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- Moonlight Dream -

Open the gate and step into the night's adventure A golden full moon hovering in world of his own The moonlight is magical Night darkness under the moon dew glistens Where the diamonds - the emeralds and the jewels shine among all the golden Golden light envelops water pearl luster in a bed of cotton As the waves swell in the ocean Carefully the wind plays over the harp Interaction with the moonlight and the dream that is my own 30.03.2014 A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 8/9/2014 9:03:00 PM
Fantastic poem...very well written
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/10/2014 4:43:00 AM
- Lisa, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/25/2014 7:25:00 PM
Well done.... Great write... Gina
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/5/2014 5:33:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - Gina - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/10/2014 1:11:00 PM
Stopping by to say hello--and to compliment you on a superb free verse poem. Nicely done. I wish I could write as well :) Later, darling. xoxo // mel
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2014 6:21:00 AM
- It's just nice - always welcome :))) - Thanks, Mel! // Anne-Lise :)
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Mel Merrill
Date: 4/10/2014 1:16:00 PM
Just realized I commented on Moonlight before. The title sucked me in, and I forgot I'd read it--Duh. Sensory overload. What the hell; kudos twice!
Date: 4/7/2014 11:59:00 PM
Hey, was up? I like this poem. I tend to rhyme, but this is a cool free verse. Thanks for the poem, ;) Mel
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/8/2014 2:13:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - Mel - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2014 2:24:00 PM
You're very good with romance yourself. My apologies for not being around for a while. I've made a major but temporary move to the NW corner of the USA. Adjusting is more difficult than I thought it would be. However, I'm recovering slowly, slowly ... Jack
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/6/2014 3:01:00 PM
- Good luck, Jack !!! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/5/2014 12:04:00 AM
The dream that is my own....nice...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2014 6:02:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - Richard - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/3/2014 7:52:00 AM
This is a gem of a poem more beautiful than any diamond
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 12:48:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: Monterey. - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2014 10:06:00 PM
Takes me to a magical land in the moonlight. Nicely written. Have been down with the flu for 12 days and finally have some antibotics as my chest was so heavy could hardly breathe. Also have an abcess on my leg so have not been feeling good lately. I am hoping this will clear me quickly.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 2:27:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: Phyllis. - Moonlight Dream - Hope you will be well soon !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2014 6:03:00 PM
You have swept me away to a magical place and i enjoyed the journey that you have taken two wonderful job again. LISA you are truely a unique writer. cheri i'm also glad you enjoyed my little ice butterfly. cheri
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 2:25:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: Cherl. - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2014 1:10:00 PM
Beautiful poem of Moon's night's adventure's effect. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 1:13:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: bl. - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/2/2014 10:16:00 AM
A delightful combination of images. The ocean, the harp and all the glistening gems. Thanks for your warm welcome, Cristina :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2014 11:05:00 AM
- Cristina, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2014 10:16:00 AM
A beautiful dream to have is - a moonlight dream. Congratulations on your win in Night Sky ... Lucilla
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2014 11:22:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting my - Moonlight Dream- - and greeting on my - Night Sky- dear Lucilla . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2014 1:30:00 AM
there is something magical..nice
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2014 2:59:00 AM
- Richard, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2014 3:24:00 PM
beautiful words here, my friend
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2014 2:58:00 AM
- Jack, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2014 1:32:00 PM
you amaze me with this bright piece so radiantly expressed, anne... makes my monday delightful.. huggs!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 1:46:00 PM
- Double thanks & Double happiness :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2014 1:32:00 PM
you amaze me with this bright piece so radiantly expressed, anne... makes my monday delightful.. huggs!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 1:47:00 PM
- Double thanks & Double happiness :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2014 12:00:00 PM
Beautiful write Anne...winning wishes
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 12:03:00 PM
- Joseph, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2014 11:34:00 AM
May our daydreams be as magical.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 11:39:00 AM
- Robert, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2014 10:52:00 AM
(grasp)... taking a deep breath from my lungs... i'm suffocated... This is one enormous write!!! ...breathtaking lines..amazing scenes... magical moonlight... I love it, dear Anne Lise ^__^...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 11:38:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - sweet friend AiyaH :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2014 4:30:00 AM
A dream beyond the conception of beauty! Wonderful dear Anne Lise!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 7:48:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: - Moonlight Dream - Demetrios - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2014 10:31:00 PM
Ah yes, the moon, my muse shines brightly in white, blue, red, and golden yellow! And all the reflections that come from the moon are spectacular...just like this tremendous write of yours my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem about the night sky, you dream! What a special piece, Great Work!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 3:11:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: Russell. - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2014 7:03:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your contest ehtry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 3:11:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: Sara. - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2014 4:57:00 PM
Magical. Love it, Anne-Lise. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. :) It goes by so quick!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 3:10:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poetry: Toquyen. - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2014 4:06:00 PM
Just A Note: Tis Wonderful Meeting New People So Thank You Anne Lise, For Your Kind Visit...Your Poem Is Beautiful!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 3:13:00 AM
- Nice to meet you too - thank you, Jeremy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2014 4:01:00 PM
Warmth This Feeling Somehow, After Viewing Your Words...Seems Enchanting As Peaceful Her Magical Verse: Golden Yes And She Yet Soft, A Pastel Brush! Floating Atop Clouds Their Ships Asail Her Mast To Climb And There She Blows; The Harps Of Love....I Am Going To Set The Both Of You Amid A Favourites Bottle: Quite Lovely...Yours Truly, Jeremy
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2014 3:08:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit, fav. and comments on my poetry: Jeremy. - Moonlight Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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