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Cry your last tear but not on my shoulder You bet, but lost A manipulator who deliberately plays on the feelings of others Self-centered you are even with your charming and confident image I'm looking straight through your psychological shield Your tactics are revealed I'm sorry Cry your last tear but not on my shoulder 05.02.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) One Last Tear Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 3rd place in the contest Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Alexis Y.

Date: 2/19/2019 8:18:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, I saw strength and confidence within this write. Congrats to anyone who can get to the place conveyed in this write. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/20/2019 3:44:00 AM

- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Fj Thomas

Date: 2/13/2019 11:32:00 AM

What strength! Perfect søster :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:22:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/11/2019 11:41:00 PM

BIG CONGRATS. very good. Somehow I missed this contest. Love.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:20:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/7/2019 8:31:00 PM

That's tellin' him! CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:20:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/7/2019 11:19:00 AM

This deserves a win Anne-Lise, such a great write and a completely different approach - great imagination! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:22:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Patrick Collier

Date: 2/7/2019 7:34:00 AM

Congrats!!!! Yes This piece many can relate to. Well I can which makes it an attachment to me in a sense. An attachment is a new poem I'm working on ?? congrats again. Patrick D Collier

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:19:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Patrick :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Greg Gaul

Date: 2/7/2019 6:27:00 AM

Most interesting take on this universal theme. New perspectives is part of the charm of fine poetry. Fine work. Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:19:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith

Date: 2/7/2019 3:54:00 AM

Excellent Anne-Lise, congrats. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:18:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 2/6/2019 5:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win Anne..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:18:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/6/2019 2:41:00 PM

here again to say 'big congrats' on your fine slot, anne...happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:18:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and congratulations, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 2/6/2019 1:59:00 PM

Have to keep away from such manipulators, so many around.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2019 1:17:00 PM

- Many thanks for my 3rd place on your contest winner list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/6/2019 6:38:00 AM

such a tear must have burned deeply truly excellent pen anne lise i pray you have a blessed week dear pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2019 1:19:00 AM

- Many thanks Liam, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/6/2019 2:15:00 AM

F a n t a s t i c! So deep and beautiful my friend, Anne-Lise! Bravo! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/6/2019 3:48:00 AM

- Many thanks Demetrios, for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2019 3:31:00 PM

very good!! Mine was same kind of theme. about a nasty man!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/6/2019 3:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for the great comment and visit, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2019 2:06:00 PM

Ooh, that's a different viewpoint...well done. Best of luck in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/6/2019 3:46:00 AM

- Many thanks M.L., for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bette Bavington

Date: 2/5/2019 10:32:00 AM

This is a great message for everyone. Truthful, short, sweet and right to the point.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2019 1:26:00 PM

- Bette, many thanks for the great comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/5/2019 9:44:00 AM

You really say it like it is in this poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2019 1:26:00 PM

- Many thanks Sunlite, for the great comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/5/2019 8:55:00 AM

such an empowering work, anne...you go and honor youself, lady!...happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2019 1:26:00 PM

- Many thanks for the great comment and visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/5/2019 6:48:00 AM

Very well said, Anne-Lise..he got the treatment he deserved.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2019 1:24:00 PM

- Many thanks for the great comment and visit, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/5/2019 5:57:00 AM

There are many like these in the world we need to be cautious and use a discerning heart. Well done Sunshine, love and hugs xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2019 1:23:00 PM

- Pixie, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/5/2019 4:39:00 AM

They all get found out eventually but not before messing up peoples lives and making them feel worthless. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/5/2019 1:21:00 PM

- Many thanks for the great comment and visit, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)