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September Red, yellow, orange Crackling gloss and color Leaves dancing beautifully in the air Cold, clear air a quiet morning before the sun has risen Small streams are converted to large waterfalls A melancholy goodbye to summer A silent prayer Thanks 02.09.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 9/15/2013 1:04:00 AM

passion in words passion in love nothing more graceful i love it thank you xxxx duncan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2013 3:19:00 AM

- Duncan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/11/2013 9:55:00 AM

AS THE SUN SMILES BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/11/2013 10:02:00 AM

- Liam, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Louis Rams

Date: 9/8/2013 5:31:00 PM

all the beauties o the fall have been beckoned to your call. beautifully written.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2013 11:34:00 PM

- Louis, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Litan Dey

Date: 9/8/2013 12:16:00 AM

By a small poem you expressed so many things....All the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2013 5:41:00 AM

- Litan, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/7/2013 7:19:00 AM

Dear A-L A, I can tell you are on another continent by the way you date your work. The symmetry of words and the shape you make remind me of a flying saucer or a frisbee. Here it comes, ready or not. As you so aptly point out, everything is beautiful. You have a connection to this planet that we only wish more could have. The last line is perfect. We are so lucky to have what we have. For what you have posted--thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2013 7:26:00 AM

- Thanks, Duke & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/6/2013 9:40:00 PM

Nice portrayal of the season of colorful leaves and football. Clever shape poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2013 2:47:00 AM

- Thanks, Matthew & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/6/2013 11:54:00 AM

what a very beautiful poem my friend Anne.I like the form, like the thoughts and your creativity..Thanks for sharing this. Good day!! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2013 11:58:00 AM

- Thanks, Maria & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller

Date: 9/5/2013 9:19:00 AM

that;s a beautiful and colorful expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2013 2:05:00 PM

- Thanks,Marlon & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2013 2:04:00 PM

- Thanks,Erich & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/5/2013 5:40:00 AM

Hi Anne, Colorful write depicting a wonderful time of the year.. Ken..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2013 5:52:00 AM

- Thanks,Ken & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/5/2013 5:22:00 AM

wonderful write Anne...thanks for stopping by...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2013 5:23:00 AM

- Thanks,Josegh & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 9/4/2013 11:57:00 PM

Beautifully penned Anne, glad to read this beautiful painting of yours :) wishing you a lovely day there and thank you for your lovely comments through my pages before :D hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/5/2013 2:02:00 AM

Thanks,Yanny & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/4/2013 2:19:00 PM

Very nice poem, I love the colors that this Season brings. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 2:22:00 PM

- I'm so glad you're back, Lucilla my friend !! - Thanks, for visit & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2013 12:39:00 PM

is is autumn there, anne... love to revisit this one... looking forward to a new piece soon... :) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 2:03:00 PM

- Thanks, Nette & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/4/2013 11:03:00 AM

You are reminding me of the cold winter coming up. Do not want to say goodbye to summer this year. It has been way to short. Nicely done on this poem.Come and join me for cake and coffee. Baking a banana cake from a recipe i found on line. Second time I have made it. take care. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 11:11:00 AM

- Keep it warm .... I'm going with the first plane... - It would be really nice, Phyllis .... coffee and freshly baked cake :) - - Thanks, for visit & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/4/2013 6:52:00 AM

Anne Lise, what a beauty this is.. While some are saying goodbye to Summer I am welcoming Spring on this side of the world. You really make this form look easy :) *hugs & love* Wilma

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 6:55:00 AM

- Thanks, Wilma & welcome to fall (you: Spring) . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2013 12:04:00 AM

Is there still a fall contest going on? This is very pretty for fall.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 2:03:00 AM

- Thanks, Andrea & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :) - Not for contest.

Donna Jones

Date: 9/3/2013 6:57:00 PM

Colorful, cracking, cold...and a prayer....lovely Anne Lise...thank you...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2013 2:02:00 AM

- Thanks, Donna & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/3/2013 3:18:00 PM

I love this poem, Anne-Lise! Very nicely done! ...Fall is definitely one of my favorite times of the year. It is sad when summer ends, but I welcome fall with open arms!...You might like my poem "Ode To Autumn"....Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem "The Shy Rose". I am so glad you enjoyed it, my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2013 3:21:00 PM

- Thanks, Kelly & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/3/2013 2:52:00 PM

But I think you really love the fall. thank you for your always kind comments. Love, Joyce

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2013 3:00:00 PM

I love summer and sunshine, Joyce ..... but fall is coming anyway .... and it is beautiful. - Thanks, Joyce & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/3/2013 11:24:00 AM

hello from me to you, anne.. a dimaomg this is as i wish you a wonderful tuesday!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2013 11:45:00 AM

- Thanks, Nette & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/3/2013 9:05:00 AM

I'll miss the 9pm sunsets, but my body is SO ready for the gentle chill of Fall's late afternoons. Excellent!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2013 9:57:00 AM

- Thanks, Drake & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2013 5:18:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your description of fall..I like this form..Fall is almost upon us..I hope that this year the leaves will be beautiful..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2013 5:21:00 AM

- Thanks, Sara & welcome to fall . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)