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- Promise Me Tomorrow -

For absolutely no reason at all
The storm was withered in the stagnant air
It seems so incredibly crystal clear quiet

Even if you wanted to paint ... no colors could express
Let this moment pass in quiet gratitude and joy
The real meaning of life bound with ribbon of love

When the sun wakes up tomorrow
Give me a kiss that says everything will be fine





A-L Andresen 27.05.2015 :)
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John Hamilton Date: 12/7/2015 4:00:00 PM Lovely descriptive and emotive write, wish I would have discovered your writings sooner, very nicely done! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/8/2015 3:22:00 AM ...... I have many ...... you are welcome :)))) - Thanks for visiting and comments, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Milton Robertson Date: 7/1/2015 7:58:00 AM Anne, you do lovely work, you are a true poet. I am still trying to find out what poetry is, all it's different forms. Now I know you are one I can use as a guide. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/1/2015 10:31:00 AM - I'm only a small "hobby poet" or a "kitchen table poet" ..... but thanks for beautiful words, Milton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 6/20/2015 8:23:00 PM Well penned! Romantic, lovely and hopeful Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/21/2015 5:46:00 AM - Njeri, I'm glad you enjoy my poem - Promise Me Tomorrow - :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian Date: 6/3/2015 2:08:00 PM That is so beautiful Thanks for your kind feedback. I have not been in a while but as always God always brings a new season. Things are good got a new job which now gives more time to do poetry and compassion ministry. Just waiting to get on a team of soup run where u go out and give food to thé homeless. Church sorts it out we just take it out. Have a good evening Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/3/2015 2:13:00 PM - One enjoyable job, give to people in need - You're lucky .... and they are lucky to have you - Wish you all the best, Diane - Thanks for visiting and nice comments :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Lewis Raynes Date: 6/2/2015 8:54:00 PM This is a promise I want someone to keep for me. A simple happy promise for tomorrow, i love it, thankyou for this poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/3/2015 3:27:00 AM - I'll send you a hugs with desire for a good day tomorrow, Lewis - Thanks for visiting and nice comments :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 6/2/2015 2:58:00 PM Hello Anne-Lise . . . I forgot to mark the "7" in my previous comment, and so here goes with this note. Cheers, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/3/2015 3:24:00 AM ............. and especially thank you for a "fav." and a 7 !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 6/2/2015 2:57:00 PM Dear Anne-Lise, The message portrayed here is indeed multi-level: A Storm; Passage of a Moment; Real Meaning of Life; and Sun Waking Up on the Morrow; and the Kiss of Affirmation. Incredibly powerful images presented with striking brevity. I really like this one!! 7 + FAV!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/3/2015 3:22:00 AM - A kiss can say more than words - thank you for visiting and great comments, dear Gary - Always a pleasure to see you on my poems :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort Date: 5/31/2015 10:38:00 AM This poem is one of those multi-level creations that can be interpreted literally (weather) and then on the emotional side (tempest). Some disagreements do create stillness (in that communication ends). I suppose it is normal that storms occur in the household. I only wish (as expressed in this work of art), that all will be well soon. You are such an inspiration! You have given me a new visualization tool to use to bring back the sun. Very useful--thanks! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/31/2015 11:01:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Duke - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 5/31/2015 8:01:00 AM A special way to look forward to tomorrow, Anne Lise! Very lovely and romantic. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/31/2015 11:01:00 AM - Paul, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak Date: 5/31/2015 7:48:00 AM Truly romantic and beautiful! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/31/2015 11:00:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Monterey - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 5/30/2015 6:59:00 PM Beautiful Anne Lise!!!! Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/31/2015 10:59:00 AM - Cecilia, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 5/30/2015 1:46:00 PM Faving this Anne! Keith;-) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/30/2015 2:23:00 PM - Thank you, I greatly appreciate one fav. Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 5/30/2015 12:01:00 PM "When the sun wakes up tomorrow" such a beautiful way to say that. 7++ :~) Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/30/2015 1:24:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ndaba Sibanda Date: 5/30/2015 10:25:00 AM Simply beautiful, Andresen! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/30/2015 12:19:00 PM - Ndaba, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 5/29/2015 4:42:00 PM very beautifully painted a truly romantic pen anne lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/30/2015 12:17:00 PM - Liam, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - Always a pleasure to receive a visit from you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish Date: 5/29/2015 3:13:00 PM Sweet, romantic poem. Summer is just starting here in NYC. I hope you find what you are looking for! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/30/2015 11:58:00 AM - Matthew, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome Date: 5/29/2015 1:06:00 PM I knew this feeling very well a few times. a very profound and clever write. Well done best wishes. Pete. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2015 1:34:00 PM - Peter, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neva Romaine Date: 5/29/2015 9:02:00 AM Hey Anne Lise, stopped by for a visit and found this wonderful poem. I find it filled with hope! Beautifully written and expressed. Be Blessed, Neva Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2015 10:21:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Neva - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/29/2015 9:01:00 AM So romantic! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2015 10:17:00 AM - Richard, thanks for the nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun Date: 5/29/2015 7:35:00 AM Absolutely beautiful and very inspiring write this is my very dear friend, Anne Lise! I'm Hugging tightly this precious gem and you! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great weekend with lots of sunshine your way! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2015 10:17:00 AM - Good to see you dear friend Leonora - Hope all is well with you - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Lewis Holmes Date: 5/29/2015 3:26:00 AM nice realist write anne...and thanks for the comment!...peter Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2015 3:39:00 AM - Peter, thanks for the nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/29/2015 3:20:00 AM this is so inspiring and well done, anne.. there's always a raibow!.. happy friday!.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2015 3:38:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Stefan Maxima Date: 5/28/2015 4:00:00 PM Beautiful ,my friend Ilike this poem! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2015 2:38:00 AM - Stefan, thanks for the nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/28/2015 3:35:00 PM sweet line: life bound with a ribbon of love!!Love the ending line too. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2015 2:39:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Thomas Martin Date: 5/28/2015 3:01:00 PM Good read,Anne! Great actually. . . A short poem that says it all. You wrote it so well, even memorable, especially the last two lines. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2015 2:38:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Thomas - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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