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Tom was going to Norway
                              arrival in Haugesund on Friday
                                became seasick at the quay
                                    belly bump and spray
                             his wife dreamed of Broadway

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                                          28.04.2023
                                   Anne-Lise Andresen
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Date: 5/3/2023 1:00:00 PM
Excellent Limerick. Pangie
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Date: 4/30/2023 12:55:00 PM
ha ha ha an absolute gem Annelise - poor Tom - I went to norway for honeymoon and got food poisoning - to say i was sick was an understatement lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/30/2023 2:31:00 AM
Hope you're feeling better, Tom.
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Date: 4/29/2023 2:16:00 PM
Lol I nearly missed this gem Anne, brilliant. We should get the timetable soon so I'll be in touch. Take more than a few waves to upset my stomach haha. Roll on three weeks time. Tom PS good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/29/2023 12:09:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, oh ,, poor Tom being sea sick at the quary. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/29/2023 5:02:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, I have been sick sick twice. it is not pleasant.You are welcome. . Hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2023 12:24:00 PM
- Seasickness is terrible ... I have experienced it several times ... (this is from imagination :) - Many thanks for your comment, Darlene :) - hugs
Date: 4/29/2023 8:03:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Poor Tom and his wife. Thanks for sharing the information and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 4/29/2023 2:32:00 AM
What a fun one, Anne-lise:) great to hear that Tom is coming to your hometown:) have a great time:)
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Date: 4/28/2023 8:28:00 PM
Funny, Sunshine the imagery of the "belly bump and spray" turned my stomach. A turbulent reverie! B0l
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Date: 4/28/2023 7:34:00 PM
i hate seasickness, but i love ships and dreams, thanks for the enjoyable reading
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2023 4:26:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Yann :) - hugs
Date: 4/28/2023 6:25:00 PM
Very funny Anne-Lise. Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/28/2023 1:53:00 PM
Poor Tom! What a time to get seasick, when on holiday with the Mrs. Whether this is true or not, it’s better than a trip to Turkey and getting the trots. Love the Lim Anne-Lise. Belle
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2023 1:56:00 PM
- Tom is coming to my hometown next month, Belle ...hope he doesn't get seasick :) - Many thanks for your comment and good wishes :) - hugs
Date: 4/28/2023 1:42:00 PM
Oh goodness, Anne-Lise! We're turning the limerick contest into 'Welcome to Tom's World." I just posted one and Tom is there, too! Good luck!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2023 1:50:00 PM
- Welcome to Tom's World :) - Many thanks for your comment and good wishes, Lin :) - hugs
Date: 4/28/2023 1:28:00 PM
Lol! Anne-Lise, This is funny! Tom is going to like this. Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed the read:-)Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2023 1:34:00 PM
- I hope so, Alexis ... many thanks for your comment and good wishes :) - hugs
Date: 4/28/2023 1:19:00 PM
A cute/fun write. What a sea picture. Have a great day/weekend....................
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2023 1:21:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs
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