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Diablo 3 Barbarian by AlexBoca:

Dark falls between walls, following powerful lightning This day is nameless, in the vast bottomless universe Black rain, I believed in progress but the real truth became my lessons Death is mute, time and eternity ... a poor soul A taste of heaven perfume - for you I will live and die Suffering and pain, go hand in hand I used to have beautiful dreams, let me tell you why A glimpse of sunlight, love, passion and hope One hunger that the world remembers little of today The candle burn no longer, watch out for the beast 07.03.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved ,___, [O.o] /)__) -"--"-

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Omojewve Emmanuel Brown

Date: 3/14/2017 2:11:00 PM

You blow my mind off. Wonderful poem, well penned, more required from you. Laugh!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/14/2017 2:42:00 PM

- Glad you enjoyed it, Omojewve :) - Thanks for visit and your comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/9/2017 9:33:00 PM

How epic this is, Anne-Lise! Love the Norse picture and implications here...my son is actually writing a Norse opera right now...SO dramatic, 7+

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/10/2017 1:15:00 AM

- Laura, thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes with the opera - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett

Date: 3/9/2017 7:51:00 AM

Great poem Anne-Lise complimented by that great picture, enjoyed, Roy. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2017 7:54:00 AM

- Roy, thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/8/2017 9:50:00 PM

Oh my, the Norse in you has jumped out and exploded!!! I loved this!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/9/2017 3:45:00 AM

- Glad you enjoyed it, Arthur :) - Thanks for visit and your comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/8/2017 12:00:00 PM

Very nicely penned Anne...I like the ending line..best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2017 12:44:00 PM

- Joseph, thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/8/2017 7:40:00 AM

Profound interesting write Anne-Lise; Enjoyed!~Che :) PS Love the owl too!:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2017 12:43:00 PM

- Cheryl, thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/8/2017 1:23:00 AM

An exemplary departure for you Anne-Lise, very well done...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2017 12:43:00 PM

- Charlie, thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/7/2017 9:21:00 PM

Sunshine! This is different from your usual writes, but it does give one pause for thought. Yes, we will all live and die and it's time to think of consequences of our lives. Hugs, dear one.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2017 12:42:00 PM

- Eileen, thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2017 6:42:00 PM

Deep, nightmare's are a death of sleep ,~* very good Anna-Lise .

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2017 2:34:00 AM

- Eve, thanks for the visit and nice comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/7/2017 3:08:00 PM

wow, riveting work that expresses the very core of darkness... greeat stuff, anne.. happy huggs and light!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2017 2:33:00 AM

- Glad you enjoyed it :) - Thanks for visit and your comments, Nette :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/7/2017 2:04:00 PM

Darkness is a part of our lives on this earthly realm. We must enure to later bask in the Light. Excellent dark poem, with a great message my friend..Definite seven from me.. ""A glimpse of sunlight, love, passion and hope""

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2017 2:27:00 PM

- Glad you enjoyed it :) - Thanks for visit, a 7 and your comments, Robert :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/7/2017 11:01:00 AM

Armed for a battle already won...well done Anne-Lise!! Big Hugggs...love you bunches. Deb

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2017 1:09:00 PM

- Deborah, thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/7/2017 10:37:00 AM

Very powerful stuff A-L...nice to see a different side to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2017 1:10:00 PM

- Tim, thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 3/7/2017 9:24:00 AM

This was dark and deep and beautifully written Anne-Lise. I love that graphic too, very ominous.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2017 1:11:00 PM

- Chris, thanks for the visit and lovely comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/7/2017 7:57:00 AM

Your words are dancing the dance of beauty and poetry dear, Anne-Lise! A seven my friend and many hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2017 11:26:00 AM

- Thanks, my friend Demetrios ... glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the visit a 7 and comments :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)