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Cold slice of watermelon on a hot day

A lovely aroma from a meadow with wild roses The sweetness of the summer sparkles the electrified air Warm and thirsty ~ the refreshing taste of watermelon 27-05-2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Sijo Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Heidi Sands howmanysyllables.com : 14-15-14 Honorable Mention

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James Inman

Date: 8/4/2018 8:58:00 AM

A nice sweet way to end my visit with you Anne-Lise. Where I live I can smell the aroma of orange blossoms everywhere, Magnolia trees and sweet Jasmine. The fields are filled with strawberries, tomatoes that get canned by Del Monte, blueberries and sugar cane made into sugar at the largest sugar producing plant in the world, but I'm always a little saddened when I pass the watermelon fields after the final harvest and see hundreds of watermelons rotting in the dirt.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/20/2018 12:42:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and your comment, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/13/2018 11:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this well-written and yummy Sijo! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/14/2018 3:20:00 AM

- Many thanks Susan, for your congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/3/2018 1:14:00 PM

Senses pop with your sijo!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/3/2018 1:16:00 PM

- I am grateful for it, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/3/2018 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful piece! Hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/3/2018 12:52:00 PM

- Many thanks Pandita, for your congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/2/2018 10:35:00 PM

Lovely. Congrats on your win, Sunshine.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/3/2018 6:52:00 AM

- Line, many thanks for congratulations on my winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/2/2018 1:58:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, I would rather juice it than eat it. That is the way i like my watermelon. Love and hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2018 2:00:00 PM

- Watermelon juice refreshing indeed, Darlene :) - Many thanks for visit and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett

Date: 6/2/2018 1:53:00 PM

Back with my congratulations on your well deserved win Anne-Lise. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2018 2:01:00 PM

- Many thanks Roy, for your congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2018 3:09:00 PM

dleighted to see you earn a fine win, dear anne...best congrats to you!... huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2018 9:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for your congratulations and visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/1/2018 12:11:00 PM

Ah! I'm savoring the refreshing juices right through your wonderful sijo! Enjoyable write---refreshing and nourishing too! Kudos on your placement in the contest, Anne-Lise. :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2018 9:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for your congratulations and visit, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdul Malik

Date: 6/1/2018 10:45:00 AM

Watermelon...Ha, how refreshing indeed. I like your Sijo.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/2/2018 9:13:00 AM

- Many thanks Abdul, for visit and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/1/2018 12:07:00 AM

Refreshing and well written poem Anne-Lise! Congratulations for your win. Thank you for entering my contest :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/1/2018 6:48:00 AM

- Many thanks for your congratulations and my place on your winning list, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/29/2018 5:02:00 PM

Watermelon appears to be a summer hit no matter where a person lives. They grow locally with nearly no care. Ah, you describe its luscious flavor wonderfully, Sunshine! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:20:00 PM

- In my childhood, we never saw a watermelon ... it was an unknown fruit - Many thanks Carolyn, for visit and lovely comment ... always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/29/2018 4:58:00 PM

Wonderful sijo, just the tonic for a hot day..all three lines are gems...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:16:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment ... always a pleasure to see you Harry "old friend" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/29/2018 3:31:00 PM

A lovely Sijo Anne...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:14:00 PM

- Many thanks for visit and great comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 5/29/2018 12:54:00 PM

Wonderful! Good luck in the contest, Anne- Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:14:00 PM

- Many thanks Warren, for visit and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/29/2018 3:42:00 AM

Excellent and delicious write. I love water melon juice. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:13:00 PM

- Many thanks for visit and great comment, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2018 4:50:00 PM

I adore watermelon.You are enticing me with this one!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Mmmm ... juicy and refreshing, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George

Date: 5/28/2018 3:15:00 PM

Oh! I just love watermelon. Delightful Sijo, Sunshine. Elaine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:10:00 PM

- Dear Elaine, thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2018 8:40:00 AM

ohh, i take watermelon every day; my fave fruit, anne... a sumptuous write!...happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:09:00 PM

- Watermelon is summer fruit here in Norway, Nette :) - Thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett

Date: 5/28/2018 7:17:00 AM

Beautifully written Sijo Anne-Lise, your poem and the thought of watermelon has made me salivate, a joy to read. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:08:00 PM

- Many thanks for visit and great comment, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 6:30:00 AM

Mmm watermelon is mouthwatering and a rather perfect treat for the summer. Refreshing and yummy. -JWE

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2018 1:07:00 PM

- Many thanks for great comment, JWE :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/27/2018 11:35:00 PM

I am a craving now!!!! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2018 8:21:00 AM

- Thanks, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 5/27/2018 6:59:00 PM

Thank you like Daniel I purchased some today and now I'm hungry...good luck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2018 7:35:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/27/2018 5:11:00 PM

I think I'm in love! Passion fruit! Wonderfully done and now I must go raid the fridge, Anne Lise:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2018 7:34:00 AM

- Sounds like one tickling feeling, Daniel :) - Thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/27/2018 4:14:00 PM

Excellent poetry..well written Anne-Lise..best for a win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2018 7:24:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)