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17.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- How do you feel today 2 -
One liner Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

1st place in the contest

- shrouded autumn quilt - trembling and half withered - probably aftermath -

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2023 2:38:00 PM

I see you wrote I was born under a lucky star . Not true, my friend. Anyway I am back here to say congrats on your wee deserved win .

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/21/2023 5:00:00 PM

A defining Monoku that echoes familiarity across the hemispheres, my dear Anne-Lise. Another of your wondrous skills anchoring 1st placement, my friend! Aloha, William

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/20/2023 5:43:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, I feel your words. You've captured the feeling of being ill with poetic finesse. I hope you are feeling better, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs for healing.. ~Susan

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2023 1:06:00 PM

aww so sorry you are under the weather sweet Anne-Lise get well soon and congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 10/19/2023 9:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win in the Contest Ann. Nice Monoku

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2023 2:41:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Chris :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 12:38:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win with your "Sick" write/Cute picture. I enjoyed reading this one again. Hope you are feeling better. Hugs.... Have a blessed/great day writing away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2023 2:41:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 10/19/2023 12:25:00 PM

Anne, CONGRATULATIONS on the winning 1st. Wonderful monoku. Sad you feel sick. Hope you get better soon. I'm also still with cold. Lot of rain these days. Hugsxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2023 2:40:00 AM

- Get well soon <3 - Thank you very much, Maria :) - hugs

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:40:00 AM

So many will relate with you on this one.. Congratulations on your placement.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2023 2:39:00 AM

- Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 10/19/2023 10:51:00 AM

Hope you feel well soon Sunshine! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 11:29:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Deb :) - hugs

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 10/18/2023 2:19:00 PM

I hope that you are well again soon Anne-Lise, its no fun to be sick. Hugs <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:19:00 AM

- Thank you very much, BJ :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/18/2023 2:09:00 PM

Great one describing the feelings of illness and the treatment. I hope you were not really sick, but just how you would feel if you were. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:18:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2023 12:38:00 PM

get better soon. I am at least lucky to have had no viruses or colds for over eight years!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:18:00 AM

- Yes, you were born under a lucky star Andrea :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2023 9:39:00 AM

Awe, get well soon. Great description feeling ill. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:17:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs

Emilia James

Date: 10/18/2023 7:59:00 AM

Sorry to hear you are not feeling well Anne-Lise. Hope you feel better soon. Take care. Emilia.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:16:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Emilia :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/18/2023 2:34:00 AM

Cold is inside our homes now. Hope you will get better soon. Hugs and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:16:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs

Karen Jones

Date: 10/17/2023 10:50:00 PM

Sending you healing energy and prayers for a restful eve. Hugs feel better soon. Did you draw that picture? Cool.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:16:00 AM

- No, I'm not the one who drew the picture - - Thank you very much, Karen :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/17/2023 6:56:00 PM

Anne-Lise, oh no, hope you're feeling better soon, hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:14:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Tania :) - hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 10/17/2023 4:15:00 PM

Oh, Anne-Lise you must not rush yourself thinking you're over it. I just went round 3 with that monster.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:14:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Lin :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/17/2023 2:20:00 PM

Sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well, and I wish you will feel better soon. Your well written one liner perfectly reflects your actual situation…a sure winner

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:14:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/17/2023 2:19:00 PM

you captured the essence of being 'sick' . I love to snuggle in a quilt (one of my mother's) and just ride it out. Well done, Anne-Lise...enjoy your evening, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:14:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Sara :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2023 1:20:00 PM

Your "Sick" told a story in one line. A wonderful write/picture. Get well real fast. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a Blessed Day ................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:13:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/17/2023 11:58:00 AM

It’s such a drag to be sick, Anne-Lise, and I know exactly how Covid feels. Get as much rest as you need and drink lots of fluids and eventually, you’ll feel better. I hope it happens soon for you…

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:13:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 11:31:00 AM

I hope you feel better really soon. Drink lots of tea, and lime, etc ah ofcourse you know best dear Nurse, but i can feel your words, the worst i got sick during this time many years ago was when i got Swine flu. Take care of yourself dear Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:12:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Ink :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/17/2023 10:58:00 AM

Dear dear heart get better soon, we love you xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:12:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/17/2023 10:41:00 AM

Your words are so realistic - “half-withered” - perfect description!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2023 2:12:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Mala :) - hugs