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Loving you is easy as the heart sings into your heaven Come kiss me sugar before the snow melts Stunning visions before the mirrors a flame sparks As two white doves in eternal faithfulness weld us together Standing an adoring torch within a breathtaking ray of sunlight Dreams that were answered, within soft tenderness beauty and love Always when you enter number one smiles Love's paradise ruby wine flows warm I will forever find you interesting sweet dreams as you make me forget everything that lies behind Many moons searching distant horizons Coming out slowly from the light my dear As I stared into the stars thoughts within you entered Brilliant beauty a miracle dawns new horizons Darling captivating your precious light holds me Each time seeing you is like I have known you a lifetime beyond anything We travel down the starlit path only for eternity Heaven's whisper creating our future and dreams A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 24.02.2016 (unrhymed couplets)

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/7/2016 11:46:00 PM

This is very nice, congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/8/2016 4:48:00 AM

- Pashang, thanks for the congrats and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suraj Jumani

Date: 3/18/2016 1:48:00 AM

A real beauty, evokes the subtle and sublime feeling that is love.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/18/2016 4:11:00 AM

- Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Suraj :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/13/2016 7:14:00 PM

I see this was POTW! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2016 4:29:00 AM

- Richard, thanks for the congrats and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/5/2016 9:33:00 PM

Wonderful write, Anne Lise! Congratulations on poem of the week Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2016 4:29:00 AM

- Eve, thanks for the congrats and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/5/2016 3:29:00 PM

Amazing flow of images and emotions!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2016 4:28:00 AM

- Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Theresa Cw

Date: 3/5/2016 12:24:00 AM

Wow!! It is always a great treasure and pleasure to read all of your poetic devices... You and Liam really do make beautiful music or may I say beauty of rhyme together... love and hugs // Theresa

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2016 8:38:00 AM

- Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Theresa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/3/2016 2:27:00 PM

The wonder of Love...Great work again, congratulations again, Lise and Liam

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2016 2:29:00 PM

- Charlie, thanks for the congrats and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rainbow Promise

Date: 3/2/2016 9:20:00 PM

T Anne Lise and Liam, congrats on your making POTW. What a collaboration! Thanks for sharing and God bless, RP.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/3/2016 2:28:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats, Rainbow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2016 8:07:00 AM

Anne Lise and Liam, congratulations on Poem of the Week with this beautiful love poem, so sweetly penned, I am loving it 7 ~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2016 8:24:00 AM

- Thanks B.W. for the congrats and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debra Mundine

Date: 3/1/2016 4:54:00 PM

Great poem, although I must say you two are overly romantic. Reminds me of some of Shakespere's work.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2016 3:33:00 AM

- Debra, thank you for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 3/1/2016 4:12:00 AM

Thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments Anne lise truly a pleasure writing this with you congratulations on poem of the week wishing you all a blessed beautiful week

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2016 4:17:00 AM

:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/29/2016 9:20:00 PM

I have previously left a comment just dropping back by to say congratulations on the poem of the week to the both of you. Looking forward to reading more. Peace my friends:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2016 3:17:00 AM

- Liam and me have written many poems together ...... and there will be more, I hope :) - Thanks for the congrats, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/29/2016 5:26:00 PM

many congrats to you both on poem of the week:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2016 3:13:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/29/2016 12:04:00 PM

Congrats on POTW you two...beautifully penned

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/29/2016 1:01:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Amy Guy

Date: 2/27/2016 11:47:00 AM

Love!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/27/2016 11:54:00 AM

- Nice to see you Amy, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/26/2016 8:30:00 AM

I think that it would be better to change the last two words of the 4th line around. "us together", rather than "together us". I quite enjoy the romanticism you convey in this piece, a slice of heaven.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2016 8:36:00 AM

- ............ Ups .... why have none seen it earlier ...... maybe we did not read it properly :) - Thank you my friend, Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 2/26/2016 8:09:00 AM

Lovely!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2016 8:37:00 AM

- Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Abdullah - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 2/25/2016 8:22:00 PM

And may it ever be so, for what could improve on this.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2016 2:11:00 AM

- Mark, thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Crenshaw

Date: 2/25/2016 7:55:00 PM

Wow. Inspiring imagery. Enjoyed it start to finish. Stop by and read my gibberish sometime. :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2016 2:13:00 AM

- A pleasure to share with you, Kelly :) - Thank you for reading our poem and left a nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/25/2016 6:43:00 PM

Dear Anne Lise WOW great collaboration, perfect blending of poetic thoughts of devotion, loved it, cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2016 2:12:00 AM

- Dear Cherl, greatly appreciate your words and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/25/2016 4:34:00 PM

such a beautiful collaboration Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2016 2:10:00 AM

- Thank you for reading our poem and left a nice comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/25/2016 11:49:00 AM

That is a beautiful love poem. I did not realize it was a collab until I got to the end. Well done you two. suZ

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2016 1:42:00 PM

- We write with the same pen and ink, SuZ :) - Many thanks for enjoyable visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/25/2016 9:54:00 AM

You an Liam work so well together. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2016 1:40:00 PM

- Richard, thank you for reading our poem and left a nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2016 9:54:00 AM

Ahh!! Great love collaboration.,.Enjoyed reading this one.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2016 1:36:00 PM

- Thanks for the delighted visits and lovely comments on our poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/25/2016 9:47:00 AM

:) Sunshine....this time you let the nighttime speak of romance and love...celestial bodies dance to you and Liam's song. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2016 1:40:00 PM

- Sweet music and dancing in the moonlight :))) - Thank you for reading our poem and left a nice comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)