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The music she makes to forget her pain, only draws her into a world where she cannot see a thing.:

No one can see it, but it is there Dark and cold ... as wet thick fog The thoughts go crazy A sad melody replay Fight with a sword, vision failed Drowning in mournful tears Kills the inside of the chest With fear of death lullaby Always fighting, demon of the deadly sins Give the crying heart something to live for 19.03.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Gary Bateman

Date: 4/15/2017 2:44:00 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! Best Easter Holiday Wishes from Ingrid and me. My original earlier comments below on "Sad Violin" still apply, of course, on this marvelous free verse write. It's indeed a very well-rendered verse with its aura of distinct sadness and emotion. I'm very pleased to see it made the "Best New Poems List." Again, Blessed Easter Wishes from Ingrid and me!! Cheers, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2017 12:55:00 PM

- Always nice to see you, Gary :) - Best wishes to you and Ingrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 4/13/2017 6:51:00 PM

Sad and lonely poem, and very very pretty. Nicely done, Sunshine, ,,,Fran

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2017 8:06:00 AM

- Thanks for the friendly comments, Francis :) - Appreciated your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/11/2017 11:32:00 PM

Ah yes, Anne-Lise, I can hear that piercing sound....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2017 11:04:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Doug :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/30/2017 11:35:00 AM

The picture and your words bring about a sad feeling. Well written. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2017 12:34:00 PM

- Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/28/2017 10:24:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, This one's an instant FAV for me!! The words in your verses, against the backdrop of the sad lady playing the violin, amplify the raw emotion and sadness of the situation you're describing. Every verse in your write gives the reader a palpable image to cling to. A magnificent write for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2017 3:09:00 AM

- Thanks Gary, I really appreciate your positive comments a 7 and also the fave, thanks for your kind visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/26/2017 9:03:00 AM

Painfully sad, Anne-lise, but the melody is well brought out:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2017 11:09:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/23/2017 9:29:00 AM

Deliciously dark!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2017 11:07:00 AM

- Thanks Richard, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/21/2017 3:38:00 AM

Hello Anne. Good Morning. Usually no one can see. You have described this quiet pain perfectly. And yes also perfect is the sad violin to fit the mood and situation. Well done and understandable.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2017 11:08:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 3/21/2017 12:59:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Anne. A very poignant piece and the pic is great. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2017 11:08:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/20/2017 5:37:00 PM

Sunshine...the depth of emotion and struggle are clearly transmitted to the reader. We all need something to live for....and conversely...something to die for.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2017 11:08:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/20/2017 4:06:00 PM

A dark write Anne... and an inspiring image..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2017 11:06:00 AM

- Thanks Joseph, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/20/2017 1:37:00 PM

ohh, anne... deep, dark but very inspiring... you shine with this superb work!..happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2017 11:07:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/20/2017 8:54:00 AM

Your words speak in a melancholy abstract voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought, like the crying strings of a sad violin, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2017 11:04:00 AM

- Thanks Emile, for your kind visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/20/2017 6:10:00 AM

Music always seems to soothe the troubled soul Anne-Lise. Lovely, though sad. 7 ;

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2017 11:04:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 3/20/2017 3:57:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, beautiful words Anne-Lise. I can hear the violin, the sad sweet notes, I grew up hearing my dad play, and it was wonderful. A big 7+

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2017 5:35:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/20/2017 1:01:00 AM

so dark and deep but beautiful... Loved the last line... Brilliantly done Anne...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2017 5:34:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit and lovely comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/19/2017 7:20:00 PM

Gloomy melancholic masterpiece dear, Anne-Lise! A seven and hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2017 5:32:00 AM

- Thanks for your kind visit a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/19/2017 4:50:00 PM

The anguish comes alive with terrific imagery and despair filled notes in this haunting piece. Exceptional writing Anne-Lise :-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2017 5:28:00 AM

- Thanks Lynn, I really appreciate your positive comments a 7 and also the fave, thanks for your kind visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/19/2017 4:22:00 PM

I love this, the poem so dark, and with the photo, I imagine the sadness of the violin playing!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2017 5:31:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/19/2017 4:18:00 PM

I can hear the sadness in every note...you relayed that feeling well

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2017 5:30:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)