- St Patrick's Day -

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10.03.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Ireland quite grand with gold to hold in green we seen beer flows all knows take in head spin drunken shrunken the mood some food happy chatty and dance in trance no dull a lull in spell as well next day must pray the soul black hole

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/12/2025 8:22:00 AM

Anne-Lise, green is good as you point out! Much better than being green with envy. It's wonderful to be Irish for at least one day and you make it even more fun!!

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/12/2025 4:23:00 AM

Yep, sounds like St. Patrick's day -- with my Irish buddies, when a young man, shared many a riotous celebration. And hangover.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 3/11/2025 11:34:00 PM

A lighthearted touristy view of Ireland and drinking good times so enchanting.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/11/2025 9:24:00 PM

A very good poem for Ireland. I like the ending.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/11/2025 4:59:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, What a fun whirlwind of the Irish spirit with light, lively, and full of charm! I love how the rhythm, the playfulness, and that cheeky bit of reality make it so much fun to read. It captures the heart of Ireland, both the joy and the recovery. A delightful ride! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/11/2025 3:05:00 PM

A wonderful footle my friend.

Deb M

Date: 3/11/2025 1:35:00 PM

Nice one Sunshine….love the last one hehe! Debx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2025 5:34:00 AM

For those who are Catholic, I guess they have to go repent of their sin/s the day after. Some of the cities here in the USA will have some very special times planned on that day. I am not so sure St. Patrick would be pleased with the events that will happen. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/11/2025 7:02:00 AM

St. Patrick is a Saint who went to Ireland and it is said he rid the island of all poisonous snakes. I don't really know since I am not of the Catholic faith. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/11/2025 5:38:00 AM

- We don't celebrate St Patrick's Day in Norway... I don't know much about this celebration, Sara :) - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs