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Richer than noblest wealth
                                rainy quiet morning
                                Ripe thoughts buzz in the brain
                                Roses fearfully thorns
                                Remember when I'm gone
                                rainbow will shine one day
                                ~ reunification







                                                17/04/2021
                                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                       Pleiades R Poetry Contest
                                   Sponsored by: Kim Merryman
                                       5th place in the contest

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/5/2021 11:05:00 AM

Wonderful picture. A beautiful spring day outside and sun is shining brightly for us today. Have a wonderful day. Hope you are recovering nicely. love phyl

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2021 8:31:00 PM

A lovely picture accompanies your poem to ponder!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/27/2021 10:41:00 AM

Hi my dear soul sister , I have been thinking of you. Hope you are well - I love your poem and wish you all the health in the world. Hugs and blessing Sunshine smile - the rainbow matches this name! Jennifer.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/25/2021 7:03:00 AM

love this beautiful write

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/24/2021 3:24:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, I hope you are doing well; I haven't seen any new poems for almost a week; I hope everything is well, and congratulations on your win, warm hugs and regards

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/22/2021 7:19:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, your lovely poetic pen spills vivid imagery that inspires one's heart and soul. Congratulations for your fine win. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 4/22/2021 7:18:00 AM

This is so lovely Anne... I wrote on Rainbow... Great imagery and the use of the letter R. Congrats on your win. Have a blessed day dear friend.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Silent One

Date: 4/21/2021 2:42:00 AM

Great use of the letter R here... you do these so well..

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/20/2021 3:57:00 AM

Beautiful! Perfect!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2021 6:50:00 PM

You made this look so easy Anne-Lise. I loved the smooth flow of your Pleiades. I am so happy to see this one a winner. Congratulations my friend. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo