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Sunset on the Malecon, La Paz, Baja California Sur, Mexico.

Sitting in an orange filled evening a moment while the October sun drowning in the sea Alike freshly polished brass The quiet wonders of the earth in a golden glimpses - from a thousand unwritten thoughts Between faith, doubt and nameless anguish Mock and falsehood I put my hope in the world; The beauty gives me immediate impulses - intoxicated by light and air 13-10-2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 10/24/2020 6:44:00 PM

Beautiful

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/18/2020 7:13:00 AM

A lovely poem, Anne-Lise. I wish I could get intoxicated by "light and air". Such a great image!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2020 9:14:00 AM

- Thank you very much Newton, for your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/17/2020 5:20:00 AM

We think of writing a poem so spontaneously, an image, a word, a person, a child, a flower, an injustice, a kindness, I could go on forever, this poem you wrote is absolutely golden and splendid! Best of luck my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2020 9:13:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your comment and visit, sister Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/15/2020 4:47:00 PM

'Like freshly polished brass' - lovely penning, Anne-Lise. G.L. in the contest. Sunshine and Sunlight, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2020 10:20:00 AM

- Gershon, thank you very much for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/15/2020 3:34:00 AM

This is the best intoxication that ever was obviously.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2020 11:01:00 AM

... yes it is, Caren :) - Thank you very much for your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/14/2020 4:46:00 PM

There’s nothing more inspiring than a magnificent sunset, a poet's delight. An awesome read Anne-Lise. Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2020 10:59:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your lovely comments, Belle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/14/2020 11:38:00 AM

The best thing about the sun drowning in the sea is watching it rise again in the morning! In between are peaceful dreams! Aloha! Rico

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 12:09:00 PM

- Sunrise is also beautiful, Rico ... but then I have to get up early ... :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2020 7:43:00 AM

You really were intoxicated here and such wonderful imagery in your poem..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 12:07:00 PM

- A happy and relaxing intoxication, S.O. :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/14/2020 3:26:00 AM

Wow, sweet lady.. this is a gorgeous write that I'm sure will bring you a win in the contest. It's reflective, graceful and filled with gentle hope. I love it!!! God bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 12:02:00 PM

- Feels like reverence, Regina ... absence of noise ... peace of mind :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/13/2020 11:23:00 PM

Best thing one can do when one perceive such a lovely scene. ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 12:05:00 PM

- Thank you very much for your lovely comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/13/2020 8:43:00 PM

Your poem is absolutely beautiful, Anne-Lise. The imagery is exquisite. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 11:57:00 AM

- It's so beautiful to look at, Susan ... peacefully :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/13/2020 8:23:00 PM

great verse for John contest, Sunshine. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 11:55:00 AM

- If John does not like it ... he can come visit me ... maybe he likes my view :))) ... I love it .. and it means a lot to me, Eve :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/13/2020 1:37:00 PM

This is so nice! Inspiring to read today :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 11:51:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your lovely comments, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/13/2020 1:32:00 PM

I can see why you were inspired Anne. No better scene. Good luck Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 11:50:00 AM

- This is my window view, Tom :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pam Deremer

Date: 10/13/2020 1:05:00 PM

Beautiful picture. Thank you for sharing.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 11:46:00 AM

- A pleasure to share with you, Pam :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/13/2020 12:50:00 PM

Beautiful glimpses of golden sun, Anne-Lise. Enjoyed the images you created... an orange filled evening...so well said!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2020 11:45:00 AM

- A beautiful sight ... I live by the sea ... and enjoy this orange view, Vijay :) - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)