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15-07.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Len Gasun

Date: 7/24/2023 6:03:00 AM

An excellent poem my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. I love it and the quote above. Belated congrats on your first place win my dear poet friend! Hugs.. blessings always to you.

Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2023 9:32:00 AM

Anne-Lise, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge L Words and I like your image and quote too !

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/20/2023 5:37:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win Anne-Liise. Hugs SV

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 7/20/2023 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Anne. A really nice poem about love and lovers. And the quote is very true. Thanks....!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/20/2023 11:21:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Lovers" write again. Hugs... Have a wonderful day....................

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/17/2023 11:51:00 AM

Complicated, confusing and a roller coaster of emotions when love is not reciprocated-----unrequited love. EXCELLENT. love phyl

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/17/2023 6:09:00 AM

Being loved is complicated, so true. Inspirational poetry Anne-Lise, there’s so many ways to write of what being loved means and you do it with ease… Belle

Paul Bell

Date: 7/17/2023 5:53:00 AM

Some see love as a one-night stand, which obviously brings it own problems. It keeps us going though, so we pursue it.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/17/2023 5:02:00 AM

Oh yes, love certainly os complicated!! Your poem is beautifully expressed! Happy Monday!!

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/16/2023 2:23:00 PM

For most of the world it is complicated...but I think you would only need be yourself, Lise. A rolling stone...gone with the first wind, a slight breeze enough for many to depart these days. Excellent writing.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/16/2023 11:02:00 AM

It's sad, yet - yes, complicated - yes, sometimes that is the way it is and oftentimes, so confusing and disconcerting. Wonderful writing. A winner for sure. Alive with emotion and meaning. God bless you my friend, Love, Gina

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/16/2023 10:22:00 AM

I enjoyed your "Lovers" write/picture. A wonderful ending. Have a good day..........................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/16/2023 3:58:00 AM

Powerful emotions of unrequited love--well expressed, Anne-Lise.

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/15/2023 7:12:00 PM

the disarray of the world's confusion pictured in your poem is stunning, it reads like life, not knowing what's coming next...good luck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2023 3:30:00 AM

- You're right that it's about life, Fredric... life and love... not the true love...but, the cold unfeeling one - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/15/2023 6:32:00 PM

OK this will sound wrong, because I liked it as I read it, and I cant say why. Its disjointed to me but that ads to the mystery. Then I saw the toss of the dice, and your poem told me she is waiting for him to come to her. This is unusual Anne-Lise, and being unique is what makes it special.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/19/2023 2:14:00 AM

ahhh I see you have changed the words and the dice throw is changed. Sorry Anne-Lise its like you lifted a veil. Well done. Now this dummy understands perfectly. Sorry that you had to change it for me, I bet every one else understood. Great poem. BOL

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2023 3:23:00 AM

- I see I've created a bit of confusion ... trying to clear this up ... thanks for reading, Wendy:) - hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 7/15/2023 3:56:00 PM

You set the table with the photo, Anne-Lise. Good rhyming and it flowed well. Have a good weekend, my friend, Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2023 3:21:00 AM

- The photo was not supposed to tell my poem ... this has been changed ... thanks for reading, Bill :) - hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 7/15/2023 3:03:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I'm not sure if I'm discerning your meaning in this one, and if not, I still appreciate the mood you've set with the ominous words and photo you've chosen.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2023 3:38:00 AM

- Thanks for coming back and giving it another chance, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 7/16/2023 3:26:00 AM

You are amazing to me in so many ways. I comprehend now, having been in her position more than once. Hugs for translating and best wishes for your entry.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2023 3:19:00 AM

- Both photo and text have been changed, Lin ... to make it a little easier to understand ... thank you for trying ... :) - hugs