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Kids Painting - sweety-babies Photo

I will define Spring

In the beauty calm your mind

The length of daylight 

Child's inquisitive wonder

Celebrate rainbow colors










26.01.2016
A-L Andresen :)
Tanka  5-7-5-7-7

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Date: 8/6/2016 2:16:00 AM
Beautiful write. The calmness comes through
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Date: 8/6/2016 8:23:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Jannie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/8/2016 9:30:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much - reminds me of time with my grandson. The open mind of a child.
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Date: 2/8/2016 9:50:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/1/2016 2:18:00 PM
Lovely phrasing and imagery... perfect 57577 meter! Well done Anne-Lise!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/1/2016 2:21:00 PM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2016 12:58:00 PM
A Beautiful Tanka Anne-Lise. Spring, the world comes to life. The child wonders at life springing forth anew. The picture and words sing together Anne-Lise. Excellent work my friend. A seven and a fave for this little wonder....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/30/2016 1:24:00 PM
- A great pleasure and honor, thank you for "fav" a seven and your beautiful words my friend Vladislav :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2016 9:09:00 AM
A beautiful poem. A child's wonder is wonderfully brought out..great:}
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Date: 1/30/2016 11:26:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2016 11:18:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful picture and Tanka, Anne Lise. Thank you so much for sharing. Your friend in poetry, Elaine
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Date: 1/30/2016 7:26:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2016 8:21:00 PM
very lovely, Anne Lise
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Date: 1/30/2016 7:26:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2016 4:48:00 AM
Beautiful marriage of picture and words.
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Date: 1/29/2016 5:21:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/28/2016 3:24:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:49:00 PM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/28/2016 12:41:00 PM
even if my hands were small....I would make them explore each and all....crevices of your frame which are so sexy I am sure....with the only possible doubt being if you can endure....all the seductive stress a man such as I would send your way....and if you are a fan of physical pleasure, you don't have to look any other way....I Love this anne....;)
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:52:00 PM
- ..... this is the enjoyment of Spring, Eric - Glad you like it - hugs // Anne-Lise
Date: 1/27/2016 11:24:00 AM
springtime is as fresh as child.. ohh, i find this so engaging, anne.. happy day and huggs
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:16:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2016 9:19:00 AM
This piece combines well with the picture, beautiful!
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:15:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2016 8:37:00 AM
Good word choices moving the reader with their innocence and beauty. Emile.
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:15:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2016 8:18:00 AM
Celebrating rainbow colors in the beauty of flowers on land with small soft hands of baby angel. Very nice poem with lovely picture, my lovely lovely friend,bl
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:14:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2016 8:00:00 AM
A lovely tanka and a charming visual to go with it, Anne Lise! Like that child you too are yearning for spring. ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:14:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2016 5:49:00 AM
A child's wonder of beauty is ever precious, Anne. So lovely...hugs!
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:13:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/27/2016 5:47:00 AM
That will do it, dear Anne-Lise! Very uplifting, especially when we live in winter time!
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Date: 1/28/2016 3:12:00 AM
- When winter is long and cold ...... we dream about spring - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2016 10:33:00 PM
Such a sweet write, Anne-Lise! It goes well with the picture. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/27/2016 4:15:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2016 3:20:00 PM
oh so so charming Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:35:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2016 3:17:00 PM
Wonderful A-L...love the picture
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:34:00 PM
- Thank you my friend, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/26/2016 2:43:00 PM
Very beautifully painted piece, Anne- Lise! A 7! The painting is sweet dear friend:)) Sending you love and prayers!Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you!:) Hugs! D.
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Date: 1/26/2016 2:48:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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