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- Our Two Stars Sparkle as One Soul -


They whisper their sonnets and surrender their thrones gracefully
Consuming tunes sweetly echoing and crowning a heart with love 
Your gentle words, your tender touch, so much divine beauty as
Our two stars sparkle as one soul with one golden smile of eternity

When the sun rises in the east and the sun sets in the west we know
While looking upon a dream holding the deepest vision awestruck
The new sun across the sky passes so the soul can reach its destiny
And you vanquished all doubts of me burning as one flame on fire 

Knowing the winds in Heaven mix forever in a powerful divine glory
With one angel standing before our eyes as destiny sparks its promise
That in God’s way it must be the message of love we feel so strongly
Embracing forever the alchemy of two stars blazing hot with emotion
 
Dreams and fantasies merge with this wonderful bliss ever so gently
As faraway rising is your sunshine holding hands warmly as a regal gift 
And a truth filled with blessing, deeply peaceful and complete as we pray
Under a bridge of hope with colors kissing the heart and soul of a dream

Love and devotion pervade our eternal desire of oneness with the Lord God
As His heavenly guard ushers our souls together with purpose before Him
And as a choir of angels sing their majestic paeans honoring this moment
We see now our dreams melding as one as our two stars sparkle as one soul 






Anne-Lise Andresen, Liam McDaid, and Gary Bateman – A Collaborated
Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved – June 11, 2015 (Unrhymed Quatrain)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/2/2015 11:40:00 AM
This is lovely Anne Lise :) nice collaboration ! Thank you for coming to read my Love Marilyn, she was/ is my fav girl from age 9-10 when I started paying attention to movie stars :) xo
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Date: 9/2/2015 11:45:00 AM
- Marylyn's family came from Norway - My Town: Haugesund :) - Thank you for your visit and your comments, dear Debbie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2015 5:45:00 AM
Great work you all, enjoyed it and thanks for the read. cheers Kev
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Date: 8/2/2015 7:47:00 AM
- Kevin, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/1/2015 10:21:00 AM
Excellent collab my lovely lovely friend. Done very nicely. A 7 i feel. Loved always,bl
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Date: 7/1/2015 10:34:00 AM
- Thank you for the beautiful words my friend, Bl - Nice to see you back :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/27/2015 4:06:00 PM
Simply awesome. love phyl
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Date: 6/27/2015 4:58:00 PM
- Dear Phyllis glad that you enjoy our poem: - Two Stars Sparkle as One Soul - Thank you for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) -
Date: 6/14/2015 3:17:00 PM
Awesome !!! I like your poem ...superb !!
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Date: 6/15/2015 2:10:00 AM
- Shereeen, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/14/2015 1:49:00 AM
Stunning, a menage a trois of poetry!
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:39:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/14/2015 12:43:00 AM
Anne Lise, GAry, and Liam: Super poem is this!!! =') beautiful lines and just welling of imagery and yes yes lovely! ~Olive ELoisa
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:39:00 AM
- Olive, super thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/13/2015 3:19:00 PM
a triumvirate of souls so connected through beautiful poetry.. clap, clap to all of you... have a fun sunday , anne..huggs
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:38:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/13/2015 8:05:00 AM
Anne Lise Gary and Liam - what can I say - simply amazing - congrats to you all - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:38:00 AM
- Jan, thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/13/2015 6:26:00 AM
Lovely Collab. Congratulations to you all...Seren
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:37:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Seren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2015 11:18:00 AM
What a great poem and a great collaboration for you both......A.M.
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:35:00 PM
- Afolabi nice that you enjoy our poem, thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) -
Date: 6/12/2015 10:29:00 AM
Hello my friend??this poem of love is what we all need to read today, and everyday. Thank you for sharing Anne, always Ken
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:34:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and visit, Ken - I'm glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2015 10:07:00 AM
I salute this fertile collaboration. 7+!
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:33:00 PM
- Hannington, many thanks for the lovely comments and a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2015 6:51:00 AM
Beautifully written, By The Grace Of GOD.
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:32:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and visit, Milton - I'm glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2015 11:17:00 PM
Well crafted collaboration Anne!
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:31:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Ken - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2015 9:06:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise Liam n' Gary!Another very beautiful and captivating love poem filled with wonderful hopes and dreams penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very beautifully written.Great imagery!Awesome collaboration between the three of you.A very sweet piece to keep very close to my heart.smiling.A 7+++to each.A fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A real gem!Enjoyed it.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:30:00 PM
- Nice that you enjoy our poem Dorian, thank you for your visit and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2015 8:04:00 PM
very lovely Anne Lise hugs 7
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:29:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely comments and a 7 - I'm glad you enjoy it, Shadow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2015 4:37:00 PM
sure was a beautiful three way tango anne lise and gary just blew me away smiling your pens sang out a golden tune loved doing this piece with you both passing you both a smile wishing you all a blessed weekend
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:27:00 PM
- I smile every time I read it :) - thank my friend Liam - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2015 1:53:00 PM
Wow! I am impressed! Put the pens of three incredibly talented poets together and you have created a poetic symphony!
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Date: 6/11/2015 2:02:00 PM
- I am very proud of this poem myself :) - (I have two talented men "behind me") - Thanks for the lovely comments and I'm glad you enjoy it dear Monterey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2015 12:57:00 PM
What can I say Dear Anne-Lise!! This co-write is simply marvelous and emotes a powerful and ethereal message of love, dreams, hope, and divine providence. I'm, of course, slightly biased (HA HA), and I really liked the three-way co-authorship among you, Liam, and me on this wonderful effort. I believe the end result turned out extraordinarily well and fully expressed our mutual intent!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:09:00 PM
- A first class poem if I may say so myself :) - I never thought I'd say this, but I am becoming more and more fond of co- writing - Remember the first time Liam asked me about a co- writing ..... I was terrified !!! :))) - Thanks for the great cooperation dear friend Gary! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2015 12:34:00 PM
Another good collaboration from you..If for a contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 6/11/2015 12:37:00 PM
- It is not for contest, Sara - Nice that you enjoy our poems, thank you for your visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2015 11:20:00 AM
Anne-Lise, how beautifully you all wrote as one, amazing poem and thanks for visiting my God poem
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:36:00 PM
- A pleasure and joy to write with two skilled friends :) - Many thanks for the lovely comments and one 7 B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2015 11:22:00 AM
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Date: 6/11/2015 11:03:00 AM
Wonderful write a 7, "kissing the heart and soul of a dream " hugs eve
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:38:00 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments and one 7, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2015 8:50:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous!!! Three hearts beating as one!!! I loved this...I really did! Hugs to all of you!!!! I'm going to fav it. Not often you read a collab of THREE poets!!!
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Date: 6/11/2015 10:47:00 AM
- Three is better than two .... and two is better than one :))) - Thanks for the nice visit, and especially thank you for a "fav." dear Eileen! - hugs // Anne-Lise with friends :)