- Seductive Melody - As Captures Me -

Icy water flowing
   from the mountain rivers
   Heard a song of the wind
   A song that touches
   Thaw the snow from the past year
   Will get the sun to glow
   Is there angels sang

   My attention drew me close
   The wind and cold - my senses are open
   The melody is grabbing it catches me
   Just standing there and looking up at the sky
   The joy and awareness - enjoy the moment
   Let go of the breath
   The wind song or angels song
   It brings peace to my inner

   Alone with the mighty mountain
   The feeling being free - a freedom without links
   Life is all about crossing boundaries
   Feel the blood freezing as mountain water in your veins
   In joy and humility
   Song of the wind - listen
   Dance with life and angels




   27.06.2014
   A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 5:47:00 PM
There is certainly nothing better than enjoying the moment especially in nature..what a lovely write dear Anne Lise...
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Date: 8/9/2014 5:17:00 AM
- Pleased you liked it, dear Donna :) - Thank you, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/6/2014 9:23:00 PM
Lovely write, I enjoyed reading! Deidrexx
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Date: 8/7/2014 4:41:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Deidre. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/2/2014 6:34:00 PM
your writing breathes free. Reminds me of when I lived in the Smoky Mountains.
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Date: 8/3/2014 5:41:00 AM
- Pleased you liked it, JSL !! - Thank you, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/21/2014 9:31:00 PM
Brings a chill even in the middle of this sultry summer here in the southern US... Nicely penned..
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Date: 7/22/2014 3:40:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/20/2014 9:15:00 AM
This is quite a special poem Anne-Lise, I write quite a few Angel poems myself, your poetry is really lovely...Keith.
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Date: 7/20/2014 12:45:00 PM
- Thank you Keith, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/17/2014 6:04:00 AM
you make life feel so beautiful ,
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:00:00 PM
- Thank you Cynthia, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2014 11:24:00 AM
Anne Lise Thoroughly enjoy your use of aspects of nature to ground the spirituality of this poem. With second thought, all of your poems I have read. Glenn
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Date: 7/15/2014 12:11:00 PM
- Thank you Glenn, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2014 6:22:00 PM
such vivid imagery in your words Anne Lise this poem is a wow hugs
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Date: 7/6/2014 3:34:00 AM
- Thank you Shadow, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2014 6:16:00 AM
The song of the mountains is beautiful and haunting. It has always called to me.
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Date: 7/5/2014 7:25:00 AM
- Thank you Monterey, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/4/2014 4:38:00 AM
Beautiful and serene melody that captures the heart. Lovely imagery....reminds me of Song of Norway (saw it 42 years ago!) Have a nice weekend, Anne Lise! // paul
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Date: 7/5/2014 5:43:00 AM
- Amazing that you can remember so long back .... (I'm not good at remembering the year far back ) - // A-L :))
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/4/2014 2:37:00 PM
Yes, it is a movie; saw it in England ca 1972/3.
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Date: 7/4/2014 8:33:00 AM
- A movie (?) .... - Thank you Paul, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/2/2014 4:53:00 PM
This poem sprinkled serenity and harmony upon my heart dear Annelise.
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Date: 7/3/2014 3:27:00 AM
- Thank you Charmaine, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/2/2014 8:48:00 AM
The freedom of the mountains. Love the wild places, enjoyed your writing about them.
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:50:00 AM
- Thank you Scott, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/2/2014 7:12:00 AM
Very nice write, it captures ones imagination ??
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:08:00 AM
- Thank you Poet Shi, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/2/2014 5:33:00 AM
I have a tuned wind chime outside my kitchen. It plays such angelic melodies just for me every time the wind blows. Lovely writing. Anne Lise. Thank you for sharing. bfn Elaine
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Date: 7/2/2014 6:01:00 AM
- I have some "wind chimes" in my garden (Hanging in the trees) .... beautiful to listen to :) - Thank you Elaine, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/1/2014 1:56:00 PM
"Life is all about......angles", beautifully captured in the body. Genius, loved the poem. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 7/1/2014 1:59:00 PM
- Thank you dear friend bl, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2014 9:11:00 PM
Nature's beauty and the songs of the wind always bring to me so much peace and comfort. I feel so relaxed and refreshed after reading your beautiful words. A wonderful write, Anne-Lise! :)
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Date: 7/1/2014 3:28:00 AM
- Thank you Kelly, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2014 6:16:00 PM
Love the nature and the lovly part about the icy water and mountain streams line the best and not just because it's hooter than all get out here lol Love your imagery in this beautiful write, Happy Fourth of July to you also lady glad you enjoyed my Little miss libery poem it is about my grand daughter Ivy, she is my firer craker, cheri
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Date: 7/1/2014 3:27:00 AM
- Thank you Cherl, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2014 12:51:00 PM
So warm and peaceful, I get your vibes, Anne. You bring me joy-- thank you!
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Date: 6/30/2014 1:04:00 PM
- Thank you Leon, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2014 12:43:00 PM
This was very pleasant to read It touches the soul and makes you feel the peace. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 6/30/2014 12:46:00 PM
- Thank you Lucilla, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2014 3:17:00 PM
this sizzles in a most charming way, anne.. such a fine write dancing with life and angels.. best of sunday!.. huggs
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:26:00 AM
- Thank you Nette, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2014 11:48:00 AM
Wonderful ! really enjoyed reading every bit of it :) - Sekar
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Date: 6/29/2014 11:56:00 AM
- Thank you Sekar, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2014 6:48:00 AM
This is one of your best works..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the sharing it with us..Have a great day..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:52:00 AM
- Thank you Sara, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/29/2014 3:26:00 AM
Anne Lise this is a wonderful write, it flows perfectly...hope you are both well..David
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:53:00 AM
- Thank you David, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - Pleasant to see you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/28/2014 9:01:00 PM
Wow, this is so totally wonderful. I can hear the angels, Anne Lise, they are singing our song from the tops of those mountains. Very well done, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:52:00 AM
- Thank you Robert, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/28/2014 8:40:00 PM
Wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing this with us. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:51:00 AM
- Thank you Jon, for the nice visit and comments on my poem: - Seductive Melody - As Captures Me - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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