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12.12.2024

Anne-Lise  Andresen 
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Christmas Poems New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

2nd place in the contest

 

Christmas is just around the corner convulsions in the stomach region Poor elves who create all the toys and Santa takes the credit Squeezing me into the bus to the nearest shopping mall Puts the body into fight or flight mode Burn some money Christmas music in the background Speakers spewing out the traditional carols over and over again My brother needs a padlock Wrapped in white soft toilet paper Christmas offering: An electric nose hair trimmer ... embarrassing Symbolic gifts The goal is not to be entertaining, but the demand is rising Christmas stress reaches undiscovered heights Hormones flood the bloodstream Writhes on the floor with stomach aches interprets the pain positively Hear the angels sing messages of peace with charisma and glimmers in the eyes December is full of forced cuddling The stockings are hanging by the fireplace Chaos with festive cheer Merry Christmas

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Date: 12/24/2024 1:43:00 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in my Christmas Poem Contest. Your poem is wonderfully penned, I loved it and your image, well done, Merry Christmas, Constance
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Date: 12/17/2024 7:50:00 AM
Anne-Lise, you describe the competing interests with such skill and flair. It's not easy to make sense out of it all, and you give us a lot to think about. Hope Christmas shopping and your experience of the holiday all goes well. It's almost over, but then it will all start anew a bit earlier than expected next year. Smiles!!
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Date: 12/15/2024 7:34:00 AM
A fantastic Christmas poem my dear poet friend Anne. Congratulations on your win and this wonderful write! I enjoyed a lot. Merry Christmas to you and your family! God bless. Hugs
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Date: 12/14/2024 9:34:00 PM
Christmas is undoubtedly a time of cheer. But it also brings in its wake some tensions of making elaborate preparations and tedious shopping. Congratulations on your great win, dear Anne. love and hugs.
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Date: 12/14/2024 3:50:00 AM
Congrats! Merry Christmas to you and your family. God bless you.
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Date: 12/13/2024 9:15:00 PM
truths are as barbed as you say dear poet. 'forced cuddling' -even the leaders of nations do.. I appreciate the tone of your verse dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Happy Christmas, Cheers (true hugs from a fan poet friend)
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Date: 12/13/2024 2:51:00 PM
Very charming poem with a lot of surprises and deep metaphors, congratulations on your contest win. And happy holidays
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Date: 12/13/2024 12:36:00 PM
I love Christmas but not all the razza matazz that is thrust in your face. 24/7. Won't be long before chocolate eggs are in the shops lol. Congratulations on your placement Anne Lise. If you've got any spare snow, send it over. Tom
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Date: 12/13/2024 10:18:00 AM
Being an old man, I only follow the commercial part of the Christmas holidays. My young grandkids love the gifts, that makes me very happy.
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Date: 12/13/2024 11:33:00 AM
- It is simply magical when children's eyes shine with Christmas joy, Jay :) - hugs
Date: 12/13/2024 5:47:00 AM
Christmas has become so commercialized and yet I feel I am on the guilty list, but only for family make notes of what they like or need during the year,oh, and of couse my haidresser and her apprentice, the neighbor, our domestic helper, the gardener, but my litte darling grand-daughter at two years old, loves books,so thats easy. Love Christmas, the obvious faith in the meaning of the word, but also the glitter. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. PS i enjoyed your poem my friend, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/13/2024 5:59:00 AM
- We have stopped buying gifts for the adults (over 18 years old) ... my husband and I don't get any gifts for Christmas ... and that's totally fine - I will buy one gift this year ... she is the youngest in the family (13 years old) - hugs
Date: 12/13/2024 5:45:00 AM
Hi Anne, Christmas is big business now days, in the UK it starts in October, the true meaning is long forgotten. xx
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Date: 12/13/2024 5:53:00 AM
- A high-volume selling season around the world, John... while many starve and die ... :( - hugs
Date: 12/12/2024 4:23:00 PM
i'm sick of it all Anne-lise - your lines about the useless gifts made me giggle - crap crap and more crap gadgets and gizmo's bur folk feel compelled to buy it. mince pies in the shops since august with a sell by date of October - it gets earlier and earlier each year:-( Bah humbug! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/13/2024 2:15:00 AM
- When Christmas starts as early as they do in the stores, you're pretty bored with the whole Christmas thing when it comes, Jan :) - hugs
Date: 12/12/2024 12:20:00 PM
Christmas is certainly not what it used to be Anne-Lise, many now dread it, we've had it on the TV and in the shops since October. Money. Money money is what it's all about now. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 12/13/2024 2:13:00 AM
- Yes, Christmas comes in September/October every year - Stores should wait until December 1st with Christmas - hugs

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