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Fawn with mother-:


              
                   Can you see the beauty in a newborn child

                      Whom a  mother will always protect

                    Wishing her child every star in the sky

             The strength of her love she would forever project


                                             ~

                                  The Natures Law











03.11.2016
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 11/9/2016 7:41:00 AM
Very nicely expressed the law of nature. I have felt the mother would always be more attentive for a new born child. That's the great love of nature. Nice done.
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Date: 11/9/2016 7:49:00 AM
- The law of nature is very sensitive, Augustus - We humans have much to learn :) - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/6/2016 3:11:00 AM
anne, a mother's love can never be duplicated... this speaks to me with much comfort!.. happy huggs this sunday!
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Date: 11/6/2016 12:29:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting, lovely comments and happy huggs Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2016 4:56:00 AM
Hum, what a pleasant poem, I love the read.............A.M.
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:47:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and a lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2016 5:04:00 PM
Such a tender sentiment, gave me a mother's heart pangs.
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:46:00 AM
- Paloma, thanks for visiting and a lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2016 5:02:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Anne-Lise. Beautiful pic too. You are a multi-talented poetess. Nothing in nature compares to the love of a mother for her children. Excellent work. Love you always. RW
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:26:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and a lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2016 4:23:00 PM
This speaks to my heart Anne-Lise. Just beautiful.
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Date: 11/5/2016 7:19:00 AM
- Jean, thanks for visiting and a lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2016 2:19:00 PM
ohh anne.. i am so moved by the grace of parental love... stunning work... happy huggs today!
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:49:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and a lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2016 9:13:00 AM
Tender motherly feelings! Great writing "deer" friend Anne-Lise! Haha! A seven!
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:49:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2016 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts and picture Anne-Lise...
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:47:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and a lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2016 7:49:00 PM
Lovely poem Anne-Lise. I've always believed that there is no greater love than a mother's love. Well penned
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:47:00 PM
- Mothers love means EVERYTHING, Rick :) - Thanks for visiting and a lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2016 4:34:00 PM
lovely poem, anne lise! great picture, too...
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:44:00 PM
- Ilene, thanks for visiting and a lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2016 4:22:00 PM
Anne-Lise, just seeing the photo reminds me of how sweet and gentle you are. i love your sweet poem:)
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:43:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and a lovely comments, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2016 4:19:00 PM
I loved it, but like Abdullah, I thought maternal attributes were natural law. BUT I am not sure. The feel is captured, the mood set, but maybe a one line rethink? Again, I could be wrong and am often! Again, the lines perked my adrenaline and I was excited for that last line - so it is a great effort. I hope I haven't upset???? I would want to know and that's all I can go by. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:35:00 PM
- No, it takes more to make me upset dear CayCay :))) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments .... without comments I would stop posting poems :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2016 4:17:00 PM
beautiful poem and pic Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:38:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and great comments, Jan - Gorgeous animals :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2016 4:15:00 PM
Very beautiful A-L.
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:39:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and a lovely comments, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/3/2016 4:05:00 PM
Nice poem and picture! However I thought that it's nature law. Have a good time Sunshine.
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:42:00 PM
- I agree Abdullah .... not a good line - ..... but, better now :) - Thanks for visiting and a lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)