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14.12.2024

Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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Strayed Sheep Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Di11y Da11y

6th place in the contest

 

Explore contrasts in nature - farthest to the west Time is moving peacefully as sand in an hourglass A network of well-trodden paths which has attracted artists for generations Sheep and lambs graze happily here Idyllic, yet wild Blue sea that stretches to the horizon in all directions Scan the sky, take a minute or two notice the white alabaster gulls Salty wind tickles the nostrils Landscape with sheep in its rightful place A euphoric feeling of happiness

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Date: 12/18/2024 4:25:00 AM
Superb and peaceful:)
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Date: 12/17/2024 7:55:00 AM
Anne-Lise, I do like how you suggest taking in the whole scene. That expresses a talent for looking at the world not as isolated scenes, but as more. You express so much wisdom and kindness. A pleasure to read!
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Date: 12/16/2024 5:11:00 AM
Beautiful image and beautiful poem. The picture gives an idyllic ambiance. It is so much fun watching cows and sheep grazing in grass lands. At another end, there is the beauty of the aquamarine sea. Well composed, dear Anne. Have a Happy Christmas time. Love and hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2024 5:19:00 AM
- Thanks for your lovely comment, Valsa :) - Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones :) - hugs
Date: 12/15/2024 9:34:00 AM
So descriptive and fitting for the picture prompt dear anne lise, i love how youve also written about time, and how youv painted imagery, readers can see through your words without even looking at the artwork! So creative! Pleasure reading your work. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2024 10:17:00 AM
- A picture that speaks of time, place and beauty for me, Ink :) - Harmony in nature :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 12/15/2024 9:32:00 AM
A euphoric feeling of happiness is the perfect explanation for describing this lovely poem. Your kind heart has drawn an idyllic painting that touches the heart. Hugs.
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Date: 12/15/2024 10:13:00 AM
- I see sheep outside where I live, they are part of my everyday life :) - It's cozy to have them here on pasture, Victor :) - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 12/15/2024 6:34:00 AM
An amazing poem with a calming panorama of the grazing sheep painted by your creative words my dear poet friend Anne-lise. I enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. Best wishes in the contests too. Have a wonderful Christmas to you and to your family too my dear. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
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Date: 12/15/2024 10:10:00 AM
- Glad you enjoy "my painting" (wish I could paint so beautifully) - Thanks for the lovely comment, my friend Len :) - Merry Christmas to you too :) - hugs
Date: 12/15/2024 5:46:00 AM
A lovely free verse Anne-Lise, goes with the picture well, the scene is described beautifully… Beryl
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Date: 12/15/2024 10:07:00 AM
- It's a beautiful painting, Beryl - Thank you very much :) - hugs
Date: 12/14/2024 11:32:00 PM
You did the challenge in a very interesting way. Describing the artistic values!
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Date: 12/15/2024 10:06:00 AM
- I usually try to make it different from what other contest entries... wise or foolish, time will tell :) - Thanks, Andrea :) - hugs
Date: 12/14/2024 7:08:00 PM
Anne-Lise, your beautiful poem is a fine companion to the idyllic scene of the painting. Love it! Best wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 12/15/2024 10:03:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the good wishes and lovely comment, Evelyn :) - hugs
Date: 12/14/2024 4:28:00 PM
I can see the artistry of your poetic endeavor dear Anne. Merry Christmas to you and your family, love stay well.
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Date: 12/15/2024 10:02:00 AM
- Thanks for your comment, Vie Rose :) - Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones :) - hugs
Date: 12/14/2024 3:33:00 PM
Hello Anne -Lisa, i can vision this in my mind. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2024 11:05:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, Your welcome. Hugs. Merry Christmas. All the best for the New Year. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 12/15/2024 10:00:00 AM
- That was nice... thanks for your comment, Darlene :) - hugs
Date: 12/14/2024 1:38:00 PM
We have many fields of sheep where I am, they're part of nature's landscape. Good luck Anne-Lise, hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Date: 12/15/2024 9:59:00 AM
- Thanks for your comment, Tom ... yes, they are part of nature and my everyday life :) - hugs
Date: 12/14/2024 1:25:00 PM
this is lovely, anne-lise! some of my favorite vacations have taken me through scenes just like you've described and i love seeing the sheep...
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Date: 12/15/2024 9:57:00 AM
- I see sheep grazing right outside my door year round...they have bells around their necks...I like looking at them - Thanks for your comment, Ilene :) - hugs
Date: 12/14/2024 1:15:00 PM
Very nicely done, Anne-Lise. Best wishes in the contest. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Hugs//Charlie x
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2024 9:53:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment - Merry Christmas to you too, Charlie :) - hugs

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