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- Sad Violin -

No one can see it,
but it is there
Dark and cold ... as wet thick fog
The thoughts go crazy
A sad melody replay
Fight with a sword, vision failed

Drowning in mournful tears
Kills the inside of the chest
With fear of death lullaby
Always fighting, demon of the deadly sins
Give the crying heart something to live for









19.03.2017
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Gary Bateman Date: 4/15/2017 2:44:00 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! Best Easter Holiday Wishes from Ingrid and me. My original earlier comments below on "Sad Violin" still apply, of course, on this marvelous free verse write. It's indeed a very well-rendered verse with its aura of distinct sadness and emotion. I'm very pleased to see it made the "Best New Poems List." Again, Blessed Easter Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Cheers, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/16/2017 12:55:00 PM - Always nice to see you, Gary :) - Best wishes to you and Ingrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Francis J Grasso Date: 4/13/2017 6:51:00 PM Sad and lonely poem, and very very pretty. Nicely done, Sunshine, ,,,Fran Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/14/2017 8:06:00 AM - Thanks for the friendly comments, Francis :) - Appreciated your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Doug Vinson Date: 4/11/2017 11:32:00 PM Ah yes, Anne-Lise, I can hear that piercing sound.... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/12/2017 11:04:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Doug :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/30/2017 11:35:00 AM The picture and your words bring about a sad feeling. Well written. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2017 12:34:00 PM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 3/28/2017 10:24:00 AM Dear Anne-Lise, This one's an instant FAV for me!! The words in your verses, against the backdrop of the sad lady playing the violin, amplify the raw emotion and sadness of the situation you're describing. Every verse in your write gives the reader a palpable image to cling to. A magnificent write for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2017 3:09:00 AM - Thanks Gary, I really appreciate your positive comments a 7 and also the fave, thanks for your kind visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/26/2017 9:03:00 AM Painfully sad, Anne-lise, but the melody is well brought out:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2017 11:09:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/23/2017 9:29:00 AM Deliciously dark! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2017 11:07:00 AM - Thanks Richard, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci Date: 3/21/2017 3:38:00 AM Hello Anne. Good Morning. Usually no one can see. You have described this quiet pain perfectly. And yes also perfect is the sad violin to fit the mood and situation. Well done and understandable. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2017 11:08:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball Date: 3/21/2017 12:59:00 AM Absolutely beautiful Anne. A very poignant piece and the pic is great. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2017 11:08:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/20/2017 5:37:00 PM Sunshine...the depth of emotion and struggle are clearly transmitted to the reader. We all need something to live for....and conversely...something to die for. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2017 11:08:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 3/20/2017 4:06:00 PM A dark write Anne... and an inspiring image.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2017 11:06:00 AM - Thanks Joseph, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/20/2017 1:37:00 PM ohh, anne... deep, dark but very inspiring... you shine with this superb work!..happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2017 11:07:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet Date: 3/20/2017 8:54:00 AM Your words speak in a melancholy abstract voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought, like the crying strings of a sad violin, Emile. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2017 11:04:00 AM - Thanks Emile, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/20/2017 6:10:00 AM Music always seems to soothe the troubled soul Anne-Lise. Lovely, though sad. 7 ; Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2017 11:04:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams Date: 3/20/2017 3:57:00 AM Beautiful imagery, beautiful words Anne-Lise. I can hear the violin, the sad sweet notes, I grew up hearing my dad play, and it was wonderful. A big 7+ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2017 5:35:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan Date: 3/20/2017 1:01:00 AM so dark and deep but beautiful... Loved the last line... Brilliantly done Anne... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2017 5:34:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/19/2017 7:20:00 PM Gloomy melancholic masterpiece dear, Anne-Lise! A seven and hugs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2017 5:32:00 AM - Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie Date: 3/19/2017 4:50:00 PM The anguish comes alive with terrific imagery and despair filled notes in this haunting piece. Exceptional writing Anne-Lise :-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2017 5:28:00 AM - Thanks Lynn, I really appreciate your positive comments a 7 and also the fave, thanks for your kind visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/19/2017 4:22:00 PM I love this, the poem so dark, and with the photo, I imagine the sadness of the violin playing! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2017 5:31:00 AM - Thank you very much, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 3/19/2017 4:18:00 PM I can hear the sadness in every note...you relayed that feeling well Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2017 5:30:00 AM - Thank you very much, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)