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- On Thin Ice -

Aware .....
Did someone see
My butt is sore
Did someone see
Now I'm sure both yellow and blue
Did someone see
I look around quickly
Did someone see
I wish I could shout loud
Did someone see
I get up in a hurry
Did someone see
I wet my butt
Did someone see




18.01.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 4/19/2013 6:12:00 PM lol, I've been in this position before, good poem about ice Anne Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2013 1:32:00 AM Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Sheri. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Gail Debole Date: 1/30/2013 7:02:00 AM Hi Anne Lise - I can relate to this, and can sense the embarrassment you felt and self-control you displayed when this happened to you. I joined the falling down club a long time ago. Once again, you have written an emotionally honest poem. - Much love, Gail Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/30/2013 10:01:00 AM Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Gail. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Bl Devnath Date: 1/23/2013 10:29:00 AM Lovely imagination penned quite nice. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/23/2013 10:31:00 AM Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, bl. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Bukang Liwayway Date: 1/22/2013 10:28:00 AM hahahaha..I picture myself before in your poem my dear friend Ann Lise (^__^). first time to do the ice skating and Its really hurt my butt for days..great poem from a great poet like you :) Hugs, Maria Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 11:56:00 AM Yes, it is painful to sit on your butt after a fall on the ice for days Maria. - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Joseph May Date: 1/22/2013 9:50:00 AM nice write Anne...were you skating at the time? Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 11:53:00 AM No this is when the streets are full of ice in winter time Joseph. - Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun Date: 1/22/2013 8:17:00 AM This is an excellent poem with an excellent image, too my dear friend Anne-Lise. Reading it gives me a great and wonderful vicarious experience on ice. Hope I can have a first hand experience someday. It's so fun I'm sure. Thank you so much for sharing and your wonderful comments on my latest poem! Have a blessed day to you and your family always! love and hugs, Leonora Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 11:49:00 AM Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Leonora. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/21/2013 3:20:00 PM Ut oh..you fell down? Thanks so much for stopping by my writes. Light & Love Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/22/2013 1:56:00 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and your comments, Debbie. Thank you! - - oxox / / Anne-Lise:

Michael J. Falotico Date: 1/21/2013 12:57:00 PM So nice to return and grab a smile from your work as always... Be patient with me it will take some time to catch up... hugs n luv Michael Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 1:04:00 PM Take the time you need ....... :) Thanks for your comments and your visit, Michael. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

The Situation Date: 1/21/2013 11:43:00 AM The worries that women have. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 11:46:00 AM Maybe it is a "woman thing" ........ men do not care (?) Thanks for your comments and your visit, T.S.. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/21/2013 11:31:00 AM Had me chuckling because once I took a fall on a busy street and the contents of my purse flew all over. Many people stopped and I quickly got us as fast as I could and wondered if my butt was wet from the snow. It is natural to get up right away so thank goodness nothing was broken. Nicely done. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 11:35:00 AM As an adult, it's so embarrassing...... Thanks for your comments and your visit, Phyllis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison Date: 1/21/2013 10:49:00 AM Absolutely charming! For the first 10 or 12 years of my life, I practically lived on skates... I miss those carefree days! Loved your poem... hugs and much love! xox Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 11:01:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Amii James Date: 1/21/2013 4:40:00 AM Really liked this, it's so funny and creative. And it really captures the essence of winter time:) xxxxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/21/2013 10:43:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Amii. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 1/20/2013 1:06:00 PM Love the repetition of those lines....really shows the depth of concern for being seen at your worst by others! You made me smile! Great before I go to bed! Hugs! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 1:08:00 PM Good night and thanks for your comments and your visit, Eileen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

Sukmawati Komala Date: 1/20/2013 9:06:00 AM Dear Anne Lise...what a lovely poem...thank you my sweet poetess for your great sharing... enjoyed so much <3 <3 <3 luv and big hugs ..:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 12:12:00 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sukmawati. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Husna Mirza Date: 1/20/2013 3:43:00 AM Dear Anne, Thank You very much for your kind compliment! And yes I love P soup! I think your poems are lovely and you're A great poet! Husna Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 5:16:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Husna. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Honestly J.T. Date: 1/19/2013 11:51:00 PM wow. how unfortunate yet it's a good poem - PJ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 3:18:00 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, JH. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell Date: 1/19/2013 6:48:00 PM Haha, too funny, Anne-Lise! I did see. Just kidding. Glad you didn't hurt yourself. It's the winter over there but it is sunny and in the 60's here. Great write! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2013 3:19:00 AM Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, Toquyen. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 1/19/2013 2:42:00 PM Oh yes this brings back memories,, just love this!!!!!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 4:04:00 PM Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, Harry. -

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/19/2013 2:24:00 PM I hope that not you but based on what happens when one gets on thin ice..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 4:03:00 PM Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Sara. -

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 1/19/2013 9:10:00 AM I like this Anne Lise. No I did not see. You are safe with me. thanks for sharing. Lucilla Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 10:18:00 AM Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, my friend Lucilla. -

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/19/2013 8:01:00 AM Dear Anne, You ask the question : Did someone see? My answer is... I wish I were able to see…ha-ha. Love it! Have a nice weekend. Thank you Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 10:17:00 AM Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Demetrios. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams Date: 1/19/2013 7:18:00 AM Anne-Lise hope it's not true, we have lots of snow at the moment and I HATE SNOW...how is Arild?...have a peaceful weekend ...David Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 7:25:00 AM - Arild it just fine. - - Give me 6 months of spring + 6 months of summer !! :) :) :) - Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments, David.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/18/2013 11:00:00 PM hahaha, I know this feeling from when I was a young'un!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:54:00 AM Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Andrea. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman Date: 1/18/2013 7:06:00 PM This is cute, Anne Lise! I can picture you looking around to see if anyone had seen you fall. Thank you for your sweet comments on my poems. I appreciate you taking your time to read them. Love, Kim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:53:00 AM Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Kim. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/18/2013 4:22:00 PM I see! I see! gotcha! Hehehe, hilarious penned Anne, I just remember my old memory, i think worse than you are, I got slipped in the crowd and fell right on the wet mud, can you imagine how dirty was my jeans at that time and the shame that I've got? :p hehehe, i really enjoyed the freshness of your poetry today, have a wonderful weekend Anne - hug, yanny Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/19/2013 5:53:00 AM Thank you for reading my poem, and thanks for the nice comments,Yanny. - (It's not nice said ..... but it's fun to watch when others fall.) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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