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"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin, 1853 When life suddenly changes, will it destroy you or make you stronger? All the little pieces that were once gathered now everything is chaos Sucked up by the darkness A broken mirror, a kind of inner self-portrait all these pieces are my vulnerable soul They help explain the journey of my life Many of the pieces in this puzzle needs renovation A soundtrack of the melancholy of darkness But first I have to remove the weight from my shoulders Pacific waves with music for weddings and funerals 26/08/2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved All The Little Pieces Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 2nd place in the contest

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Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2020 2:44:00 AM

Sunshine, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this wonderful write _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2020 2:50:00 AM

- Hi Constance, thank you very much for my place on your winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/4/2020 5:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write. I love your line, "Many of the pieces in this puzzle." (In life) A wonderful picture. Enjoy your win and day................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2020 2:14:00 AM

- Many thanks for visits, comments and congratulations Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 9/4/2020 11:40:00 AM

LOVE IT!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2020 2:13:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/4/2020 5:15:00 AM

Congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your win. It's a powerful poem, passionately expressed! Love the picture - it's stunning! Hugs, Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2020 2:14:00 AM

- Mala, many thanks for visits, comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/3/2020 5:08:00 PM

Contratulations, Anne-Lise, on your top win in this contest!! We can see and feel the pieces that have fallen apart in this excellent piece!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2020 12:45:00 AM

- Hi Newton, many thanks for visits, comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 9/2/2020 2:46:00 PM

They say whatever don't kill you only serves to make you stronger. From time to time I have questioned that. Great job my friend. God Bless, \JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2020 1:29:00 AM

- Yes, sometimes we can wonder about that, Judy - The soul will always get some scars that will never disappear - Thank you very much for your valuable comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/31/2020 8:12:00 AM

Wow Sunshine smile dear soul sister this is aaaaaaaaaaaaamazing poetry - kudos my friend -'But first I have to remove the weight from my shoulders' deep and powerful words, Blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2020 2:12:00 AM

- Jenny, thank you very much for your valuable comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/27/2020 10:58:00 PM

Love this, the poetry so powerful, The question answered.. Stay Safe, Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2020 5:46:00 AM

- Harry, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/27/2020 7:25:00 PM

Amazing, Sunshine, love the imagery you created. Good luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2020 5:45:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, thank you for your comments Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2020 5:17:00 PM

A Picasso in poetry. Sweet contest entry, Anne-Lise! ~ Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2020 5:45:00 AM

- Thank you very much Gershon, appreciate your words :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Ball

Date: 8/27/2020 3:41:00 PM

Excellent Anne-Lise. So beautifully worded with such emotion. Nice description. Nice job. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2020 5:44:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your visit & comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/27/2020 8:57:00 AM

Oh my this is one of your very best poems Sunshine, I love it, its going in my fav. xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2020 10:28:00 AM

- I really appreciate your "fav" ... and your lovely comments ... thank you very much, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelli White

Date: 8/27/2020 6:37:00 AM

Beautiful decoupage of life. :)kelli

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2020 8:42:00 AM

- Thank you very much, appreciate your words Kelli :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/27/2020 5:40:00 AM

Waves of wisdom...well done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2020 8:41:00 AM

- Thank you Joe, wisdom or not ... life is never a dance on roses :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/27/2020 4:00:00 AM

This is exquisite. I simply love it. I hope you win, dear friend. May God bless you richly

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2020 8:40:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, thank you for your support Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/26/2020 5:21:00 PM

Such delicate poetry has a brilliance that shines from all directions Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2020 8:38:00 AM

- Hi Caren, thank you very much for your valuable comments :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/26/2020 2:03:00 PM

All those daunting pieces of the puzzle--well articulated echoes of life, Anne-Lise. All the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2020 8:37:00 AM

- A puzzle can be difficult to put together into a perfect picture, Vijay :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)