4:53:00 PM

Lovely design--splendid descriptions, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 1:26:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment on my strawberry, Vijay :) - hugs

David Mchattie

Date: 4/24/2023 4:42:00 PM

I would kill for a garden strawberry. Our strawberries come from Mexico and have no flavor... but we still buy them. Have a great day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 1:26:00 AM

- Norwegian strawberries are not ripe yet ... we have to buy from other countries ... but, I have strawberry plants in my garden ... in 2-3 months you can come to eat sun-ripened strawberries, David ... juicy, with a lot taste :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/24/2023 4:06:00 PM

Anne-Lise, You have written a beautiful poem with this piece. Both the thought and the strawberries are quite endearing. It could be a good fit for Brian's contests

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 1:22:00 AM

- It was written for that contest, Las .... many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/24/2023 3:43:00 PM

Aww you are so clever. This is priceless Anne-Lise. The poem is adorable and so is the strawberry.. How long did it take you to get that right ???? Loved it hugs and favorite

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2023 1:24:00 PM

I enjoyed seeing and reading your shape poem. Delightful. Way to go. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:43:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment on my strawberry, Sara :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/24/2023 12:58:00 PM

Delicious write, Anne. I love strawberries too!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 1:06:00 PM

- Fresh and delicious, Daniel ... with vanilla cream, today (but, not from my garden ... it's far too early :) - Thank you :) - hugs