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Crows are scavengers ... they eat dog poop in my garden every day When I bring my shovel and bag they scream : ... "we want more .... more" ... ... they love it A crow will fight over a dead man's flesh But, stay away from my garden 07.06.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 7/3/2019 6:23:00 PM

Scavengers they are. Hear their loud call as they fly in and out of the dunes, looking for small birds and their eggs. I do hope you can keep them away from your garden, Anne-Lise. Read this to them, maybe they will get the message.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/9/2019 12:45:00 PM

- I will :))) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/9/2019 10:01:00 AM

Crows - ugly birds , but nevertheless necessary for the cycle of life - tell them to shoo, shoo! Hugs, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2019 1:07:00 PM

- Shoo, shoo, shoo, shoo :))) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/8/2019 1:46:00 PM

Anne, you are very smart. Never let anyone or anything destroy your Garden. Only beautiful flowers belong there. :) Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2019 2:04:00 PM

- Many thanks, Brandy ... yes, flowers like you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2019 10:03:00 AM

that ending sounded almost onimous!! ARe you hiding bodies in your garden? haha!! I really enjoyed this one!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2019 12:03:00 PM

- No, only poop from my dogs ... but crows are scavengers and eat your body with pleasure ... alive or dead, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2019 7:38:00 AM

Be warned crows!! Eeks!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2019 12:30:00 PM

- Nasty black birds, Kim :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/8/2019 5:29:00 AM

A shotgun will sort 'them' out lol. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2019 12:28:00 PM

- Thank you for your good advice, Tom :) - I will first try with an old-fashioned "scarecrow" in the shape of a human :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/7/2019 4:44:00 PM

They go for the eyes first, or if able hold a pen, write rubbish...love this poem and your poetry,,,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2019 12:21:00 PM

- A lot of rubbish, Harry :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/7/2019 2:24:00 PM

That photo evokes icky feeling..you captured it in your poem, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2019 2:44:00 PM

- Nature's comfort reminds us that life is moving, that security is a fantasy, and that we must accept the changes we face in life, Vijay :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2019 2:24:00 PM

yeuk yeuk and double yeuk lol:-) Good on you Anne-Lise more than person one can sling poop I just write it lol!:-)hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2019 2:40:00 PM

- Nature's ability to create balance is absolutely tremendous, Jan ... - Many thanks for the nice comment : "yeuk yeuk and double yeuk" :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)