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Rosebud in Ice Storm:

Daylight change, and go to its winter rest Night frost drips from the eaves A cold wind rushed and shoveled his way Caught your lungs with clear icy air In this deep cold, it feels just right Leave the door open to be a part of the season Human rhythms always searching The lunar takes its own bath in silver dust November night will show you: The Milky Way Keep your senses and soul awake, and enjoy it 08.11.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - (unrhymed couplets) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 11/30/2016 5:00:00 AM

Serenity and a noble soul a bit touched by melancoly.The poem may be sung and it reminds me of the warm voice of Harry Belafonte: Hans without you, September comes...I let open the door for that feeling. Beyond the clear icy air, the moon of the poets taking a bath in silver dust, between reality and sweet reveries the noble soul is awaken.

Janet Grace

Date: 11/25/2016 8:48:00 AM

Seasonal poems are favorites of mine and I have written quite a few which makes me even more appreciative of the NOVEMBER poem by you. The attached picture is very impressive too.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/25/2016 3:09:00 PM

- Thanks for nice visit and valuable comments, Janet - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/18/2016 12:54:00 PM

Wonderful piece Anne- Lise!:)Beautifully painted unrhymed couplets in this November poem, dear friend.Fantastic imagery!:)Just awesome!A 7!Sending you my love n' prayers.Best to you always too!Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always !:)Hugs!D

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2016 12:57:00 PM

- Thank you for your lovely comments a 7 and friendly visit, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cona Adams

Date: 11/15/2016 12:52:00 PM

Beautifully written and illustrated.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2016 12:57:00 PM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comments on my poem, Cona :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/14/2016 7:32:00 AM

november brings the dark moon as the nights grow longer passing you a warm smile beautifully painted anne lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2016 12:56:00 PM

- Greatly appreciate your your visit and nice comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 11/10/2016 11:25:00 AM

Leave the door open?? No way!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2016 1:46:00 PM

- I do not like socks ... I always go barefoot, close the door :)))

Jean Murray
Date: 11/10/2016 1:31:00 PM

That's OK then Anne-Lise. I like to keep a nice 25 degree inside at all times. If there was a mass exodus from the house, I used to shout "Paratroupers" to my children, to remind them they must not dally in the doorway. (Mad mother me).

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2016 11:41:00 AM

- .... I write about the heart door .... :)))- Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/10/2016 2:20:00 AM

Excellent. Great imagery and lovely write my friend. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2016 11:41:00 AM

- Ravi, thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 11/9/2016 11:34:00 PM

'A cold wind rushed and shovelled'- love that line, the cutting wind indeed does dig and sift through every cranny. A lovely, crisp, fresh write, Anne-Lise, love it. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2016 11:42:00 AM

- Thank you Viv, for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 11/9/2016 10:49:00 AM

So lovely...Great imagery...I have never seen snow in my life... Loved your description...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2016 2:11:00 PM

- I will send you a bucket full of snow, Supraja :) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Augustus Black

Date: 11/9/2016 7:29:00 AM

I got the feelings that you write from profoundest part of your heart. This is very clean and imaginable write. I like rhythm of this one and the hug of nature throughout this write. Well done. 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2016 8:25:00 AM

- I always write from my heart, Augustus :) - Winter is beautiful, but I do not like being cold :) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/9/2016 7:26:00 AM

November in North countries is a month of great changes as it paves the way for winter! Beautiful verses and rose! Excellent work dear, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2016 8:22:00 AM

- Can I stay at your roof garden until spring arrives, I will remember to water the flowers every day :)) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2016 3:26:00 AM

you awakened my senses with your wonderful imagery in these delightful couplets Anne Lise ... its starting to get wintery here and I confess my thermal vest has finally seen the light of day lol:-( I hate being cold:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2016 8:19:00 AM

- No pink silk underwear with white lace .... wool (big size !) in November, Jan !!! - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/9/2016 3:21:00 AM

Beautiful and splendid:) you placed a lovely smile on my face:) thank you, Anne:) enjoy November:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2016 8:14:00 AM

- I live and breathe for the spring and summer, Jo ... during the winter I freeze and forget to breathe :))) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf

Date: 11/8/2016 7:43:00 PM

A lovely November poem, I love it because it means summer is around the corner.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2016 3:33:00 AM

- Several long, dark and cold months in the future ... I'm afraid ... Norway's cold, Rick - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 11/8/2016 2:44:00 PM

It is a beautiful month...nice poem and pic A-L

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2016 2:58:00 PM

- Tim, thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/8/2016 2:34:00 PM

A beautiful gathering of poetic couplets inspired by the month of November. I could feel the chill in the air and the scent of a fireplace bellowing it's smoke through the chimney in your wonderful words, sadly it is still quite warm where I live and fall is not around the corner. But with your poem I can certainly dream that it is.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2016 2:58:00 PM

- The images of winter is really beautiful, Chris ... but, it's too cold ... - I guess I was born in a wrong country :) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)