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Natural beautiful
Newfound love, roses grow
New moon silver flashes
Nubile young, blushing cheeks
Nice guy, real charmer
Nuts about your sweet kiss
Nothing can change the love







30.04.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
( Pleiades form : N )
www.howmanysyllables.com
For Kim Merryman's contest

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Date: 5/13/2017 5:55:00 PM
Wonderful imagery about 'newfound love', Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your fine placement in the Pleiades Contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/14/2017 7:52:00 AM
- Nice to receive your congratulations Sandra, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 5:37:00 PM
A 7 for your well--deserved win, Anne- lise! Janice
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Date: 5/14/2017 7:51:00 AM
- Nice to receive your congratulations and a 7, thank you very much Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/13/2017 2:40:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on your high-placed win! Well done, Anne-Lise! Regards, John
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Date: 5/13/2017 12:01:00 PM
- Thank you very much, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2017 9:09:00 PM
Very sweetly worded! Congrats on fine win, Anne -Lise!
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Date: 5/13/2017 12:01:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Sushma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2017 7:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win Anne
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Date: 5/13/2017 12:00:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2017 5:57:00 PM
A sweet and romantic Pleiades, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 5/13/2017 12:00:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2017 12:53:00 AM
The beautiful words you carefully bundle in your 'nest' Anne-Lise, is breathtaking. Truly lovely writing, sweet, fresh imagery, a delight to read. lynnxxx
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:13:00 AM
- Dear Lynn, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/10/2017 4:28:00 PM
A gem of a poem about romance. Awesome . love phyl
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Date: 5/11/2017 2:07:00 AM
- A pleasure with your visit, dear Phyllis :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2017 4:02:00 PM
This little jewel of a nest looks like a winner Anne-Lise! A 7:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/4/2017 2:28:00 AM
- Anne-Marie, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2017 3:43:00 PM
#7.While fighting for peace, I forgot to read this Anne-Lise. I do apologize I never did fave so many of your great writes. Being fixed/remedied now. I am so sorry ... how we overlook those who truly matter. Shalom, shalom Dear Ambassador. Anil
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Date: 5/4/2017 2:28:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Anil :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/2/2017 4:12:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, Best of Luck in the contest with "Nest." I'm sure you have a "winner" with this one. Full of love and wonder. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:07:00 AM
- A pleasure with your visit, my friend Gary :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/2/2017 1:52:00 PM
Your 'nest', where charm and love abound, is a lovely place to be in, Anne-Lise! Full marks to you! Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:06:00 AM
- Many thanks Paul, for your visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/2/2017 12:07:00 PM
ohh, wonderful love nest, anne... a winner for me..happy huggs
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/2/2017 7:44:00 AM
Love in any form of poetry is beautiful. and this is a real winner.Best of luck in the contest Anne-Lise. A 7++ xxx
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Date: 5/3/2017 3:05:00 AM
- Maria, many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 11:33:00 PM
How lovely Anne-lise, love wrapped up in seven lines, very clever, hope you are well, take care.......Vera
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Date: 5/2/2017 2:41:00 AM
- Nice to see you, Vera :) - Thank you very much for the comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 6:32:00 PM
I'm nuts about your poems Sunshine.
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Date: 5/2/2017 2:39:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 6:18:00 PM
Light, bubbly and full of fun. Well thought out and executed. Emile.
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Date: 5/2/2017 2:37:00 AM
- A pleasure with your visit, Emile :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 4:31:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , Pure young love lovely write , rate 7 :))) hugs
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Date: 5/2/2017 2:39:00 AM
- A pleasure with your visit :) - thank you very much, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 4:28:00 PM
A lovely Pleiades Anne..hugs
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Date: 5/2/2017 2:38:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 4:07:00 PM
very nice, Sunshine. put "a" in front of real charmer, and then you will have your six syllables for line 5!
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Date: 5/1/2017 4:17:00 PM
- www.howmanysyllables.com ... count 6 syllables in line 5, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 1:46:00 PM
A 7 for this fine poem! Janice
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Date: 5/1/2017 4:19:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 1:31:00 PM
Lovely Pleiades, Anne-Lise! Best of luck with the contest! Regards, John.
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Date: 5/1/2017 1:40:00 PM
- A pleasure with your visit :) - Thank you very much, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 10:52:00 AM
Morning Anne. The theme is tops with me for love is for all. Wonderful execution with the format. Good luck with the contest. Well done entirely.
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Date: 5/1/2017 12:55:00 PM
- A pleasure with your visit, Lisa :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 9:51:00 AM
So beautiful Anne... Great write... Good luck with the contest... A big 7...
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Date: 5/1/2017 12:53:00 PM
- A pleasure with your visit :) - thank you very much, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/1/2017 7:33:00 AM
A beautiful love poem my friend. Nice use of the poetic form, though love poetry is a nice use of any poetic form. :)
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Date: 5/1/2017 12:54:00 PM
- A pleasure with your visit, Chris :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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