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- Perfect Balance -

The power I yearn to catch A surplus beauty overflowing hearts Dew settles, sprinkled gently a wet blanket Star leather leads me into unknown territory My senses are imprisoned and takes my breath Through a crack in the window I can see this magnificent In a moment, soft breeze of the evening an amazing view Hypnotised by the nature and it's miraculous glow The image of happiness, on the menu this evening Cobwebs of dream seekers hidden magic In four chambers one corner dusty twilight appears Under silk covers rising and falling oceans mist over Back breathing from the salted well drawing a bridge of sighs Under a cradle of moonshine drunken beams starlight Rivers of jewels running down the mountain Inside droplets our soul is set free Dew drowning under the fountains Of eternal beauty enveloped A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 27.01.2017 (01 - 17) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Gary Bateman

Date: 3/10/2017 5:54:00 PM

Liam and Anne-Lise, A perfect write for a perfect occasion--much power and emotion!! Superb collaboration!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Jeanie Bennett

Date: 2/9/2017 9:56:00 AM

I love--happiness being on the menu--xo

Akkina Downing

Date: 2/9/2017 6:38:00 AM

Fantastic piece of collaboration Liam and Anne-Lise. I love it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/9/2017 5:37:00 AM

- Dear Liam .....hugs and best wishes for a lovely day :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/9/2017 5:20:00 AM

Hi Liam n' Anne- Lise!:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^