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25.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Poetic Inhalation Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Di11y Da11y

6nd place in the contest

Between anemones where the soil smells damp Lungs are filled with poetry Destiny, the exact moment Breathing, embroidered cosmos rhythm Synonym, a balance setting Metaphors sticks to the palate - sweet chewing gum which grows and grows ... must spit it out

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2024 7:01:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your "Poetic Inhalation" write. I enjoyed reading your creative write again. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/9/2024 7:31:00 PM

"Breathing, embroidered cosmos rhythm" - As usual very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/6/2024 12:05:00 PM

It's pretty much the way it happens. Often it's just an observation that inspires us to be creative. It is a lot of fun really and you look at it in a most interesting and direct way.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/31/2024 7:13:00 AM

What imagination Anne-Lise. Delightful! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2024 11:31:00 AM

Very nice!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/26/2024 8:43:00 PM

An entertaining poem of poems being created. It astounded me with the brutal honesty. Very good poem.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/26/2024 8:10:00 PM

What a terrific analogy between expanding chewing gum and plump metaphors to spit out. Truly top notch creative writing! Inhalation + exhalation on a poet's page. Best wishes, Brian

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/26/2024 10:43:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative write/picture. Looks like we both did this one. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away......................

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/26/2024 10:10:00 AM

Your poem is a masterful reflection of the exquisite artistry of inhalation poetry, Anne-lise. I like its distinctiveness and the eloquent manner in which you have articulated your thoughts, particularly the concluding lines.

Jay Narain

Date: 1/26/2024 9:45:00 AM

Creative poem. GL in contest.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/26/2024 7:55:00 AM

Creative write really dear anne lise. I love how unique this is and the way youv phrased your thoughts especially the ending; i think D D will love this one, best wishes for the contest, pleasure always reading your work

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/26/2024 5:17:00 AM

May your contest be a winner. Flowers bring out the best in us. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/26/2024 12:56:00 AM

You have to get them down on paper quickly or you might choke. Best of luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Tom

Silent One

Date: 1/25/2024 11:22:00 AM

To released your poetic exhalation here... nicely done my friend..